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Reviews For Kokoro Uchiha

Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 22/10/09 - 03:27 pm · For: Chapter 18: Bonus chapter: Romeo and Juliet, starring Shun as Romeo and Kokoro as Juliet!
Hahahah!I see why Kokoro had to laugh.I was laughing in my head(sine it would seem weird to laugh out loud in the middle of the upstairs hallway...)the whole time.I want to see the lord of rings play.Knowing them,they'll turn that into a comedy too.I can't wait to read the next chapter!Hurry up please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! When I read stories online, I have that problem too... I have to muffle my giggles, and some escape and it sounds wierd! Hmm, should I make a Lord of The rings play?


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 20/10/09 - 11:01 pm · For: Chapter : Lady Tsunade
wow....the ch kinda feels quick in a way but not in a bad way...guess i really wanna find out wats nxt.... its a good ob tht i can defintly say with zeal!

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry. Thanks!


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 19/10/09 - 07:24 pm · For: Chapter : Lady Tsunade
Haha!Your endings are almost always funny!I really like this chapter,Rose-chan,and can't wait for the next one!Please please please hurry!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try my best!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 16/10/09 - 05:57 pm · For: Chapter 16: Sasuke's 'Dream'
very interesting chapter; i liked the vision/dream part and i cant wait to see wat will happen to her and Sasuke....

Author's Response: Thanks! :)


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 16/10/09 - 03:46 pm · For: Chapter 16: Sasuke's 'Dream'
Wow.Now that was an amazing chapter.I hope the two of them meet in person sometime soon.T-T.Poor Sasuke,thinking she's dead every day.By the way,can you read my story,Zakaru Uzumaki.I've finally gotten to the part where he's in the Forest village!

Author's Response: Thanks! ... Sorry, they'll meet, but not for a loooooong time.. Sure, I'd be happy to! Yay, thanks for updating!


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 10/10/09 - 05:20 am · For: Chapter 15: Hate, Rage, Love, Death.... Grief, Loss
Holy Freak!That was amazing,Rose-chan!I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Heh, Holy Freak, I haven't heard that one before! Rose-chan.... Hmm, that sounds nice!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 09/10/09 - 06:10 pm · For: Chapter 14: The Nightmare That is Real
wow this feels a lil rushed but very descriptive wen needed nicely done

Author's Response: Sorry about that...... Thank you!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 09/10/09 - 06:04 pm · For: Chapter 15: Hate, Rage, Love, Death.... Grief, Loss
OO okumaru died.....TT poor guy! poor kokoro and luna!!!

very describtive chapter and tht was a good battle....just wish tht oku. didnt die.....

Author's Response: I'm glad this chapter was more descriptive! Yeah, it is sad.... Kokoro is really heartbroken... But, I have a feeling you'll like the next chapter though!


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/10/09 - 02:49 pm · For: Chapter 14: The Nightmare That is Real
Wow!Great chapter!I can't wait for the next one.this story keeps me guessing.

Author's Response: Heh, Thanks


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 - 06:30 pm · For: Chapter 13: Let's Train!
ooooooo...........i wonder who is kidnapping Kokoro? awesome chapter bty i postivetily adore this story its apsalutly spendid! keep it up!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :)rnrn


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 05/10/09 - 04:45 pm · For: Chapter 13: Let's Train!
Holy crap!Kokoro's being kidnapped?Wow,that was really unexpected.Really great chapter,Rose.

Author's Response: :) Heh, thanks!


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 04/10/09 - 08:19 am · For: Chapter 12: Sasuke!
Wow.I feel really bad for Sasuke.Will he ever meet up with Kokoro?That would be a weird reunion with only one person remembering.All I know is that I really can't wait for the next chapter,so hurry up please!

Author's Response: Yeah, he will but, as i told crazykittylover, in a loooooooong time! Yeah it will be a very wierd reunion. I don't think any of you will accept what will happen!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 02/10/09 - 10:54 pm · For: Chapter 12: Sasuke!
i really feel bad for sasuke ....poor guy. but..at i hope he sees his lil sis b4 he goes trader....anywho good job on the chapter! Awesomeness!!

Author's Response: Yeah... But don't worry! They'll meet. In a looooooong time. Heh. *sweatdrop* What do you mean by trader?


Name: Katana (Signed) · Date: 02/10/09 - 08:41 am · For: Chapter 1: The Calm before the Storm
Aw, she's soooo adorable. I love the matches thing.

