Reviews For Into the Microwave
Name: Katana (Signed) · Date: 24/02/10 - 11:49 am · For: And the Adventure Begins
And I thought you were a caring person. I was wrong.
Author's Response: well im not
Name: Katana (Signed) · Date: 22/02/10 - 05:50 pm · For: And the Adventure Begins
OMIGOD!!!!!!!!!! I found another fic where Kakashi is Sakura's DAD! I'm sooooooooooo HAPPY! I'm not alone in this world!
Author's Response:♥NO ONE CARES HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA IM EVIL!♥
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 17/02/10 - 06:06 pm · For: Kimiko's... shopping spree?
.....SHORT! X3 thats her revenge lolz!
Author's Response: it will continue kaminari is very vengeful ninja melon:YOU DIDNT ANSWER ME DO YOU LIKE NINJAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HI. Ninja Ally: Don't worry, she doesn't do crack that often. Wait a moment? Where's Katana? *several crashes* Never mind. I don't wanna know.
Name: Katana (Signed) · Date: 12/02/10 - 09:18 pm · For: And the Adventure Begins
I TOLD you I knew how to put all three names!
Author's Response: no one cares
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 12/02/10 - 06:12 pm · For: Kaminari's Adventure
randomness and the adoption?? im curious what she gets out of that and what her game is ....and if Itachi could catch her....
lolz and keep up the randomness
Author's Response:Ninja Ally: She gets more out of it than you think:) Ninja Melon: I Heart Ninjas! Katana:God Help Us. Kaminari: HE WILL NEVER CATCH ME! THE CLOAK IS MINE! MINE I TELL YOU! Ninja Melon: Do you heart ninjas?
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 09/02/10 - 07:20 pm · For: And the Adventure Begins
good job but...i would think that kakashi would have a pair to stand up to her// lolz
Author's Response: Even the strongest ninja has his weak points. He's afraid, very very afraid. This is melody we are talking about,(ayane) She could scare the crap outa Orochimaru. Come to think of it...*ponders* Oh, that is good material....yes...:D
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 05/02/10 - 12:05 pm · For: The Treaty
:) Funny, gosh, funny.
Itachi looked down at the plans, and his face paled. “Run, little brother, run. Cling to your pathetic life if you want to live.”
I especially liked that part.
Hahhaaha! I'll give up Icha Icha if you make me! I liked that part too.
This chater was funny! Me like!
Author's Response: Ninja Ally: The Itachi part was my idea:D So was the Icha Icha part. I'm just a genious of funny things. *preens.* Katana: I posted two more chapter on my story Into the Legend. ninja melon: This is Into the Microwave, not your story! Who cares about that!
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 05/02/10 - 12:00 pm · For: Exhibit
I don't hate it because it's hilarious. Even though the humor is wierd, I laughed my head off.
Then I put it back on...
It's just, it whould be rated R because it has some things that make me imagine wierd things. (I banged my head against a wall, I din't puke... I think I caused myself to lose some brain cells... :) Not that I have many... ^^ )
And what I meant about spacing more was that, it'd be easier, in my opinion, if you spaced more. Like, for example, see below;
instead of this
“Oh?” Ayane asked. “You’re not a fan girl? Exhibit A,” She pointed at Kaminari dramatically, “You’re curled in Itachi’s arms!”
“Oh, yeah? Well, Exhibit B: You’re holding hands with an unwilling Kakashi!” Kaminari snapped back.
“Exhibit C: I’ll kill you in your sleep!” Ayane screamed.
“Exhibit D: Let’s all just go home,” Kimiko deadpanned.
“Exhibit E: You’re the dumb bitch that dumped the microwave in the river! Now we can’t get any reception!” Kaminari yelled. Her hand flung out of the cloak, a finger pointed ominously at Kimiko.
“Exhibit F: The Hokage is here, so why don’t you just shut up and listen to what she has to say!”
“Exhibit H: Why are we speaking in Exhibits?” Kakashi asked.
spcing will make it like this in my opinion, easier to read...
“Oh?” Ayane asked. “You’re not a fan girl? Exhibit A,” She pointed at Kaminari dramatically, “You’re curled in Itachi’s arms!”
