Imagining Sasuke doing repeat cartwheels around a room while Rayne just questioningly raises her eyebrow is the best thing that I have imagined in days. Thanks for that Shann, now I am going to imaging him screaming ‘weeeeeeeeeeeeee’ for weeks. He is crazy enough; I don’t need to imagine all kinds more of crazy. 0.o
I think I know why he says Hn so much. I don’t think Sasuke knows how to socialise like a normal human being. Kinda like Sai. So whenever someone says or does something that he just kinda stares blankly at without understanding, he just says Hn to make it look like he gets it. That way he seems aloof and mysterious while secretly being a door knob.
Kay, if I was Rayne and had accidentally divulged his name and such a bipolar and senile old lady was like “I won’t tell anyone honey~” I’d be like….yeah I need to get out of here now. >.> Funny enough, I think Hikari and Rayne might have very easily made the same mistake here so it makes me giggle. They are so much alike. I bet ranch dressing is their favourite.
Ran…ra…r….
RANCH DRESSING.
Sorry, had it get it out of my system. I saw that tumblr post again you tagged me in with the hidden valley ranch and now I can’t stop laughing. I am also almost out of the ranch you sent me for Christmas. :/
ANYWHO. BACK TO TEH STORY.
That argument with Rokobi was fantastic. I loved the whole restraining aspect and the heat and intensity. I love that they argued like that. It was great to see some drama. I’m a drama whore after all. :P
“…can I ask your favourite colour?” Slams bowl. Spills soup. Rawrs like dragon. “WHY COULDN’T YOU STAY DEAD, RAYNE!??!” Yeah Sasuke, I get it. Everyone hates that question. Everyone reacts like that to the colour question.
But in all serious, I am digging this scene. I love how the subtle things he is recalling are making him so uncomfortable. Just everything here is so well executed. I think you’re back into your groove. This is making me want to write. But this would only induce drama for me in super and I already have some very dramatic chapters planned next, so I better not increase it. If it is overwhelming I will tell my readers to blame you though. :D
I am going to go ahead to take this out of context. But I am pretty sure you stole from me. Bah, I am kidding. But yeah, take a look at this baby…“You had to pin me under a table and throw me against the wall to tell me that?!” I am like dying here. You harped into me so much for that when I did it. Like sure, he actually kind of forcefully shoved Hikari into the wall behind her and then chidori’d the spot next to her head, but for all intents and purposes he did it to Rayne too. >.> *Pulls sunglasses off dramatically.* Finally justified.
I WANT MOAR. I WANT TO WRITE MY STORY NOW. HOW. DARE. YOU.

Oh my goodness. I just recently read both stories again, and was so sad when this ended abruptly.
I didn't think you'd come back. This is so much more than I could have hoped for. Thankyou so much! I feel your pain for school, I've been beat up by university for a year and a half now. I'm so tired. You are completely forgiven :) The tension between Rayne and Rokobi hurts my heart so much. And that old woman is CRAZY. Anyways, it was a really nice chapter. Thanks again! I look forward to reading more when you get a chance to update again!

Review to the Chapter Notes: That was funny I was literally laughing out loud! Caesar salad is an abomination to this story!