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Penname: HitoriItai [Contact]
Real name: tim
Membership status: Member
Member since: 15/04/07
Website: www.themurphybros.zoomshare.com
Beta-reader: No
just love to read anything good and love naruto.

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Title: Finally Complete by ShadowLilly
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: SasuNaruSaku fic, with them getting together. General smut involved threesome. :)
Category:
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4055 | Read count: 1883 [Report This]
Published: 05/05/06 | Updated: 05/05/06


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow very nice but must get to sleep try making a sequel



Title: Into the Woods by foxfire
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 60]
Summary: Naruto and Hinata are sent on a simple mission: delivering medicine, but get sidetracked on an adventure neither one of them saw coming PART 1 OF MY "INTO THE WORLD" SERIES
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Into the World
Chapters: 20 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 67524 | Read count: 57988 [Report This]
Published: 14/06/06 | Updated: 15/09/06


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 16/04/07 Title: Chapter 20: Farewell

OMG this is some of the best other-worldly phenonenas of all time.

ps i no thats not writ plural form of phenonenean
P.S.S. i didnt lie i loved every word of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.



Title: Hold On Hinata by HyuugaAmane
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 51]
Summary: On an S-classed Hinata is badly wounded. After she gets out of the hospital she has no where to go. In a twist of fate she ends up living with her long time crush. (Sorry I suck at summeries..) Story centers mainly around NaruxHina.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 62385 | Read count: 35958 [Report This]
Published: 06/07/06 | Updated: 05/08/07


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: That's Salty

okay thats really weird thats the song im listening to today ive been replaying it on youtube with naruto in it and now its in the story weird O.o
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-- HyuugaAmane : Ironically that\'s happened to me before so I know how you feel. lol



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 05/08/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Sake and Genins

for one i like the song bodies and im assuming you got ichigo from bleach and since your the japaneese expert im sure you know that Ichigo means strawberry its true
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-- HyuugaAmane : Yeah that is a good song. Your right that\'s were I got the name Ichigo and yes I am aware it means strawberry. lol



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: A Lesson To Be Taught

fianly im caught up very good please update and according to the story you dont update often so i guess naruto will have to attack you if you dont my version of naruto that is muhahahaha anyways you watch to much anime soon you'll be talking about full metal alchemist or someting well your cruel to the characters witch i enjoy muhahahaha well anyways yeah i forgot but anyways *bites thumb and spreads blood to all fingers on right hand* i have back up *places hand with thumb slightly curled, on the ground* summoning jutsu "hey, gamakichi" "yo, whats up" oh nothing just reading a great fan fic that tortures the naruto characters" "sweet, hey am i in it" "nope,sorry" "okay, who wrote this, POPS" *giant toad shows up* "what is it son" "The author hasnt put me in the story" "is that right well then, tim help me out here....ninja art:toad oil" *oil slime shoot directly at neji* "Fire Element Fire Style:Katon no Jutsu" tim shouted. neji turns around and screams yet again "Why me" neji said falling to the ground as a burnt crisp. anyways rock lily okay yeah thats messed up but also yeah i cant remember well update soon
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-- HyuugaAmane : I like to think I\'m getting better about that. I\'ve updated twice in the last week and I\'m in of writing chapter 20. =3 If you send Naruto I\'ll send Neji to deal with him. *evil smile* I know I watch far too much anime. Last time I counted I had seen over 80 different series. XD FMA? Been there and got bored with. I didn\'t like that one very much. ^^\' Being cruel to certain *cough* Neji *cough* Sasuke *cough* characters is the highlight of my day! ^^= lol Neji cruelity in reviews? It can\'t get any better. lol Yeah the Rock Lily thing was a spur of the moment thing. It was the only name that stuck out in my head so I used it. I\'ll update as soon as possible. ^.~



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 08/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Friends and Roses

if you want you could use fire fly thats a good song oh and also i know but where, like what website did you go on to translate them. and you thing negi can stand up against MY naruto, plus i already destroyed negi with fire muhahaha next is sasuke. *Thinks up plan to destroy sasuke* My version of hinat attack "I'll do my best" *places her stance* "Jyuuken" right to the opposite side of the heart. *sasuke coufs up blood*. "very good hinata" says naruto. "Oh yeah" *plugs hinatas and narutos ears* "i know the secret yay" why does evveryone turn preagnent in your story next thing you know you put anko preagnent. "dang it, why did i give you ideas" also i made my own jutsu i think reversal technique" its ovious but its too ovious. perfect



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Friends and Roses

im listening to that song again as i read the responses and also i didnt think anyone liked that song besides me bodies and also i read the one review saying you gave up confidence in writing lemon well let me tell you this it doesnt matter people wont hate you and also you can look at others and get ideas from there stories and you gave hinata confidence in her self so put some of that in yoourself im making my own story and manga called Hitori Itai as im sure you know that means alone and pain hitori(alone) itai (pain) also how did you translate those lyrics and words and thank you ive never understood what anou meant finally janae
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-- HyuugaAmane : It\'s a good song. Yeah, but it still makes me nervous.. I guess I could give it a shot in an upcoming chapter, but I really doubt it would be any good. Granted I\'ve read enough of them that I should be able to write it no problem. XD I knew itai, but not hitori. I looked up the lyrics to be honest. I\'m not that good with Japanese. XD