“Oh, yeah? Well, Exhibit B: You’re holding hands with an unwilling Kakashi!” Kaminari snapped back.
“Exhibit C: I’ll kill you in your sleep!” Ayane screamed.
“Exhibit D: Let’s all just go home,” Kimiko deadpanned.
“Exhibit E: You’re the dumb bitch that dumped the microwave in the river! Now we can’t get any reception!” Kaminari yelled. Her hand flung out of the cloak, a finger pointed ominously at Kimiko.
“Exhibit F: The Hokage is here, so why don’t you just shut up and listen to what she has to say!”
“Exhibit H: Why are we speaking in Exhibits?” Kakashi asked.
I like your story, except for the wierd parts....
And I cleaned the puke using my cat's tail...
Just kidding.. :)
Author's Response: Ninja Ally: you think you're short of brain cells? No one has less than Kyle. ninja melon: Yeah, he thought Egypt was in Canada. NOT KIDDING! Katana: At all. He's geologically challenged. ninja melon: Whose you're least favorite character? Ninja Ally: Umm...be ready for more weird parts. --' ninja melon: Be Ready. Katana: We'll work on the spacing. ninja melon: clean off your cats tail, and get ready for more puking^^ You're cynical. I like that.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 04/02/10 - 06:06 pm · For: The Treaty
...lov the twist...lolz on Sasuke being a fanboy XD im curious what Kaminari will do and why Kakashi is so scared of Ayane.
anyhow good job and keep it up!
Author's Response: well we're glad you love our twists:D Sasuke being a fanboy is important to the future plot. Kimiko is displeased with us. Kaminari is a random person, but where ever the cloak goes she is not far behind. Kakashi being afraid of Ayane because he's afraid she'll rape him.rnrnrnrnrn.... which could happen, come to think to it.rnrnNinja Melon: Hey! He was willing enough!
Name: immortal (Signed) · Date: 04/02/10 - 01:37 pm · For: The Treaty
nice, and i'm not ocd... and you left out a word in the third line and you're mean and i didn't use your story and mine's names in the same sentence, i used a pronoun for yours!!! so ha!!!! i win!!!! and i'm a ninja!!!! more of one than you!!!! hahahaha!!!!!
-nick
P.S. hahahahahahahahaha!!!!
Author's Response: ninja melon:sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo you think your more ninja than us i propose a ninja duel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!rnninja Ally: let the best ninja win!rnninja melon:of course im going to win!rnkatana.......rnninja Ally:nick burn in hell!
Name: Katana (Signed) · Date: 04/02/10 - 08:55 am · For: Exhibit
Whoops. We missed Exhibit G. oh well
Author's Response: Good I hate G he so pretentious!!!!!
Name: immortal (Signed) · Date: 03/02/10 - 05:50 pm · For: Exhibit
meanies, you skipped "Exhibit G:"... now the letter 'G' hates you all otherwise, great story, it even compares in insanity to the ever ellusive 'Save the Queen' which i've not posted anywhere yet... but i'll get to it
-Nick
P.S. chapter two was only slightly creepy... *cough*reallycreepy*cough*
Author's Response: Ninja Ally: Well, that's embarresen. rnNinja Melon: Oh well, who cares. Exept for you, but your obsessive compulsive about that. rnNinja Ally: Ours is better than 'Save the Queen' don't put our story down by putting them in the same sentence. Chapter Two was amazing! So bahumbag on you!rnKatana: ....
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 02/02/10 - 07:13 pm · For: Exhibit
I'm just reviewwing fro the heck of it.... After reading the first part, I barfed all over my computer.
Do people actually DO THAT?
I cannot say I like this story.
But I won't say I hate it.
I'll just say that it should be rated R.
And that you should space more.
Author's Response: How did you clean it up?rnum. I don't think so, we're just messed up like that.rnOkay, why don't you like it/hate it?rnWe suppose we should rate it R, but when we started we didn't know where we we're going with it.rnWe do not understand about spacing more?
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 02/02/10 - 07:09 pm · For: Akatsuki
My eyes popped out.
0.0
Author's Response: story of our lives:D
Author's Response: story of our lives:D
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 02/02/10 - 07:08 pm · For: And the Adventure Begins
Scary things happen when teenagers get bored... :)
I laughed.
