Name: feyman (Signed) · Date: 19/03/10 - 01:50 am · For: The Returning Heart
pretty good sequel overall, still felt a little bit rushed and could have had a lot more detail, but it was good.
Name: feyman (Signed) · Date: 19/03/10 - 12:58 am · For: Taking A Chance
very nice story, maybe a little short and rushed relationships, could have extended it. personally would prefer more naru/saku as well
Name: KibaxHinaluvr (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 - 07:46 pm · For: Searching For Home
I can't read it just yet (I'm about to watch a movie with my family) but I just wanted to let you know that I'm going to read it.
Thanks for updating! ^^
Author's Response: =) no problemo... i know it's been a silly amount of time since i last started updating.rnnew chapters soon =D
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 08/04/09 - 11:37 am · For: Searching For Home
awwwwww ichiru and akane are just SO cute!!!!
:P
hope u update soon!
Author's Response: =Drnthanks so much for reviewing... and yes, they really are cute aren't they >.
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 - 07:31 am · For: Searching For Home
I know what you mean; it's a busy time of year. Don't worry, I'll be patient, and thank you for updating at all! The last chapter/part of a chapter was brilliant, I really liked all the action in it.
Author's Response: thanks a lot! i'm glad you'rea ll being patient. bless you! yay! *jumps around* xxx
Name: KibaxHinaluvr (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 - 03:24 pm · For: Searching For Home
arg. insert love in between 'thoroughly' and 'this'. I really need to look over these things before i post them -.-
:) peace!
Author's Response: hehe, i got that! and i do the same all the time =S
Name: KibaxHinaluvr (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 - 03:23 pm · For: Searching For Home
its all good in the neighborhood! :) Life gets to all of us sometimes, after all, we are all but human. Because of the fact that we all thoroughly this series and just your writing, we will happily wait.
good luck milliexchan!
Author's Response: thankyou! i will try to get the next part up soon. i think this writer's block will wear off eventually =)
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 - 10:36 pm · For: Searching For Home
I must say, you have done a fantastic job on this whole series. Your plot line is very interesting, and has drawn me in. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep up the good work. :p
Author's Response: thankyou very much! i may not be able to update for a while, lots going on, but I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far =)
Name: Kari (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/07 - 03:39 pm · For: Searching For Home
It's pretty good, a little short, but pretty good.
Author's Response: yeah, i just thought i had to add some more. but everyone knows it's been a while since i've been able to get online. sorry guys =S i promise a whole new chapter soon... its nearly the end =(
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 - 06:38 pm · For: Searching For Home
Yeah, I'm fine :)
Good to see you back on, I thought for a second that you'd disappeared into obscurity without a by-your-leave. Glad to see that isn't the case. I hope you'll keep on writing, as you have a truly wonderful mind and you express it well in your work.
Author's Response: thanks. i never know how to react to compliments, i'm famously bad at accepting them. I will try to get the next part of the chapter up soon, i just have a lot going on in my life (boys, work, money). it all seems to be coming at once!!! but hopefully, i'll get more than a few minutes on the computer next time, and be able to update. =D
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 - 11:12 pm · For: Searching For Home
Whoa. This is going to be epic, I can feel it!
Firstly, good job with the fic. I never cease to be enthralled with your work :)
Secondly, I am truly sorry it has taken me so long to read your work again, but I have had a lot of things going on in my life these days, and most leisure time is taken with my own fic (thanks for following, while we're on the topic).
The only reason I have been able to catch up is because I can't do anything else today. I got into a fistfight with three of my friends last night and I'm just living the pain off :)
But don't worry, I will endeavour to make time to read your work, as you are probably my favourite author on this site, and maybe on any site I have visited. Again, good work :)
Author's Response: thanks a lot TTM, it does mean so much that you like my work! i haven't been able to update for a while, i've been horribly busy. fistfight? =S hope you're alright?
Name: Jon K. (Anonymous) · Date: 20/08/07 - 09:44 pm · For: The Returning Heart
Excellent! Good grammer and punctuation, and a very good story as well. The best Fanfic I've seen on this site so far, and I really look forward to more from you. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! It's nice to know people are enjoying my stuff =D
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 12:30 am · For: Searching For Home
Wow, tense... I really liked how he could sense the chakra almost as emotions. I'm also really interested to see how strong Izanami is (and why she's so strong). I thought it was a little weird that such a young team should have such an important mission!
Author's Response: thanks, and thankyou so much for your ongoing support. sorry for the lack of updates, havent really had a chance to get online. hoping to get the net set up at home asap, so then i'll be able to update more often =)
Name: KibaxHinaluvr (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 - 02:24 pm · For: Searching For Home
Yay!!! climax, climax, i smell a climax! xD i feel so jumpy right now. thanks for updating!!! I love this story so much, and i'm just jittering in my seat for the next chappie, thinking, OOOO, is izanami going to kill Kiba, Hinata, Sasuke, and Neji!? I hope not... Is she going to go crazy and kill Ichiru on accident before getting him to Kabuto???????? I hope not!
good work milliexchan!
