Reviews For The Legacy of a new hero
Name: Taruno (Signed) · Date: 17/11/08 - 04:18 am · For: Chapter 9-The Akatsuki strike!-V:The final fight!
*proofreading story* looks like I found an error.Where it says......no wait...I'll leave it.It's better that way. changed his last name. that's good leave that for the sequel to this story.
Name: Rourik (Signed) · Date: 14/04/08 - 05:10 pm · For: Chapter 1-Taruno
I have read Chapters 1-3, and I must say that so far you have a good plot line going on. I would like, however, to 'see what the characters are doing. In other words, try and make more description.
Author's Response: Hmm...I see where you are getting at. so what you're asking is for me to be a little more descriptive?I think I can mangae that. Thanks for the response.I'll try and be more descriptive in Chapter 4