Reviews For Reverse This Curse
Name: Karnia (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/13 - 12:08 pm · For: Topeka
Smooth Itachi…smooth. Visit Rayne while she bathing, conveniently while she has no weapons or supplies to defend herself. I could see Itachi doing something bold like this. XD
Itachi was thirteen when he killed the Uchiha, just to let you know. Unless you were making him older on purpose, you said he was fifteen when he started to hear about the rebellion.
I KNEW ITACHI WAS GOING TO SAY HER EYES WERE LIKE HIS MOM’S. I knew it! I love being right. XD I liked this chapter, but am waiting to see if Itachi was being too hopeful. Helping Sasuke out of darkness is going to be a borderline impossible task. Good luck, Rayne.
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 26/02/13 - 11:47 am · For: Topeka
I need more! I went through seven hours of school to read this and it's a cliff hanger! Update sooooon!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm sorry xD I finally updated. I'm sorry for the wait xoxo~
Name: Zakuro Vargas (Anonymous) · Date: 25/02/13 - 03:23 pm · For: Topeka
please update this freakin awesome story! :D
Author's Response: Done! Sorry it took so long ): Xoxo~
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/02/13 - 01:57 pm · For: Topeka
What.... The..... MY FLIPPIN' REVIEW WAS DELETED!!!!! GAH - Not fair T_T. Now I have to do it all over again. *sigh* Here it goes.
First off, the mistakes. Well, there was only one big mistake, but it bugged me twice. It was the Obito thing. To begin with, he just randomly started using it. Would he have explained to Rayne who it was? Otherwise you'd think she was confused. Secondly, Obito was the one who attacked Minato, and if Itachi already knew about Obito, wouldn't he know the truth behind the Kyuubi attack as well?
Random note: I didn't realize Reverse This Curse was a song until I went to look up this story in the url bar and it showed up Reverse This Curse lyrics. Actually I'm listening to it now just to see what it is. Quite fitting, Tink-chan. Is it for Sasuke, or did you connect it to Rayne? I can kinda see it going for both.
Haha. I know I already commented on this picture, but I still absolutely love it XD. And the name just makes me laugh more. Amazing job at drawing the scene.
I really enjoyed the little look you gave us into what happened with the Rokobi after Rayne's "death" and also showed us that strong connection between the two of them again. I wonder if Naruto and Kyuubi will ever achieve that.......
And then Itachi comes in with such a brilliant statement from Rayne *laughs again, imagining scene*. He was right, though, about her not attacking because of being in a bath. I think few women would.... Though for some reason I could imagine Tsunade doing it..... It was interesting seeing how Rayne reacted, slowly transitioning from fearing Kisame was going to appear to actually sitting down with Itachi to listen to what he has to say. Though he is the better Uchiha right now *sticks tongue out at evil Sasuke, though hoping very much sense is beaten into this idiot*
I think you did a mind blowing job in the following scene. Although much of it was repeated from what has been read in the manga, the way you portrayed Itachi and his feelings was what really hit me. It's why he's my favorite now instead of Obito. Well, Obito never really could beat Itachi, but he was close enough to be tied. Then he turned out to be the bad guy and it's like.... EVIL BACKSTABBER!!!! Then again, that's how Obito must feel.........
This was a spectacular chapter with great emotion behind it. I really loved where he questioned Rayne's feelings for Sasuke and then told her how Sasuke was, what he felt, etc., just like I did when Karin explained everything. It makes me really want to hug Sasuke. It's why I can't help but love him despite him being a word I cannot say. And you know, the logic with the hate thing is really starting to interest me while I read this. It shows just how strong Itachi is he didn't go all hateful after he lost his family, because even if he killed them, I'm sure he had to love them.
I also loved the last paragraph. It's just... I dunno. Again, another deeper look into his mind. Now I really want him to be back to life T_T. Itachi, why did you have to die?
Even if I really want to read more of this story, I understand on your waiting and will wait patiently like a good little follower.
Author's Response: I didn't want Itachi to explain everything to Rayne in this chapter. After this meeting, they're supposed to be together for half a year training, so there will be plenty of time for him to explain things...and for them to get close (; Wink. WINK. WINK. WIIIIIINKYFAAAAACE.
Yes! I love "Reverse This Curse." From the moment I heard it, I pictured Rayne and Sasuke in my head. Every chapter in this story are songs that remind me of them. It does pertain to both of them, but leans more toward Sasuke... "To die is to live in her head," is almost reversed for Sasuke, since Rayne was "dead" and he couldn't forget his memories of her. "You've got something to prove, and nothing to lose," Sasuke wants to take revenge for his clan, and no longer has anything to lose because he lost Rayne. "This goes out to the ones that fall in love, and to the girl that filled my dark," Sasuke's been in darkness all his life, and Rayne was the one who filled it (: I'm glad you listened to it and picked up on everything!
I know T^T I love Itachi so much as a character. Kishimoto's writing for him is just so well done. Thank you for such a great review. I know I'm late with this response because I haven't really been on TONFA, but reading this really did make me smile (as usual with you) (: Xoxo!~
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 15/02/13 - 04:56 am · For: Topeka
you could print it out and eat it, but it would taste like paper :P
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 14/02/13 - 06:47 pm · For: Topeka
nice pic!
you would put in a bath scene :P
... Itachi saw rayne naked O_O only you!
wasn't that Obito who fought Minato, given that he's the one with intangability? Madara uses Suseno'o and the Rinegan mostly.
were you going to mension that Naruto has Shisui's eye already, or did I remind you XP
>.< gunna have to be anal and point out that Mikoto Uchiha's eyes, both in the Manga and Anime, are BLACK
and you have managed to suprise me. for that you can have a cookie
Author's Response: I did mention that Naruto has Shisui's eye. And yes, I know her eyes are black. It isn't the color that reminds Itachi of his mothers eyes - it's what's inside them. Thanks for the cookie! I was surprised to see that :3 Wish I could print it out and eat it
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/02/13 - 01:22 pm · For: Topeka
I always love seeing Itachi's thoughts on the massacre, the history, and his brother. It was heartwarming to say the least. With this flashback it let us, the readers, know the deep bond Itachi and Rayne are going to share. Here it starts. It's about to get a whole lot interesting. Amazing chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, this is where everything gets better ;D thank you!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/13 - 01:35 pm · For: Topeka
I almost wasn't sure when this chapter had occurred, took me a few minutes to realize it was in the past. XP My whoopsie.
I really liked this chapter though, the little interaction between Itachi and Rayne was really good. They have a bit of history and I liked the tension easing into understanding and everything. I'm a little curious as to how Itachi knows about the love-to-hate thing relating to the Sharingan, since it was the Second Hokage that we all learned it from. I do like that Itachi wanted to train Rayne though, you've tied up a lot of a questions in this chapter that I really like. Nice job on this chapter, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I mentioned it was in the past in the Author's Notes. I guess no one does read them xD lol
Well, I figure that the Second hokage came before Itachi and knew all that. The discovery was probably passed down.. But I decided to include it because, hey, why not? He's supposed to pass all of his knowledge to Rayne. This is definitely one of my personal favorite chapters (: Thank you!
Name: almostambient (Signed) · Date: 13/02/13 - 09:22 am · For: Topeka
I was so excited when I logged in today and saw that you updated! I'm obsessed with your story. It's so well written and follows the plot so closely, and that seems to be getting harder and harder to find lately. Excellent work! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ahhh, reading that gave me the biggest grin :) Seeing such a nice compliment when I woke up was a great start to my day. I'm happy you like it so much! I already wrote half of the next chapter, so it shouldn't be up too long from now. Thank you, much love! Xoxo~