Reviews For Pirates of the Mist
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/03/12 - 08:46 pm · For: Waking Up In Vegas
Hmm i'm very interested to see this type of punishment go through...gotta keep reading! great chapter
Author's Response: This is where the bit of twist begins. I'm glad you kind of like it, that's so encouraging! I hope you like reading the reformation punishment! Thanks for reading and leaving a review! You're awesome!
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 23/08/11 - 11:43 pm · For: Waking Up In Vegas
Haha, Tsunade is so evil to Kasumi in this. She's awesome! Kasumi is still really cool, though I can't wait to read her reformation activities XD This was amazing, nice job!
Author's Response: Yeah, Tsunade is a bit more devious in this chapter... and possibly this story, actually. Haha, you'll definitely enjoy the reformation activities; that's when the real fun begins :D I'm glad you liked this, thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 08/08/11 - 06:45 pm · For: Waking Up In Vegas
Okay, now I understand what people meant when they said that you were one of the best on this site! This was all so good! And for one, epic twist on the fact that the captain was a girl. It was all so deadly. Also, don't beat yourself up over fight scenes. They actually weren't half bad! Loved this! Can't wait untill I can read this again in the morning!
Author's Response: *stars in eyes* People say I'm one of the best? Really? I'm... I'm so honored... Thank you very much! *bows repeatedly* I truly appreciate your praise. Heehee, yes, the captain is a girl. That was planned from the start, as I've always wanted to see a kick-butt female pirate captain. Deadly, eh? Coolio! Phew, I'm glad my fight scenes were decent, as I'm always worried that I can't transfer my thoughts into writing. I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you so, so, so much for having interest in my story. I highly appreciate it, you have no idea! Haha, well, I guess good night then! No worries, this story will be here when you come back. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this story, I'm so happy right now! Thanks again, you're awesome!
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 05/08/11 - 06:59 am · For: Waking Up In Vegas
Heehee, I found it a bit ironic that Kasumi told Ibiki not to be cocky, when in fact, Kasumi is probably one of the cockiest bad guys I've ever read about. I don't know if that's a good thing, but it is very entertaining and highly amusing.
I really like how you hint at her past, it leaves a sense of mystery about her character. I'm interested to see how you tie it all in...
The description with this was amazing. It was a great improvement to your earlier chapters. The time you took to talk about the prison scene and Kasumi's reaction to it was wonderful. It was very well-written, nice job.
Reformation, huh? I like it! The pirates/Naruto stories that exist are usually the same, as it's either the typical pirate adventure or a Pirates of the Caribbean crossover. But I like how you're changing it up. Reformation seems highly original, and I can't wait to see the four teams that Kasumi will have to deal with ;)
Now I must read more :D
Author's Response: Hmm, Kasumi's cockiness is really that memorable? Ah, as you said, I wonder if that is a good thing... But at least it entertains you :D Yeah, Kasumi has a complicated past; don't worry, it'll tie in... eventually... I hope... Hooray for improvement! I'm glad my writing has gotten better. Hehe, I'm glad you like the reformation idea. I'm always worried to hear the feedback on that particular idea, as it's so unusual that I'm worried people will hate it. But I'm glad you're enjoying the originality of this. Thank you so much for your kind words, they are so wonderful to read!
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 04/05/11 - 10:06 am · For: Waking Up In Vegas
I liked the description in this. You give a very detailed sense of what's happen around the characters. I think you've actually developed and improved your style from the earlier chapters, giving it a much nicer flow and much more polished feeling that I must admit I really like. You really sound like an author here (and you were good before). You keep the reader's feelings moving along with your main character - as I read I can really take in and absorb her experiences and feelings throughout the chapter and you reflected those changing moods well in your writing. This was a really nice piece of writing. I think perhaps even one of your best yet. I loved it and please keep up the good work!
Author's Response: *sniffle* Oh my goodness... You just made me cry. I'm not even kidding. Seriously, you really made me feel good. I'm so thrilled to hear that I improved in my writing style. And you said I sound like an author. No one's ever actually said that, so thank you. You really know how to make a girl feel good about herself, especially since my life pretty much sucks right now. I feel even prouder about this chapter because you say it is one of my best yet. Thank you so much for the kind review, I appreciate your feedback a lot. Thank you for reading and thank you even more for reviewing with such wonderful thoughts! You're amazing!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 25/03/11 - 06:45 pm · For: Waking Up In Vegas
Interesting. I liked it. I have no idea were it goes from here.... I have theories, but Ill just have to read the next chapter right away to find out for sure. She feels like a character that a lot of work went into. WHatever happens, I hope there's still some Naruto corniness in store ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm unpredictable like that. Then again, I've been told that I am pretty predictable, so who knows? I can't release any information to you on what could possibly happen next, so you'll just have to read to find out! Kasumi really did take a lot of work. There's a lot to her that is slowly being uncovered to the readers. As for Naruto corniness... eh, read to find out ;D Thanks for reading and thanks a bunch for reviewing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/01/11 - 05:19 am · For: Waking Up In Vegas
Oh crap. If these four teams are the ones I'm thinking of, Kasumi is going to get a MAJOR headache. Anyway, amazing story, and thanks for reviewing Cursed Saint. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Author's Response: I think I know who you're thinking of for the teams that I'm thinking of.... if that made sense.... Thanks for the review. I'm so glad that you continue to read and review this story. And I really like your story, Cursed Saint, so of course I'm going to review it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: SandShinobi21 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/11 - 12:47 pm · For: Waking Up In Vegas
I LOVE THIS! Very good story, you did well with the OC characters! (I Can say this, cause I already love them! xD)
This, so far, is awesome! I Love pirates, and naruto so this is like a kick butt story for me! Please update soon, I'm in suspense right now!
Author's Response: Omg! New fan! Hurray! I'm super happy that you like this story. I'm really glad that you love the OC characters. It really encourages me to know that someone likes my characters. I also love pirates (obviously XD), so I'm happy to know that there are people who enjoy this story. I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully it'll be updated soon. Thank you so much for your positive feedback! Satisfied fans really encourage me to keep writing. Thanks so much for reading and thanks a bunch for reviewing!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 30/12/10 - 03:28 pm · For: Waking Up In Vegas
I love where this story is headed, i really do. The ANBU headquarters is so realistic. You used detail so well. I love the idea of 'reformation'. Tsunade has a bit of a different personality than in the anime/manga, a bit more...diabolical. I love it. You did a great job on Ibiki (i don't know i personally have a hard time writing about him...might just be me though...) Great job in general and keep up the terrific work.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the speedy review! I'm so glad you really love this story. I worked really hard on the interrogation and prison scenes, so I'm glad you noticed the details. I wanted to take a different approach to the punishment, rather than the same old boring 'let's throw the criminal in jail' type of thing. So reformation seemed like an interesting thing to write about. Yeah, I think Tsunade is a tad OOC. But after seeing her in the anime/manga, I depict her as the type of person who chooses to do things differently, hence the diabolicalness and her idea for reformation. I'm surprised that you think Ibiki turned out well, considering I have difficulties writing scary/serious characters. But I'm glad that he seemed accurate to you. I'm super happy that you enjoy this story. Thanks so much for your kind words! You really make me happy when you show my stories support. Thanks for reading and thanks even more for reviewing! Happy New Year!