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Reviews For Reverse This Curse

Name: Dontreply (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/13 - 11:01 pm · For: Walk
Hmmm, I haven't read the prequel since this story's banner caught my eye first.
First of all, do you know what a "Mary-sue" is? You should search it up. Oh you know, she's just a 16 year girl that happens to control the 6-tailed beast (as if the original host never existed) AND is considered "kage-level" AND is raised by the Raikage and his brother AND is in the special ops AND is loved by everybody AND just happens to have some cool looking outfit that looks more like some punk look than ninja look. Was it also mentioned she can use medical jutsus?! And is supposed to save the world alongside with Naruto. I cringed when reading all that and seeing how overpowered she is just makes it utterly boring. I just wanted to find a decent story but according to people, this is the best there is. This may sound harsh but think about it.

Author's Response: Well then clearly you have to find another story that lives up to your standards. Better yet, why don't you write one yourself. While I'd say I appreciate the constructive criticism, your sarcastic banter has no effect on me, or the direction of my story. Sorry, but not sorry (: Good luck searching for that perfect fic.


Name: Karnia (Anonymous) · Date: 07/04/13 - 10:26 pm · For: Walk
So, she is wearing what I assume to be Itachi’s necklace? I wonder what that means. I can’t wait to see how Rayne has grown! I liked the chapter, but don’t really have enough to say to leave a long review. I need to get more into the story to leave those. I can’t wait to see how Sasuke and Rayne meet up though! I am all excited about it.


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 05/01/13 - 11:49 pm · For: Walk
too lazy to wait for my phone to load the lastest chapter to put this review. so yea.. lazy mode activate. you should TOTALLY troll us! lol she should go with naruto XD he deserves a girl since saku is a boobless alien that loves a chicken assed fathead lol. (and i think naruto should get laid before sasuke *nudge nudge* lol)

Author's Response: I read on my phone, too! :D I didn't even think about trolling, but I must say, it does sound veeeerrryyy tempting xD I can only imagine the burn reviews I'd get, along with a knock at my door from an outraged fan OxO ..Your ability to be blunt is truly comedic xD I'll see what I can do to get some for Naruto. I'll see what I can do xD


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/12/12 - 10:39 am · For: Walk
Well, as I've already told you, I absolutely love the picture. It's really amazing, and Rayne will definitely make sure the Uchiha's cannot resist, as you said.

Has anyone told you you're evil? Because you are. You so totally are. I mean, seriously, are you trying to fry my brain with questions? It's just not fair. Leaving so many cliffhangers. I hate getting a taste of my own medicine T_T. For starters, is that Itachi's necklace she's wearing? I just noticed it when I enlarged the pictures. What mystery is she wanting to reveal? How is she alive? And where is Killer Bee's stuffed unicorn (don't ask, just had to add in something random)?

This was a really good, thought provoking chapter. Definitely, as you said, a cliffhanger chapter. It was nice to see Rayne interact with A since we didn't see too too much on that in HTAO. Also how close she is with Bee. Haha. More Rayne humor. I missed that. I also loved her speech to Rokubi about her purpose and will of fire.

Well, only one more chapter to read. Hopefully I'll get some answers *pointed look*.


Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 16/12/12 - 12:10 am · For: Walk
That was fucking awesome! I can't wait till the next chappie! Rayne looks awesome 2. I also have a feeling naruto will either squeeze the god damn life outta her or he'll bash her brains in 4 leaving him...I pick the first 1. Well I'm gonna crash now :P bye 4 now


Name: Cwille (Signed) · Date: 12/12/12 - 03:31 pm · For: Walk
[insert appriciative wissle here!] I love the new character design for rayne, I don't really see the resemblance to Haruhi, unless you think any girl with brown hair looks like haruhi XD! also I STILL have no idea what's going on!

this message braught to you by Robot Monkey Dishwashers from Outer Space (RMDOS)

Author's Response: I'm so glad everyone thinks she's hot xD Bahaha.. Good! You're meant to be confused!!

Robot Monkey Dishwashers from Outer Space thanks you for your support. They will one day rule the kitchen world as #1 cleansing device for the future. Everything is going according to plan


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/12/12 - 07:14 pm · For: Walk
That was an awesome chapter! Can't wait for the party and Rayne's departure! Everything about this story is going to be so amazing

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope it lives up to your expectations ;u;


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 09/12/12 - 11:58 am · For: Walk
now I feel retarded, I just realized why rayne's new character design looked so farmiliar, she resembles Haruhi Suzumiya somewhat!

Author's Response: The only resemblance I see is to the Haruhi that Kyon meets in the Disappearance movie. I see where you're coming from slightly


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 09/12/12 - 11:55 am · For: Walk
I'm going to go out on a limb now and say that Itachi gave rayne Shisui's eye instead of naruto. good to know I'm not the only one who thought rayne's new look is hot.

Author's Response: I actually didn't think about including Shisui's eye... I think I'm just going to keep that with Naruto. He wound up using it to stop that reanimation jutsu during the war, and since I'm not currently sure that Rayne will be present when that happens, I'm just going to leave that be. It's okay to be attracted to fictional characters. It happens. No judgement. Lmao


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/12 - 08:37 pm · For: Walk
Well, first off... My jaw dropped when I saw that picture. It's so frigging gorgeous! I love her new look!

All these questions you keep bringing into my head... This isn't fair~ I have no idea what's going on. I still don't know how she's alive! And wow, how much has happened since she was... resurrected, is that even what happened to her? Adopted by A, she's Kage level, she looks amazing, has a great life in Kumo, and now she's headed back to Konoha? Why did she wait so long to decide to convince A she should go, is it just because she saw Sasuke? So many questions~

I really liked this update and the lovely picture to go with it. Great work on both!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love it too @u@ !!!! Bahahah..even you didn't catch my subtle hint as to why she chose now to leave for Konoha >______> I'll never tell. Ever... Actually, I will. In the next chapter ;P I'm glad you have so many questions! I can't wait for your jaw to drop when they're all answer (; Thank you~ Xoxo


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/12 - 05:13 pm · For: Walk
woah! way to go rayne! she looks hot XD just saying haha. and awesome! go girl! go girl!

Author's Response: Purrrr I know ;) Sasuke can't resist her now! Lmao~


Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 08/12/12 - 11:55 am · For: Walk
nice picture! really well done! Looks like there's a new adventure! I think you may just have prooved quille's point though

Author's Response: Why thank you :D As per the point.. I have my reasons >_> If Rayne captured him immediately, we wouldn't have a story, would we?


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