Reviews For Heaven Is Nothing Without You
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 12:09 pm · For: Heaven Is Nothing Without You
So... no Choji/Ino details at all, huh? Next thing we know 'topless', 'his hand on her left breast'...
Moving on. I enjoyed this. I felt your writing could have used a bit more expansion to create a better flow, but otherwise it was quite an enjoyable little idea and you managed to make it quite funny.