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Title: His Guardian Ninja by Kakashifan727
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Kakashi dies during the Kyuubi attack, but is given a second chance. Now reborn as a angel, he must guide the orphaned knuckleheaded ninja Naruto and help him become the greatest Hokage ever!
Category: General Fiction > Naruto, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: Kabuto Yakushi, Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, Orochimaru
Genres: Action/Adventure, Supernatural
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: Supernatural Ninja Legends
Chapters: 40 | Completed: No | Word count: 90614 | Read count: 74949 [Report This]
Published: 15/11/10 | Updated: 24/10/12

Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Liked
Date: 28/11/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The summary caught my eye immediately, and I was not disappointed. There are a few errors here and there (the beginning, the format's gone mental - and do candle "bras" exist?), but I'm enyoing the story so far.

Laughed a lot at the mental image of a floating baby.

Keep up the good work!



Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Liked
Date: 28/11/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooooh, interested. I wonder what the Hokage will think about Kakashi's haunting. Perhaps he'll think he's just too overworked, hehe.

Author's Response: These are older chapters mind you. I am preparing to rewrite them to make more sense iwht my current idea in the future when i have free time. Or rather, if i have free time.



Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Liked
Date: 28/11/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Minor errors again:

"The Third sighed; He really was getting too old for this job."

"arua" instead of "aura".

"per say" instead of "per se"

"...appropriate for now; We have plenty..."

Those are the ones that I can recall off the top of my head. Other than that, still very interesting. Good work!



Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Liked
Date: 28/11/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good chapter! I wonder who's the team captain of Team 10, though.



Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Liked
Date: 28/11/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good chapter. I wish they were a bit longer, though.



Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Liked
Date: 28/11/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very interesting! Your writing has also improved, which is what every writer likes, ne?



Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Liked
Date: 28/11/11 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I've no idea what "Goddmodded" means... Good chapter!



Reviewer: Vermouth Signed Liked
Date: 28/11/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Gotta love Naruto when he goes all Kyuubi mode. Good chapter!

Author's Response: I saw all these reviews on my email and thoguth that the site had broken or something. Made me LOL hard and I feel happy t ohave another reader.