Reviews For Pirates of the Mist
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/03/12 - 02:01 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
Haha I laughed at the whole Reformation with Guys team. Buuuut I cant wait to see how Sasuke preforms on this mission. Gotta keep reading
Author's Response: Yeah, I figured I would torture Kasumi by giving her Team Guy as her first day of reformation. I was quite amused while I was writing this chapter, I'll tell you that much. Oh, the epicness with Sasuke comes much later, but I'm sure it'll be worth it ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing, you're awesome!
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 23/08/11 - 11:51 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
Ooh, Sasuke and Orochimaru are getting involved now. As much as I hate him, I think Orochimaru is right: a Kasumi vs Sasuke fight would so intense!
Team Guy cracked me up! It was so funny. I felt bad for Kasumi, since she dealt with them on her first day. Haha, I can't wait to see more reformation fun! Excellent work with this!
Author's Response: Yeah, no matter how creepy Orochimaru is, he is right in saying that a Kasumi and Sasuke fight would be pretty epic ;) Well, I'm glad you liked Team Guy, though we both know that Kasumi certainly didn't XD More reformation fun is just up ahead, I hope you continue to like Kasumi's torture... uh, I mean reformation, yeah, that's it... Haha, thanks for reviewing!
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 05/08/11 - 07:28 am · For: Reformation Begins Now!
Ha, I find Kasumi's discomfort very funny to read about. To start with Team Guy on the first day of reformation... I don't know if I should laugh some more or feel bad for the Blue Tiger...
I found Neji's words very true yet still kind of mean, even for him. I could see him saying all of that in Part 1, but in Part 2, he's a bit nicer. And Lee's overly eccentric personality was not as touched upon as I think it should have been.
But I really do like how you have included Orochimaru's diabolical presence into this. It adds a nice twist to everything, even darkening the plot a bit. And with what Orochimaru says, a battle between Sasuke and Kasumi sounds like a very good battle.
As I said, Neji and Lee were a bit OOC, I guess you could say. But everything else was very interesting and well-written. Nice work.
Author's Response: Yeah, a lot of people have said the same thing when it comes to Team Guy on the first day of the reformation. Hmm, I guess Neji and Lee were OOC... I've always thought of Neji as a pompous prick, but I guess you're right in saying that he's not as mean in Part 2... And Lee, well, I realize now that I didn't talk about him at all O_O Well, at least you liked Orochimaru's appearance. That's a little reassuring to know. I'm sorry this chapter probably wasn't as good as you would have liked. Thanks for telling me what was wrong, I really appreciate it!
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 08/05/11 - 06:35 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
Lee and Might Guy on her first day - poor girl! I was giggling right the way through the first part of this chapter. It was well-written and really funny. Although it was interesting as things gradually got darker again further on - until we ended up with Sakuke and Orochimaru and a real sense of foreboding. Loved it. I do think somebody needs to re-explain the mission parameters to Neji though. He's meant to be teaching her good manners. How is he planning to do that by being rude to her? This was a great chapter - well written, as always, and extremely enjoyable. Loved it!
Author's Response: I know, I was so cruel to Kasumi to do that to her. I'm glad you found this one funny, that's what it was meant for :D And yes, I had to add some kind of depth to it, otherwise it would just be redundant. What better way to make the plot even darker than with Sasuke and Orochimaru? Neji was being rude to Kasumi in a way to break her so that she would be accepting of her life as a prisoner. Actually, thanks for pointing that out, I'll have to go put that in. Thank you for enjoying this chapter. Your reviews continue to inspire me. Thank you so much for the support!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 25/03/11 - 07:04 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
Interesting! Hmmm, I see a few possible endings..... very enjoyable plot development. And of course Guy sensei is hilarious in any case :)
Author's Response: Yay! The plot development was noticeable! Woohoo! And Guy sensei... what an interesting character :) Thanks for still reading! And thanks a lot for still reviewing!
Name: SandShinobi21 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/11 - 10:58 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
Yay yay yay!! A new chapter!! (a little late on my part but high school hates me) Anyway, yay I love this chapter! And I so saw the Gai raising his hand thing coming! Lol I feel so bad for TenTen! xD I Wonder which team is next....suspense...>.<
And OMG I WAS MENTIONED!! lol Thank you for that, it was awesome! You didn't have to. ^///^
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you loved this chapter. And don't worry, high school hates me too. Midterms are terrible XP As for which team will be next.... you'll just have to wait and see. And I gave you a shoutout because I really appreciate your love for my story. Thanks so much for favoriting my story! Thanks so much reading and thanks even more for reviewing!
Name: ForTheLuvOfRamen (Signed) · Date: 22/01/11 - 07:37 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
I love Kasumi's irritation with Neji. :D
Author's Response: Haha, yeah! I had fun writing Kasumi and Neji's little quarrels. Well, I guess they were big quarrels, weren't they? XD Thanks for reading! I'm so happy that this story is appealing to people!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/01/11 - 07:17 pm · For: Reformation Begins Now!
EXACTLY the four teams I predicted. Man oh man, I can't help but feel bad for Kasumi. I wonder how it can get any worse than team Guy. Well, unless she goes to Naruto, who, despite the fact I don't think he's bad, would probably irritate the crap out of her. Anyway, I can't wait to read more, and thanks for the two shout outs! I'm eager to see what happens if/when Sasuke and Kasumi meet. Those two attitudes colliding will NOT be good.
Author's Response: Yes! I knew that's who you thought I was thinking of.... again, did that make sense? Haha, pity was exactly what I was going for in this chapter. Good thing I nailed it. Anyways, if you think about it, things can get WAY worse for Kasumi. There are still the other three teams before the reformation cycle starts again. As for Sasuke and Kasumi... well, we'll just have to wait and see. Thanks again for joining my website! And thanks for continuing to read and review this story! Your comments always inspire and encourage me!