Reviews For Reverse This Curse
Name: Karnia (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/13 - 11:20 am · For: Black Dahlia
Wow, you did great characterising Itachi just through the little flash back sentence. Reading that, I KNEW right away it was Itachi saying it. It was really well thought out. Itachi has a certain way of wording things that you really captured there. I also like how you’re showing that Naruto actually knows a lot about Sasuke and even his relationship with Rayne. A lot of people do this stupid thing where Naruto is quite often dense about connections, but I think quite often he had some wisdom in that head.
How does Rayne know it’s Obito? I am pretty sure Itachi didn’t know…just saying? Who told her? Did Obito tell her himself? I am a tad confused.
I don’t picture Sasuke telling Karin all of that. To be honest, he had always treated her like trash, and I mean trash. The guy sacrificed her to kill Danzo and laser-sworded her without a second thought. He never responded to her flirting and he barely made conversation with her. She was just a tool, so I don’t see him telling her all that. I could see him telling Suigetsu though, for some reason. I always picture them with an odd relationship as kind of friends. And I also get the hint that Suigetsu understand Sasuke more then he thinks. So maybe if Karin overheard Sasuke telling him? I don’t know. It just feels off that Sasuke told her all of that.
Name: Fem! Gilbert Beilschimdt (Anonymous) · Date: 12/02/13 - 08:22 pm · For: Black Dahlia
Ze awesome me vants you to update! >:D
Author's Response: I'm sorry! It will be up soon!!!
Name: Zakuro Vargas (Anonymous) · Date: 03/02/13 - 09:55 pm · For: Black Dahlia
Updaaaaaaaate! :)
Author's Response: I'm working on it! I'm sorry, I'll explain in the Author's Notes when I post the next chapter ;m;
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/01/13 - 11:43 am · For: Black Dahlia
Um...... Would it be bad if I said I don't remember making any request? >_>. I really like the picture, and I need to get to commenting on it at Deviantart.
I really enjoyed the first scene. It really started to set up a bit of how Rayne feels. I kinda wish we could see some scenes between her and Itachi. There relationship was always interesting, and then we get hints of what happened, such as their discussions. It's very intriguing. I like seeing the parallel (I think this is the right word) between what Itachi did with Rayne and what he did with Naruto. Both of them have been entrusted with his will, though as you find out later, Naruto is giving it mostly to Rayne.
And then the meeting..... 0.0. I was waiting for the Naruto and Sasuke thing to see how she would react to the announcement that when they fought, one of them would die. But instead she stopped them. And then Sasuke..... I definitely wasn't expecting that reaction, that it most definitely makes sense. And then Sakura and Kakashi. I can see Kakashi being him, but maybe a bit more shock from Sakura. It was pretty good, though maybe a bit more at the beginning?
I am waiting very patiently for their next meeting. Seeing as right now he was mostly in shock and fear, I can't wait until he actually gets a hold of himself. That'll be interesting. As is.... Wow, Karin, I love you right then for telling us this stuff, but hate you for being what you were calling Rayne. It was really heart wrenching to find out what had been in Sasuke's heart this entire time, but it also makes me even more excited for the meeting between Rayne and Sasuke. Wow..... Now he knows she's alive. Will that hurt more or bring happiness? I can't tell with the dark state he's in. And whenever they have their first conversation. Gosh, I can't wait for more. But for what you have, I absolutely loved it.
And then Naruto...... I really enjoyed that. He can really be deep for someone everyone sees as an idiot. That's one of the most lovable things about him. I love the blond duffus XD.
Great chapter, Tink-chan. Other than the occasional mistake grammar wise, it was epic perfection.
Author's Response: It wasn't a request, more a suggestion. In one of your comments on dA you said you'd be interested in asking me about a banner for Cursed Saint.
