Reviews For Reverse This Curse
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/15 - 10:10 am · For: Dead Man Walking
Meant to say the necklace that Sasuke gave her not Itachi
Name: Anonymous (Signed) · Date: 15/10/14 - 10:11 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
I feel like you're just trying to copy Karnia. Stealing ocs from other people is really unattractive.
Author's Response: I am. 8 years ago when I was 12 Kishimoto-san descended from mangaka heaven and told me that I was going to become a carbon copy of someone in a different country, whose existance I had no knowledge of. He would continue to communicate with me throughout the years until he finally united Karnia and I to form the dynamic, procrastinating, unmotivated fan fiction duo we are today. Rayne and Hikari are actually one being, one being so powerful that Kishi couldn't contain her in the manga , having to leave her out because she was too fantabulous. He then split this character in two, granting Karnia and I each with a persona. We continue to communicate with Kishi to this day, writing different story lines that were alternatives for the main plot if he had used his original character. We know everything there is to know about Naruto.
P.S. The ramen guy is the real villain.
Name: Orion (Signed) · Date: 28/09/14 - 01:08 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
Just read through this story and the prequel. I absolutely love it! This is one of my favorite Sasuske stories I've ever read. Great job!I love the connection between Rayne and Naruto and the complicated relationship between Rayne and Sasuske. I also thought it was really cool how Itatchi trained Rayne. Hope you continue it, I can't wait to read more.
Name: Superfan 1 (Anonymous) · Date: 29/05/14 - 01:34 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
Hope you update soon, I really want to know what happens Next, please don't give up on this story, Keep Moving forward. Till the End, your Fan Superfan.
Name: >.> (Anonymous) · Date: 21/05/14 - 10:41 am · For: Dead Man Walking
Look at that booty, show me the booty. Give me the booty, I want the the booty. Back up the booty, I need the booty. I like the booty, oh what a booty
Shaking that booty, I saw the booty
I want the booty, lord what a booty
Bring on the booty, give up the booty
Loving the booty, round booty
Down for the booty, I want the booty
Hunting the booty, chasing the booty. Casing the booty, getting the booty. Beautiful booty, smoking booty. Talk to the booty, more booty...
Fine booty
Author's Response: LOL I JUST FOUND THIS AGAIN
Name: Karnia (Anonymous) · Date: 06/04/13 - 11:36 am · For: Dead Man Walking
Oh, and here is the sequel! :D
Wow, this starts off way into Shippuden, holy crap! I did not expect to start reading at the B fight. O.o. This is going to be good, I can feel it. >.<
First thing I thought…all of this seems to be pretty out of character for Samui, but then again, she is kind of undefined. I always took her to a be a hard-ass for some reason though. When I got to the end, I was like ‘what is going on…what is going on…what is going on?’ I had to reread the end like three times before I realised it was Rayne transformed.
Oh I am soooooooo excited for this. Will Sasuke feel the heat of the bracelet? Will he remember feeling Rayne’s chakra? Will Karin crack and tell him what happened?
Loving the mystery in this chapter and the change in atmosphere. And our last conversation about Tsunade giving Rayne a reality check on her position would be amazing! DO IT! It would work soooooo well for this story beginning here because you can do little flash backs about how she left and what not. Though you may have already done that in future chapters here, but yeah! I really like that idea!
Great start!
-K
Name: impurity94 (Signed) · Date: 14/02/13 - 01:35 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! i haven't even started reading so im makin a prediction. rayne comes back as a ghost? or sasuke keeps dreaming about her? OR OR OR OR MAYBE RAYNE WAS RESCUED BY A STRANGER ASFTER SASUKE LEFT AND SHE WAS BROUGHT BACK TO LIFE?!?!?!?!?! i sure hope so because you were mean and made me cry because you killed her. anywho, THANK YOU SOOOO SUPER MUTCH FOR A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! *fangirl shreek*
Author's Response: Loooolololol. Oh man, when I saw this I burst out laughing xD I'm not going to tell! I'm happy to hear you cried; it's nice knowing you made a connection with the character (: I hope you enjoy reading! Thank you! Xoxo~
Author's Response: Loooolololol. Oh man, when I saw this I burst out laughing xD I'm not going to tell! I'm happy to hear you cried; it's nice knowing you made a connection with the character (: I hope you enjoy reading! Thank you! Xoxo~
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/12/12 - 11:44 am · For: Dead Man Walking
First off, as I think I may have mentioned on deviantart, great banner. It is absolutely a-maz-ing! Love it sooo much XD. It's so unfair to be so talented in art and writing. Then again, if you weren't, I couldn't enjoy your amazingness.
