Reviews For Pirates of the Mist
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/03/12 - 08:29 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
Whoa...that was an intense fight, i really dont know the correct words to describe it. Awesome! that was awesome! I cant wait to read this!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I was a bit worried about that fight, action scenes aren't my best. But I'm so happy to hear that you liked it! Thank you so much for the awesome review, I really appreciate it!
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 01/10/11 - 07:29 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
I'm not sure how S class these goons are, but I like it! Haha the pirate leader is a girl, that's a funny joke.
I think that there could have been more dialogue between the pirates and ninja to make the fight more personal and build a rivalry, in anime they always love to pause and banter about crap. I really think your strength in fics is dialogue and not action.
Shino should have turned the entire landscape into kikaichu and blotted out the sun with them. nazenara, he is a boss.
The original and interesting plot really carries me through this fic.
Author's Response: My gosh... I can't believe you still like this. This has really kept you interest? O_O I'm surprised. I've always wanted a female pirate captain, hence, the Blue Tiger of the Mist. It's funny, Battle Stadium was posted to help authors, myself included, improve on battle scenes. That's when I realized I liked dialogue better than action. So yes, I strongly agree with the fact that my action sucks. *shakes head* Sorry, no Shino action right now... Gosh, I'm so happy you like this story so far. I feel so accomplished now :D Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 23/08/11 - 11:33 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
Best... battle... ever! The captain is so cool, and her abilities were awesome! The fight was just incredible, I really liked it. It was definitely amazing. Excellent chapter, it was my favorite so far!
Author's Response: Haha, I guess this battle made up for the lack of action in the last chapter, huh? I'm really glad you liked the fight, since I think I have trouble making them flow just right. But this is your favorite? Yay! I'm so happy you liked it so much! I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks a bunch for reading and reviewing, you're amazing!
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 04/08/11 - 09:30 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
This was an amazing battle scene! Everything seemed to flow right into the next. The action was intense, and the pirates really showed how fierce they truly are.
And wow, the Blue Tiger of the Mist is a girl?! Haha, didn't see that coming, though I will commend you on having a female pirate captain. That rarely ever happens, and it was a nice twist. It was also quite amusing (though I should have seen this coming) that she was the Naruto gang's age.
Anyways, as I said, great battle scene. I loved the captain's abilities, as it added to her powerful self and strategic mind.
I really enjoyed this chapter. Now I'm excited to read more!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked this! Especially the battle scene, as I was afraid it was choppy or didn't make sense. Good to know it actually worked :D Hehe, yup, the Blue Tiger's a girl. I had that planned from the beginning, as I've always wanted to see a kick-butt girl pirate captain. I'm super happy that you liked this chapter. Thank you so much for your encouragement! You're amazing!
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 03/05/11 - 06:22 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
Wow! This was a fantastic chapter. This was full of nice description and the action was awesome! The fight-scenes were incredible - everything just played out so well.. It was like reading a proper Naruto episode. All the jutsu were really well thought out. It was amazing! And - yes - the plot twists were awesome. You kept me fascinated the whole way through. Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I'm so happy! This was such a positive review. Thank you for liking the action and fight scenes. I'm so flattered to hear that you thought it was like a real Naruto episode. And I'm glad to hear you liked the plot twists. I'm quite proud of those myself. I'm very excited that you enjoyed this chapter, it makes me feel great to know that my readers enjoy my stories! Thank you so much for continuing to read this, and thank you even more for continuing to review it! You're awesome!
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 25/03/11 - 06:13 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
Now THAT was an unexpected plot twist! A girl....v ery interesting! And I loved the battle, with the Kekkei Genkai and the intelligently conducted finale attack by Kakashi. I wonder what happens next :)
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I'm a very big fan of feminine power. And you never ever see a female captain, so I figured why not? I had always planned for the captain to be a girl. I'm glad that you enjoyed the battle scene, I always have trouble with them. I hope you continue to enjoy this story! Thanks for continuing to read and thanks a lot for reviewing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/01/11 - 05:35 am · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
Kakashi should learn to trust his instincts better. He was one hundred percent right. I can't wait to read more of your story. It's an awesome story, always beating my expectations. I absolutely love your story. I can't wait to see what happens to the captain in now that she's in Konoha. Keep up the AMAZING work.
Author's Response: Yeah, Kakashi does need to listen to that voice inside his head. What a shame... You have no idea how much I appreciate your reviews for this story. Your kind words and praise really make my day and make me want to update sooner! I'm glad this story is meeting your every expectation. It really makes me happy to see that people enjoy themselves when they read my story. It's very encouraging. I hope the next chapter is to your liking. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 - 08:44 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
I'm really interested in this story, it really picked up in the third chapter and the last one really peaked my interest...of course the captain's jutsu's though we like the water bending abilities of Avatar, which was an interesting twist.
Anyways, I'm planning to continue reading this story so please keep writing!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Get it out ASAP please!
Author's Response: Cool, I'm glad that you were intrigued by this story. Yeah, I guess it was a bit of a slow start, but I'm happy that you were still interested once things got moving. Yes, I'm aware that the captain's jutsu was similar to Avatar... please don't hate me for it! I had always planned to make the captain's chakra type water, and I thought the jutsu would be easier to use with a kekkei genkai like that. Don't worry, I'll try not to copy the show. I will take no credit for anything that doesn't belong to me. I'm super excited that you want to continue reading this! I'll try to hurry with the next chapter :)
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 - 02:33 pm · For: Rematch! Pirates versus Ninjas!
Ok,i commend you. Why in our stereotypical world does the villain have to be male?n Thank you for having a female antagonist. You did a great job with the battle scene(s). You tied it together naturally, as you should have. Love the story, and please update soon.
Author's Response: Yes! Thank you so much for your understanding of my strange thoughts. The minute I thought of this story, I had the idea to make a female captain because you never ever see that at all! I'm glad that you found that my battle scene(s) were well-written, because I hate writing those. I always feel that I'm not writing enough, but I'm happy that you thought that the action scenes flowed. School starts up next week :( But I'll try to update as soon as possible anyway. Thanks for your review; it made my day :D