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Reviews For Reverse This Curse

Name: Karnia (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/13 - 12:24 pm · For: The Memory
So did he Chidori her through the chest or the stomach? I keep reading two different things throughout this new story. Not that it’s overly important, I am just wondering. XD Also, isn’t Sasuke blindfolded right now? When he got the eyes, his eyes were covered so they could heal with a blindfold. He doesn’t remove it until right before he joins the war.
Oh shut up both of you! We all know you fucking love each other. Gosh! XD I am waiting for Sasuke to do something stupid or dickish to be honest, because he isn’t the nicest of people right now. To be honest, I was a tad disappointed with his reaction to her. Knowing Sasuke, he’d be frankly pissed that she allowed him to think he killed her because it had tortured him so much. Sasuke often thinks about how everyone affects him, so yeah.


Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 26/03/13 - 09:00 am · For: The Memory
Interesting...rayne doesn't know how she feels. I wonder how there fight will turn out.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/03/13 - 04:47 pm · For: The Memory
Reverse This Curse Review

Two things. One, I thought Sasuke didn't truly get Itachi's eyes until during the war. Has the war already started or something? Second thing, I really don't think Itachi knew Madara was Obito, and he never told Sasuke, so I am dubious that his name should be mentioned before Kakashi discovers it. Although it is natural to us, nobody but Madara really knew who he was. But I may be wrong, so......

Now, I've found I love listening to the songs you choose just to see what you may have been thinking and how it relates. As I'm sure you know, The Memory goes very well with how Sasuke must feel inside, even if he's in denial and all that.

I'm glad I started reading Inuyasha now. If/When you post an Inuyasha fanfiction, I can actually read it. Which I'm glad for because I don't want to miss anything you write. I also recently watched episode 1 of Samurai Champloo, and I was amazed by the fight scenes. They're just so......... Just absolutely wow. I'm sure it'll be great, too, though I need to finish watching it.

*sigh* So envious of your spectacular drawing abilities.

Sasuke sure is in denial. First he tries to cut the ties he even had in a way by getting rid of his eyes and then claims he doesn't care. He does realize he just acted against his claim, right? =P Plus, we readers cheated and know he does care because of Karin XD. Plus, he kept the bracelet, just like Rayne kept the necklace. I think they're unintentionally keeping themselves attached. Though I did smile for some reason reading about the bracelet......

Haha. I love Rayne's "greeting". First she beats him up, then she acts so nonchalant. So like her ^_^. I enjoyed the twenty question game. It answered any question we may have had, and it, to me, also allowed us to see Sasuke better in this..... State? Would that be the right word? Disgruntled maybe? I can't think of the word =_=. You know what I mean, though (I think). It was also fun to see the reactions he gave from what he learned, though mostly small things.

Hm..... Quick question that I may just be forgetting - why couldn't she just return to Kumo? Why did she have to fake her death?

Sasuke - always so fair. About ten questions for three *rolls eyes*. I applaud Rayne. She always asks the questions I want answered. Now whenever she punched him again (if she does during the fight) this fic will already more than satisfy me ^_^.

He seriously needs some sense knocked into him. Every time he says a word about destroying Konoha for Itachi I want to slap him a billion times in the face. He died to protect Konoha. Logical conclusion? Destroy it...... =_=...... Yet I still love the idiot. I blame Kina (character from Never Too Late, my SasuOc story).

Another fight. These always end well. By that, I mean someone is either physically or mentally messed up, which can be a good thing because Sasuke's messed up would mean fixed. Strange logic, but it makes sense ^_^.

Great chapter, Tink-chan. Sorry it took me sooo long to review. I'm glad I finally got to it, though. I really hope Rayne knocks some sense into Sasuke. I look forward to more fabulousness, Tink-chan, whenever you get to it ^_^.

Author's Response: Sasuke gets his eyes transplanted like RIGHT before the war is starting. Then he's gone for like 40 chapters and we see him walking in the rain confronting people and being like, yo, I got me some new eyes, lets fight. Yeah, the whole Itachi knowing who Obito is/was is something that I've struggled with. I've talked to Karnia about it a lot, and all in all, I don't really think he knew him. I might go back and edit at some point (I know I won't) to fix it. I'm glad you listen to the songs when you read! That was my intention in using the song titles for chapter titles xD Why did she fake her death? Rayne wanted to cut all ties from the village and worked it out with Tsunade so she could be taken back to Kumogakure, no strings attached. She was hurt, so she wanted to leave everyone, and every memory of Sasuke, behind by leaving. She also wanted to escape from everything that happened to her while in Konoha, and forget about it. Which doesn't really work :P


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/13 - 07:44 pm · For: The Memory
O_O Oh my...

I was so surprised to see that this chapter was with Sasuke, and then I was even more surprised when Rayne showed up :O

I wish Sasuke was at least a little more surprised upon seeing Rayne, wished he questioned her more about why he was alive. But he really doesn't care?! I don't believe that~

And now they're gonna fight... Because the last one went so well -_- What is gonna happen?! I need to know~ Please update soon so I can see what happens next~

Author's Response: Whoo! An unexpected turn of events! I didn't want Sasuke to be too surprised since he's supposed to be a careless jackass at this point. Hence why he's in denial, telling himself he doesn't care ;P Violence is obviously the answer to everything, kids. I'll update soon! I will!! Thank you (: Xoxo~


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 06/03/13 - 02:44 pm · For: The Memory
you and you're beautiful artwok ^_^

POST THEM POST THEM POST THEM!

so... rayne just wants to talk? so it all comes down to this. what will happen in the next chapter? ONLY TINK KNOWS THE ANSWER! RAYNE VS. SASUKE. PLACE YOUR BETS!

Author's Response: Thank you =u= And I'm assuming the "post them," is for what I wrote on the chapter notes? Thank you for your feedback! Lol.

Well, she wanted to talk to him to see how he was now that everything has happened... Now she's prepared to carry out what Itachi asked of her. To fight Sasuke and save him from himself.. by surrender, or through death? THE WORLD MAY NEVER KNOW! (Yes you will)


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/13 - 10:50 pm · For: The Memory
you lurve her sasuke! haha

Author's Response: He's clearly in denial >_>


Name: almostambient (Signed) · Date: 05/03/13 - 10:19 pm · For: The Memory
Everything about this is so so so so so perfect. It runs so smoothly and I don't think this chapter could have come up at a better time. Every chapter of this story is so flawless! This definitely wasn't how I pictured Rayne and Sasuke's meeting; it was so much better.

When I saw you posted I literally squealed and I'm pretty sure I scared just about every member of my family, but that's nothing new. I always flip out when I see you updated. :) Can't wait to see the shit that's about to go down between Rayne and Sasuke! Excellent work as always!

Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that since I was so stumped while writing x~x

I was looking forward to their meeting again so much myself xD I totally smiled like an idiot while writing. I'm glad you squealed; it's the power of youth! Er.. young adulthood..? :D HELL YEAH SHIT'S ABOUT TA GO DOWN!! Thank you! Xoxo~


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/03/13 - 07:53 pm · For: The Memory
Absolutely amazing. The development was so pure and detailed and the feelings and everything. It's almost too much to explain. The meeting was so sudden too. Some might say it was too sudden but I think it was perfect - just like this whole story. I'll be looking for the next update.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you :D I really went for Sasuke's emo-tions here (LOOK AT THAT! A PUN!) I didn't want to tip toe around the time line and make filler chapters, hence the quick meeting. Rayne wants to get down to business! Thanks again(: Xoxoxo!


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