Speaking of amazing, so was this chapter. Part of me was thinking it would all be the same as the manga and then Rayne would appear at the end or randomly. But nope. I was wrong.
"Samui" was well written and seemed to fit in with her manga personality, so I actually thought it was her. Though I was confused since she hasn't originally intervened. And then she started to be so kind and gentle to Sasuke and I thought - Rayne would so kill you.
Then the bracelet. That gave it away. It's only supposed to grow warm around her. She is Rayne. Now the question is: HOW THE FLIP IS SHE ALIVE????? And another, though not as big to me, is why is she "Samui"?
Evil and interesting way to start this. I mean, it was an amazing read, but why leave me so confused? It's just not right T^T.
Great chapter as always, and again you're leaving me with no other choice, Tink-chan, but do this:
P.S. Love the fake Once upon a time beginning.
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting about my art, too ;///; Makin' me feel all good n' stuff.
First, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the whole Rayne = Samui/Samui = Rayne thing. To answer your question, the reason Rayne posed as Samui is because Sasuke was there. She needed to disguise herself while she was watching Killer Bee and him fight that was Sasuke didn't notice she was there, and in turn see that she was actually alive. Eh? Ehhhhh? Pretty sneaky, Rayne-chan!
You got to reading this pretty quickly! Don't worry, even though I've procrastinated posting, by the time you catch up with chapter 2&3, chapter 4 will be out, and you'll see how the flip she's alive! :D So happy to have won the Your Story Award so quickly! Waahhhh! -pulls out scroll- I'd like to thank the Academy... Xoxo~
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 15/12/12 - 11:51 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
Ohmygod ohmygod Rayne didn't die! I fucking love u 4 that! How did she live O.o
Author's Response: Aw, thank you :D I'm happy to hear that. I will reveal the grand story of her "demise" in chapter 4 c:
Name: psycho twinkie XD (Anonymous) · Date: 15/12/12 - 11:51 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
OK im gonna go out on a limb here but itachi gave rayne the necklace didn't he? It is bugging the crap outta me not 2 know. I'm not sure why though >_
Author's Response: ...<_< I'm just going to stare at you all pretty and not answer your question *___* You'll find out.. just not yet ;D HAHAH!
Name: oreolurver:-) (Anonymous) · Date: 14/12/12 - 04:34 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
Update
Author's Response: It always brings a smile to my face when people tell me to update (: Thank you; I will continue writing tonight
Name: Zakuro Vargas (Anonymous) · Date: 09/12/12 - 11:23 am · For: Dead Man Walking
Holy shiznit I love raynes new look. I can't wait to see what happens when she returns to konoha, and to see what happens between emo boy. Also is that itachis loop necklace? It can't be rite?
Author's Response: Loop necklace you say? Hmmm? Maybe it's a hint..
Name: Fem! Gilbert Beilschmidt. (Anonymous) · Date: 09/12/12 - 11:17 am · For: Dead Man Walking
Aw hellz yea! Rayne luks kick ass! I'm lukn forward to ze next chapter
Author's Response: Hell yes she does! :D Hah, thank you~
Name: psycho twinkie XD (Anonymous) · Date: 08/12/12 - 10:01 am · For: Dead Man Walking
........ :) update
Author's Response: Your wish is my command (:
Name: Cwille (Signed) · Date: 06/12/12 - 05:12 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
first of all, I have no idea what's going on, which I'm SURE was your intention. on another note, I can't figure out why Rayne would let him go rather than capture him.
Author's Response: Why yes, it was my intention, and I am so very glad you're confused! It means I'm doing my job! =^^= ...Well, after what he did to her, papa Raikage might not be too happy to have Sasuke in his village, even as a prisoner ;P I'm glad you're reading!! Thank you for the review Xoxo~
Name: cookiemonster32 (Anonymous) · Date: 05/12/12 - 02:53 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
Omg just just omg the chapter was just awesome! Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! I'm going to post it soon!! (: promise
Name: Fem! Gilbert Beilschmidt. (Anonymous) · Date: 03/12/12 - 01:34 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
Kesesese~ u made ze sequel! Zis chapter was awesome! Almost as awesome as me, ze great Prussia! >:D
Author's Response: Prussia? Sweet! I had an entire country reading my story! :D Thank you! I hope you stick around and enjoy what's coming up! Xoxo
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/12/12 - 12:43 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
ZOMG yes!
