Reviews For Reality's Illusion
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/09/09 - 08:47 pm · For: Why scare them with the specter of death?
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Name: Kamisori (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 - 09:40 am · For: Why scare them with the specter of death?
If I woke up and saw Itachi I'd think I was dead too. ^_^ Great story so far. Keep it up!
Author's Response: LOL that's for sure... I'll be updating the next chapter tomorrow so you can check it out.
Name: Nejisgirl (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 - 08:57 am · For: Why scare them with the specter of death?
That was awsome!! Keep going!!
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its hard to say what i would rate it right now...but so far its really good!!
Author's Response: I am definitely going to keep this up, it's surprising even to me how much I've started to enjoy writing this. Thank you for responding, I hope you keep enjoying and commenting!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 11/08/09 - 08:16 am · For: Why scare them with the specter of death?
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wow. I am very, very, very impressed with how much I honestly liked this.
First of all, your grammar is quite good, which is always a nice thing, because I dont have to read around it. When I do have to read around it, it gets annoying. So brownie points for you!
Also, the plot is AWESOME, like no joke AWESOME. The way you described her ability and her character in general was really cool. She isnt this insanely strong person that can kick Itachi's butt in one day, and she's not totally weird looking or anything like that to let others know about her ability.
All in all, fricken AMAZING and I can't wait until the next chapter!!! Update soon!!!
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Author's Response: Thank you so much for your response, this is my first piece of non-fiction I have ever written. I'm quite practiced with essays, but not stories. It is nice to receive feedback and I'm updating the next chapter tomorrow night, entitled.... THE SPIRITS DO NO HARM TO MEN. lol