YUKIO! Oh my gosh, I can't believe he has entered XD. I had my suspicions once I noticed the guy staying in the shadows, then he drew the sword and it's just like yup, there's my precious little killer. But still, YUKIO! Yes, I am fully aware how idiotic I am acting, but I can't help it. I just saw an oc of mine appear in a totally epic story.

The fight scene was pretty epic. I wasn't expecting Yukio to kick so much butt honestly, but that just made it seem even more awesome. Despite this Ikari did pretty well fighting back in what seemed like a nearly-one-sided fight. It was great to see his passion and fire burn so brightly here. It reinforced the will we already knew was there in a great way. Then Ikari used his own little Talk-no-Jutsu XD Yikes. They've made his list. Not the smartest of people.

You've made Ikari interested in him. If only he knew the full scale of what Yukio is up against XD. I'm curious as to if that will ever come to light since you have Ikari being curious, or if you're going to leave Yukio's situation in the dark. I definitely did not see them joining up seeing as Yukio just, well, tried to murder Ikari, but it's an awesome twist and I'm excited to see where it goes. You did a fabulous job, Itoko-san. I'm eager to read more ^.^

Author's Response: This is why I didn't wanna talk to you about Yukio :P I kinda wanted to surprise you. I'm glad you enjoyed his appearance he is a character I can work with really well. I figured since Yukio is 13th he would be able to do some serious damage. Ikari could barely fight back. I thought it would be different to instead of using fists to solve the fight, Ikari could use his words to realize that not everything is settled in battle. I also figured since Yukio despises being lied to I could use that to Ikari's advantage since they both have been betrayed. I'm looking forward to using Yukio and Ikari as a team. I'm glad you read and reviewed, thats what keeps the story going. Thank you!