Don't worry, the Rayne and Itachi scene(s) are coming, but at a particular time. It's hard for me to contain myself because I love writing them together so much. I want everything (the feelings, the conversations, the underlying themes, how Rayne is related to everyone, etc.) to be revealed over time because it makes reading more exciting. I like making you ask questions, because you always come back to answer them :D
Silverwolf said the same thing about Sakura's reaction, and I might go in and make it stronger. It proved to be difficult; I'm not really sure why. It was crucial to have Rayne come between Naruto and Sasuke for that reason. Naruto didn't forsee either of them dying in a fight against one another..so ;) WINKY FACE. It was also important to me to have the way Sasuke was feeling over the past three years discussed. Rayne is feeling very torn about what she wants to do, is she going after Sasuke just for Itachi, or is she going after him because she wants to save him? Giving her a little bit to go off of is what makes her decide to pursue him at the end of the chapter... I think I might write a guide for this story so I can talk about everything I'm doing that's important to the plot. I just might do that, because it's something I actually praise myself for xD
Pardon my grammar mistakes. Spell check has been working against me since the middle of HTAO ;__; ~Xoxo!
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 21/01/13 - 10:19 am · For: Black Dahlia
amazing chapter! I don't think I've ever seen such a perfect portrayal of karin *is laughing helplessly*
Interesting the way you've woven canon and "How to Adapt And Overcome" together in everyone's motivations.
is Rayne going to fall for Naruto?! *is laughing uncontrolably* you should totaly do that!
Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to nail her (LOL) character as well as I could. I'm happy everything's coming together well ^_^ Thank you. Nuooo! Well, maybe. I'll see how badly I can troll you guys ;D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/13 - 03:52 pm · For: Black Dahlia
Darn it, Sasuke! I was waiting for this epic reunion between Rayne and Sasuke, and all that he did was ignore eye contact T_T Darn you!
I guess I could picture Kakashi and Sakura reacting a little more outrageously upon Rayne's sudden resurrection, but that's just really hard to capture sometimes I guess. Especially since they were already preoccupied with Sasuke.
Oh, I reread the last chapter and saw the scene you rewrote. I like that one much better :3 Nicely done.
I also really loved the part where Karin shared what Sasuke has been thinking while on Team Hebi. I wonder if it's OOC of him to share personal stuff like that with Karin, but I still really liked what she said just because we got to see an inside look at Sasuke's thoughts of Rayne over the time skip and such.
Very nice chapter, Tink! I really enjoyed this one. Looking forward to more, as always :D
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it (: I like the revision myself.
It could be considered OOC, but I go off of his past self when it comes to Rayne. Since she was someone he let in and allowed to get hurt, being the one that hurt her, it makes him more sentimental over the fact. We have to know he still cares! Right? .. >u> Thank you! I will deliver more soon! :D Xoxo~
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/01/13 - 08:50 am · For: Black Dahlia
Wow that chapter was absolutely amazing. The whole reunion was just gut wrenching at least on Sasuke's part. I can tell his whole psychological make up crumbled in an instant and now he's confused beyond belief. What was he really thinking? What is he going to do now? So many questions. And Karin being dumb as usual lol.
Oh don't worry about the banner take as much time as you need honestly. I don't wanna rush you :P
So great great chapter. I really can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Wanna know a fun fact? I wrote their reunion in February 2011. When I say I've been planning a long time, I mean a loooong time. Damaging Sasuke's mental psyche is important; gotta knock some sense into the guy! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter where she seeks him out. Karin was meant to be a trigger for Rayne. I'm not really sure if I got that across, but basically Karin was supposed to give Rayne the push she needed because she was having doubts about Sasuke's feelings.
NO! You asked me first, so your request is going to be done first! End of story; I'm getting my ass in gear and doing it D:<
Thank you for reviewing(: I can't wait to see how I write what's in my head xD XOxo~
Name: almostambient (Signed) · Date: 18/01/13 - 09:48 pm · For: Black Dahlia
I absolutely love your story and the new chapter! I'm always checking back to see if you've updated because I'm so excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D I'm sorry I disappoint you so often when I don't update; I'm trying to get back on writing track ^^;; I'm happy you enjoy this story; thank you much for reading & reviewing~ Xoxo
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/13 - 07:28 pm · For: Black Dahlia
gasp!! how dare she! i hope karin dies in a pit of boiling lava laced in burning firecrackers and oil
Author's Response: Yeah, I still don't like her c: