Reviews For Reverse This Curse
Name: JeTi (Anonymous) · Date: 08/01/14 - 04:26 pm · For: Bike Scene
please update!!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry!! ): I'm working on it now!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/13 - 10:11 am · For: Bike Scene
so he did save her. i really thought he wouldt :p
standing out side just to see rayne fall flat on her face, way to go XD.
well, i thought he would have trid to kiss her, i duno, just kinda had that feeling near the end of the chapter...
going back to kohona to see the compound? soo not good. *enter warning music*
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/11/13 - 03:42 pm · For: Bike Scene
think this is the first time you've taken my advice to update soon :P but god damn did I love it. I will admit that sasuke was a little ooc but in a good way. Sometimes characters need to be broken from their roles based on the way others interact with them, in this case, Rayne. In one of my stories I completely rearranged sasuke as he became older and well I liked it because that's the true human part, the ability to change. So what I'm getting at is that you portray human nature very well and that's something I can appreciate as a writer (though I feel like I can barely call myself one). Everyone thinks you have to abide by keeping a character in character but I think it's perfectly fine to break away from those roles. I was very surprised at the ending, sasuke wanting to go back to Konoha with Rayne. Well update soon and happy thanksgiving
Name: Karnia (Anonymous) · Date: 28/11/13 - 02:32 pm · For: Bike Scene
“She was underneath a tree…okay.” I laughed so hard to that, I don’t know why, but I could just picture Rayne’s face of confusion.
Sasuke is standing around shirtless, huh? It’s like he planned this moment. I will stand right here when she wakes up and be shirtless so I can make an entrance. What an attention whore he is. :P Stop giving in to him Rayne! Stop questioning it, you’re only letting him get the attention he wants! Remind me to show you the secret Uchiha powers comic. You’ll laugh.
I really like Sasuke explaining his actions to her, it feels very like him…but I think he’s being a tad too open with her. But Rayne’s reactions to his thoughts were sooooo funny. Shove his face in the fire, girl! DO IT. DO YOURSELF A FAVOUR. GO BE WITH IZUMO.
LOL SHE SAID IZUMO. SHE SAID IT. OMG, I CAN’T BELIEVE SHE BROUGHT THAT UP WHEN I WAS JUST YELLING AT HER TO GO BE WITH HIM.
However, I do have to point out that I don’t think Itachi was aware that Tobi was Obito; I don’t think he ever even really knew Obito. I think he was genuinely under the impression he was Madara because Itachi had nothing to compare him to. He never knew Obito and her certainly never new Madara, so I think he actually believed Obito’s lie. Like everyone else. Don’t even get me started on how much I hate that plot line…you know I do, you know I will explode.
The point where Sasuke is being remorseful, I feel he should be angry too. Because despite missing all of those people, he’s mad that they never knew what Itachi did and that they lived in the peace he sacrificed his entire life for. He hates them for it as much as he misses them. I think you’re missing a key part of Sasuke’s character and I feel there should be more tension in parts of this chapter, especially when he is talking about the people from Konoha.
AND NOW I WANT TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER.