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Title: Hold Me by doodlelover
Rated: U
[Reviews - 2]
Rated: U

Summary: Just a little poem to make you sad. Hope my rhymes aren't too bad.
Enjoy.
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction > Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 717 | Read count: 2604 [Report This]
Published: 29/05/08 | Updated: 29/05/08
Enjoy.
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction > Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 717 | Read count: 2604 [Report This]
Published: 29/05/08 | Updated: 29/05/08
Reviewer: The Invisible Kid Signed
Date: 27/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Date: 27/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Pretty good... The rhyming isn't as bad as you seem to think it is, but the phrasing needs a little bit of work, an abbreviation here, a word omitted there, other than that, I like it