Author's Response: yup! We're having fun. Lots of fun.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 28/01/10 - 08:06 pm · For: Exhibit
pocky...X3 wat kind i wonder...i wonder wat the treaty is and exhibit thing was amusing, the chapter in over made me chuckle. keep it up!
Author's Response: Ninja Ally(alyssa): Of course it was pocky! What did you think it was?^^rnninja melon(melody): The exhibit thing was MY idea.rnNinja Ally: getting a bit cocky mel.rnninja melon: Exhibit A: it's not cocky when it's true.rnNinja Ally: --'
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 - 05:05 pm · For: Akatsuki
A few seconds later, Itachi heard sucking sounds. The rest of the Akatsuki looked at him as his eyes widened, a gasp escaping from his lips. Even Ayane tore her eyes away from Kakashi as a moan sounded from the pair.
XD Xo my mind totally went into pervert mode at that....I hope shes doing something else than wat im thinking....X3
anyhow the characters are so wack and OCC but, its funny and amusing so i wont burn you. I like that she summoned a king talking burrito...very random. I would think Itachi would've kicked Kaminari out of his cloak on the dot but, who cares its cute/amusing! Sasuke being a cutting emo, and Kisame a nervous guy around crying women...can see these coming and wonder what next?! I fearfully and excited about the next chapter for you got the power!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You'll see what she's doing in the next chapter. We have lots of tricks up our sleeves, so try not to predict what will happen next. Seriously, you won't guess. Anyhoo, thanks again for the reviews, and thanks for not burning us.
Name: Anoniamous (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 - 02:22 pm · For: Akatsuki
O_o Oh wow, what is she doing in there?!
Please write the next chapter soon so I can find out!
Author's Response: you'll have to wait and find out. Thank you for reviewing. The next chapter is coming soon.
Name: Anoniamous (Signed) · Date: 25/01/10 - 12:26 pm · For: And the Adventure Begins
Wow! That was hilarious!
I could not stop laughing, please continue! :D
Author's Response: Oh, we will. It gets better. Trust us.
Name: Ninja Ally (Signed) · Date: 24/01/10 - 08:21 pm · For: And the Adventure Begins
jessica here, alyssa's cuz. Melody. You're a burrito. You're a horrible person! A cannible!
not.
Author's Response: thx
Name: Katana (Signed) · Date: 22/01/10 - 03:07 pm · For: And the Adventure Begins
Yayz! We got our first review! They love us! Hell to the yeah!
Author's Response: shut up
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 21/01/10 - 08:24 pm · For: And the Adventure Begins
“If we’re in the Naruto world, I’m changing my name to Kimiko. Damn straight I am a ruling child! I’m a noble, dammit!”
“If you get to be Kimiko, I get to be Kaminari. I’m as loud as thunder, bitches.” Alyssa exclaimed. Tera/Kimiko and Alyssa/Kaminari looked back at Melody, then at each other. “Yeah, she’s Ayane,” they said together. “This is ironic, because I know from personal experiences that she can’t keep a melody.”
Melody/Ayane ran to catch up, then stopped. “Oh my God! That’s Ichiruka’s Ramen Shop! We’re in the Naruto world!” she screeched.
“Didn’t I just say that?” Kimiko mumbled darkly.
Kaminari smiled, “Yep, and now we’re off to see the emo, the wonderful emo of Konoha! Because, because, because, because, because of the wonderful microwave he has!”
“We’re from the Village of Your Mom,” Ayane responded.
Kimiko joined the banter easily, “And our headbands are in Uranus?”
“Just like your head,” Ayane finished triumphantly.
I want pocky,” Kaminari stared at one of the figures.
ROFL!! this is one of the most clever things I've read in randomness crossovers. it started out funny and completely random, all the punch lines (or what ever you call them) were LOL and i just could not stop laughing at her overactive imagenation. its a thumbs up from ME!
Author's Response: Congrats! You're our first reviewer! Random is our name and writing is our game:D Trust us, it gets better. Thanks for the review, hope you stay tuned. Let the burritos live on!
Name: Ninja Ally (Signed) · Date: 21/01/10 - 11:06 am · For: And the Adventure Begins
Wooooo! We are amazing! *does a funky dance:D
Author's Response: your a whore