This was beyond epic and I'm beyond excited to get reading the rest of the story whenever you decide to post it. The journey will be long, yes! But I am willing to go through with the whole story. So please Tink, lead us on this epic journey that is a story :D
Author's Response: You're right, this is going to be a long, arduous journey. I'm happy to have you along :D Next chapter is soooon~
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/12 - 07:58 am · For: Dead Man Walking
OMG it's the sequel! The first thing I saw was the banner, and I got so happy! XD
So.... I really want to know how she's alive and why she has to pretend to be Samui in the village....It's so unfair that you start of the story with this many questions rising in my head, you can't do this to me T_T I'm so confused already~
I really liked Rayne as Samui, the dialogue especially was really well done, it would have been really hard to tell it was Rayne if it weren't for the fact that she was deciding to be kind to Sasuke.
It was a really creative and interesting way to start the sequel. Definitely not what I expected. But that just makes me all the more eager to read more, so I hope you are able to update this soon. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yes! I'm happy to hear you're confused! That's the way I wanted to make it! :D I'm glad I got Samui across well; that was one of my major concerns with this chapter. No worries about updates; I've been on the edge wanting to write this story, so I'm just as eager to get new chapters up!! There should be another one up later today!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 02/12/12 - 11:31 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know this song!!!! escape the fate! *squeals in happiness* yay you're back!
Author's Response: You'll probably know a lot more; every chapter title is going to be a song. I'm back and ready to rock your mind with an awesome fanfic ;)
Name: Zakuro Vargas (Anonymous) · Date: 02/12/12 - 08:38 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
^_^ yea buddy ths is gun a b one hell of a fucking story. O yea I have a song for you
I love you
You love me
Let's go out and KILL KARIN
With a 'death bomb'
Bang! Boom!
KARIN'S ON THE FLOOR
No more stupid SLUT SLASH WHORE!!
Author's Response: I hope it lives up to your expectations :D Whooo! No more loosey goosey! Thank you for reviewing~
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 02/12/12 - 08:16 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
I am also on EST, and afaik, I posted this review about 10:30. you didn't answer, are those banners made by you?
Author's Response: EAST COAST BUDDIES. Yesh, I do make my own banners. I draw them in Photoshop first, then crop and edit on Photobucket, as I struggle to size them properly to fit in the summary box o______e
Name: YourIdiotWriter (Signed) · Date: 02/12/12 - 08:15 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
I'm gonna start by saying that I really like the suspense at the ending there. = u=
Although I can understand why people have an issue with Karin, I think giving her a little bit more credit couldn't hurt. I mean, I know she can be a little aggravating and downright annoying, but she's apparently worthy of being hand-picked by Sasuke to join him, hence the "little bit more credit" thing. Then again, I still really how everything played out and given the fact that she's the protagonist and the girl with a thing with Sasuke and all, it makes sense. :'D
Now I must rock back and forth in a dark corner, wondering what's going on with Rayne. [/shakes fist at]
...
Lovingly, though. :L
Author's Response: Why thank you ¬u¬ I spent a lot of time planning that ending...
I never liked Karin. Ever =3= ..all she did (in my eyes) was serve as a compass for Sasuke. And, as you said, there's the natural tension between Karin and Rayne because of Sasuke. Not that Karin knows that yet because Rayne appeared before her as Samui..but chyeah. I don't have work tomorrow, and I already started working on the second chapter, SO, it SHOULD be up tomorrow. Should. Thank you for reviewing! It's nice to have you along for the ride (:
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 02/12/12 - 08:08 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
lol about what time did you publish this story? I'm curious how long it took me to notice it :P. also, do you do your banners? cuz they is realy nice!
Author's Response: I posted this at exactly 8:41 EST. I know this because I sent my friend the following text: "FUCK YEAH! I JUST POSTED MY SEQUEL! SOOOOO EXCIIIIITEDDD!!!" I have no idea what time zone this site is set up with, since the time stamp on these reviews says 8:00ish now
Author's Response: I posted this at exactly 8:41 EST. I know this because I sent my friend the following text: "FUCK YEAH! I JUST POSTED MY SEQUEL! SOOOOO EXCIIIIITEDDD!!!" I have no idea what time zone this site is set up with, since the time stamp on these reviews says 8:00ish now. And, yesh, I do make my own banners. I draw them in Photoshop first, then crop and edit on Photobucket, as I struggle to size them properly to fit in the summary box o______e
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 02/12/12 - 08:04 pm · For: Dead Man Walking
in the original japanese, his name was pronounced "Kirabi" Kishimoto later said that this was meant to be "killer bee" in english, as a fan of the japanese over the dub, I think of him as Kirabi or Kira Bi, and if/when he appears in my fic that's what he'll be called. I'm just stubborn like that :P
Author's Response: See, I'm an asshat that read the Shippuden manga. I've barely watched any of the episodes. Why? I really have no idea. So, I didn't really know that was how it was pronounced originally.. but if it's meant to be Killer Bee, then that's how I'll spell it. If I really wanted to be neurotic, I'd start using "san" "chan" "kun" "nii" etc.