Author's Response: Thanks! Please read more, and I hope you like it!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 24/09/09 - 05:58 pm · For: Chapter 11 : The Prank
lolz tht was a good prank. *in background some chinese man goes that..wasss...good one..in a cheesy accent** ^^ so excellent chapter and cant wait for more! u are on a roll!

Author's Response: Thanks! so sorry i haven't updated for a while, I'll try to today! :)


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 24/09/09 - 03:50 pm · For: Chapter 11 : The Prank
Okay,first of all,the last part made me Lol.Second,I don't get why it isn't working.Third,I knew she was going to do something like that.I just knew it!

Author's Response: :) Hehe, Really?


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 - 05:45 pm · For: Chapter 10: Remembering
so....she gets a flash of the past and then loses it...tht sucks...i wonder if shell rem it. but...i cant wait to see wat the prank is..lolz

good job w/ the chapter! ^^

Author's Response: Thanks! rnHow did you like it?


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 23/09/09 - 05:31 pm · For: Chapter 10: Remembering
Okay.I already know what she's going to do,and that's a bit cruel.Anyways,I also wanted to point out Hikaru and Shindo....I think you've got the wrong manga....Plus,I was wondering if you could read my new chapters for every single one of my stories,because while you were gone,I wrote some more chapters.Plus,it was a really good chapter.Okay.Here we go with names...Again.(p.s. Thx for using my other names)

Girls:Akari,Izumi,Kohana,Tenshi,Yuki,Rin, Katana,


Boys:Karro,Tora,Sosuke,Kohaku,Haiku(not sure if that's actually a name),Taichi,Gin,Ken.

That's the best I can do right now.Sorry.

Author's Response: Hmm, I wonder what you think she's going to do.... Ok after the next chapter, tell me !rnYeha, I know about the Hikaru and Shindo, but where I went on vacation didn't have any internet connection, so I couldn't search for some names. sweat drop.... Totally sorry...rnnno, thank you for giving me those names! They were great, and I totaly loved and toatally needed them! Thx for the new names!


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 22/08/09 - 07:57 am · For: Chapter 9: Mindblending
HAHA!Very funny,Rose.I can't wait for the next chapter,even though it's not coming out for another month.

Author's Response: I'm glad you can't wait! i'll try to update soon!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 22/08/09 - 12:17 am · For: Chapter 9: Mindblending
*muffling giggles** foreign langs? nice.....good job and woe tht u'll be gone...write on thou!

Author's Response: :D thanks! Hmm, I thought I was the only one up this late... Glad you were, though, 'cuz I was able to answer your review! I'll try to write alot of chapters by the time I get back.


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 22/08/09 - 12:13 am · For: Chapter 8: The Academy, Mindtouching, and New Friends!
hehehe so she loves swordmenship eh? thts neat....i wonder thou wen or if she'll see her big bro or not....wonder how sasuke is fairing as well *sigh* good job thou

Author's Response: Yeah, I'll put something in about him soon, when i get back. Thanks! :)


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 11/08/09 - 09:29 am · For: Chapter 8: The Academy, Mindtouching, and New Friends!
That was a great chapter.I really loved it.By the way,the only reason I haven't read Frozen Tears yet is because I've been working hard on my two new stories,Never Too Late and Toshiro Uzumaki.By the way,could you read Never Too Late?

Author's Response: That's ok. Sure! ...... which one? Ok, I'm going on vacation soon, so I won't be able to update until September 25. I most likely won't be able to read your story, and i'm really sorry about that.


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 10/08/09 - 03:51 pm · For: Chapter 1: The Calm before the Storm
like I said before...or did I forget to put it....?Well,just right click and go down to 'copy image location.'Then,when you're trying to put the image location in,just press paste.By the way,after the pic,if it's not yours,thank whoever did it.Well,that's what I do because I got some email saying I needed to give the drawing some credit,so that's what I did and I haven't gotten another email from the Tonfa people.

Author's Response: ok, Thanks! :)


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 09/08/09 - 03:50 pm · For: Chapter 1: The Calm before the Storm
hey,crap,I messed up.it's not
shift coma button img src = " the pic's address"shift coma

it's
shift coma button img src = " the pic's address"shift period

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it was that when I saw it the last time. I tried it but it's not working. Argh! Ok, please tell me exactly what the picture's adress is. I don't understand. Sorry, but PLEASE HELP!!!! :)


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 08/08/09 - 08:03 am · For: Chapter 1: The Calm before the Storm
question,and please don't think I'm copying you on the second chapter,because I wasn't,but could you read my new story.It's called Toshiro Uzumaki

Author's Response: Sure, I'd love to! Oh, yea, I also wrote a new story. It's called Frozen Tears. Could you read it? :)


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