Author's Response: thanks so much! i haven't been able to get online for a while, and am in a bit of a rush at the moment, so it might be a while til the next update, but i'm glad it's still enjoyable =D
Name: KibaxHinaluvr (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 - 05:11 pm · For: Searching For Home
oh. my. gosh. Kin! no! now they're going after Ichiru! NO! and then Haru... and the akane and ichiru... and aiko... and kin... :( this is so wonderfully depressing, and like niveaus said, this is probably the lowest point in the story, and i'm excited for the next chappies!!
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-- milliexchan : i'm excited too...i'm really happy with the way this story's turning out, and i absolutely love that other people are enjoying it too! =D
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 - 02:35 pm · For: Searching For Home
Great chapter, really enjoyed it! Hmm, I don't know what else to say, but I'm happy you updated already! Looking forward to the next one...
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-- milliexchan : thanks for continuing to read... lol, its okay not knowing what to say, just as long as i know you're still enjoying it. let me know if its getting too depressing =S
Name: KibaxHinaluvr (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 08:38 pm · For: Searching For Home
oh no!! aiko and kin. DEAD!? NO!!!! *finally breaks down and is crying hysterically* no!!! :`( *grabs kleenex* this is so beatifully sad, wonderfully written. amazing.
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-- milliexchan : i know, the deaths were really hard to write tbh. =( but its okay, there will be a happy ending, i promise =D
Name: KibaxHinaluvr (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 08:26 pm · For: Searching For Home
AH!!!! AH!!!!! AH!!!!! just one more time. AH!!!!!! there are so many things going on right now i don't know which way to turn! Hoshi is dead! Kin just got knocked out by Kabuto! AH!!!!! absolutely terrific work on this chappie. great, great, writing.
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-- milliexchan : thankyou so much! i'm glad you're still reading it =D
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 - 02:56 pm · For: Searching For Home
Maybe there's something wrong with me, but I actually really like how they're all dying... It adds a lot of realism, and balances out the fluff. This chapter wasn't one I enjoyed reading the most, but I think it's one of the best.
Kabuto has to go after Ichiru now, doesn't he...
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-- milliexchan : But does Kabuto even know about Ichiru...? You'll have to wait and see *evil laugh*... yeah, it's been a bit sad for me to kill off my own characters, but i feel it adds to the story, and its all tying in with past chapters and the last story too. >.<
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 30/07/07 - 10:50 pm · For: Searching For Home
Sorry to double up on reviews, but I forgot something *blushes and scratches back of head apologetically*
I really like your character Izanami-chan! Very fresh if I do say so...
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-- milliexchan : Thanks! I was thinking about what would come up in the next chapter, and she just sort of strolled into my mind and became Izanami-chan! Don't worry about doubling reveiews, it always makes me happy to get them *grin*
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 30/07/07 - 12:31 am · For: Searching For Home
I've been meaning to catch up for a while, but I'm currently at my brother's house down the coast.
Very good work... not trying to sound like a sadistic person but I like your portrayal of how everything has turned for the worse. Again I find myself enveloped in your writings, and I hope you don't stop soon :D
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-- milliexchan : Thanks so much. I'm really looking forward to your next story! And I'm not planning on stopping too soon, i feel bad for my own characters, just killing them off like this! Mostly my stories hav happy endings, so i think i'll try to keep it that way =D
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 28/07/07 - 03:00 pm · For: Searching For Home
Wow, these are some really sad chapters. On the bright side, since this is more or less the lowest point in the story so far, I think I can look forward to many more chapters! Thanks for updating so quickly!
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-- milliexchan : thats okay (my parents have gone on holiday, so i have free reign of their house and the internet, yay for me!)yeah, these chapters have been a little gloomy. but things will perk up, they always do! thanks for your continued support! wow, i have 40 reviews. i think my aim will be 50 =O
Name: KibaxHinaluvr (Signed) · Date: 26/07/07 - 02:54 pm · For: Searching For Home
aww that is so sad!! *cries, holding a Kleenex box* I loved this chapter. The sadder chapters are what balence the story, right? *blows nose loudly*
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-- milliexchan : *pats head* it'll all be okay! since when did my stories not have happy endings? =D
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 26/07/07 - 02:33 pm · For: The Returning Heart
Ah. Excellent work, as usual. I'm quite impressed. I love happy endings.
The overall storyline was very well-conceived, and the plot development was done nicely as well. Good job. I'm sure the sequel to this is just as good as this, if not better.
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-- milliexchan : thankyou so much =D i worked hard on this story, but i've put even more effort into the next one, so you should definately read it!! x
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 26/07/07 - 12:10 pm · For: Searching For Home
Yay, I'm glad you updated! I loved the ending, Akane reminded me a bit of her mother.
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-- milliexchan : Yeah, i see Akane as quite similar to Hinata, though with a litle more willpower (from her dad!) and a stubborn temper. Again, sorry the chapter was so short. Hopefully I can write another today.
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