Reviews For a ninja poem.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 07/05/16 - 01:42 am · For: Chapter 1
I like the middle poem for it speaks volumes of the world that those children unfortunately lived in. I like the rhyme and rhythm as well. Overall, it was well written. The first one was okay but I feel that it could've been explored more and could have been less free verse. Still fine for what it is. I don't have any statement to say to the last one; I feel that you had a good start with it but leaving it to the reviewer seems odd. I'd love to see what you have to say to finish the poem