Title: Of Kunoichi and Idiots by creepygothbunny
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 13]
Summary: The female nin decide to have a sleepover. Sadly for them, Naruto and some of the other guys are rather nosy. Pairings include NarutoHinata, SasukeIno, NejiTenten, ShikamaruTemari, SakuraOC, and GaaraLee!
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 10929 | Read count: 10136 [Report This]
Published: 30/07/06 | Updated: 22/12/06


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 07/06/07 Title: Chapter 8: Filler Chapter: A Very Gaara Christmas

very good



Title: One More Night by Marine Brother Shran
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Hinata in the middle of cleaning her desk, she comes across an old photo book containing some very special memories, bringing back fond memories of her own as she looks through her book of precious memories.
Category:
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2862 | Read count: 1629 [Report This]
Published: 09/08/06 | Updated: 09/08/06


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: One More Night

wow that was beautiful and i ive actually seen pictures like that or is that were you ot the idea from



Title: Pregnant Pause/Kiba's What? by Madame Mere
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 23]
Summary: An idea that wouldn't leave me alone (and writers block). Kiba and the guys go to sand, the girls are kidnapped, and they disobey direct orders. What else can go wrong?
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 29554 | Read count: 24626 [Report This]
Published: 11/08/06 | Updated: 30/07/07


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 29/04/07 Title: Chapter 12: Plans, Clones, and HECK!

keep it coming


Author's Response: I plan to. If you have a plot idea that you like, let me have it! I might work it in so I can fully have fun.



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 15/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Good Byes

This is one of my favorite stories in the whole world and i dont just say that to anyone or anything.
P.S. Really hope your brother get better soon.
P.S.S. Please update ASAP Please its killing me


Author's Response: Why, thank you! You\'ve made my day! And as I said in a previous review, I\'ll update as soon as I figure out how to get my plot back on line and out of the gutter.....The detour through the sewer was pretty interesting though.



Title: Fatal Love by Nikki_Yaoi
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Everyone says that Orochimaru can`t be trusted, that he is no good and should be killed, but what happens when a girl helps him and puts her life in his hands? Will it change him and her forever, or will it only wreck her life?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Through Her Life
Chapters: 14 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 8215 | Read count: 12412 [Report This]
Published: 30/08/06 | Updated: 23/09/06


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Taking the Long Road

well i have a question how'd she find out about tsunade if she left when the 3rd was killed



Title: Into the Desert by foxfire
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 51]
Summary: PART 2 OF MY INTO THE WORLD SERIES: It's been over 3 years since Naruto left her to go on his training mission, and Hinata has grown into a strong young woman. Now she's being sent to Suna on her own special mission, and life will never be the same again
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Into the World
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 27207 | Read count: 13277 [Report This]
Published: 27/09/06 | Updated: 17/12/06


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed
Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Suprises

your killing me if you dont update soon people will think your dead and i also wont be your reviewer anymore

p.s. i used to look up to you for inspiration but i can no longer find it

p.s.s. your lasier than shikamaru but you share his iq if not higher

p.s.s.s. youd better write or else...mwhahahaha...i mean it



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 06/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Strangers

one of my favorite chapters and please write chapter 5 and hope verything is ok since youhavnt wrote in a while.



Title: An Empty Shell by Nikki_Yaoi
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: To be left behind, forgotten, an empty shell of a child. That was what she was, hurting deep inside, yet not showing this. Love would be her fate and her friends would become her weakness.
Category:
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Through Her Life
Chapters: 7 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 5179 | Read count: 7252 [Report This]
Published: 03/11/06 | Updated: 08/12/06


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 7: Nikki`s Secret Revealed: Part 1

very nice story and nice way to connect all the characters into one.

p.s. keep writing please



Title: Konoha Civil War by N1nj45tyl3
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 40]
Summary: A small stone, in a giant pond can cause major ripple. Hyuuga Hinata is scheduled for execution for running away from Konoha, despite having good reasons. Naruto and friends rush to save her and suddenly find themselves in the middle of a civil war. When friends suddenly become enemies, Naruto and crew must figure out a way to end the war, while keeping themselves alive



Sequel to Skipping the Rift.


WARNING: LOTS OF CHARACTER DEATH!!!!!
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Fox Fire
Chapters: 38 | Completed: No | Word count: 52898 | Read count: 63795 [Report This]
Published: 20/11/06 | Updated: 07/09/09


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 33: Prayer of Forgiveness

i know i love this story although i cannot remeber it since you wait i do remeber the whole thing now anyways back to what i was saying Write



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 25/07/07 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue

where are they all going and was that hinata dream or reall with conversation and i take it she just imanagined or hillusinated they ghost from the loss of blood and pain
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-- N1nj45tyl3 : The conversation with her father was a dream yes. Everyone else is leaving to join Tsunade.



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed
Date: 25/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE

oh are they going to like build a new village or something like that
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-- N1nj45tyl3 : yup, its gonna be called um...the Generic Ninja clan!



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 24/07/07 Title: Chapter 35: The ghost of you.

man dude i know this is pointless since you dont respond but its been a while and i understand writing is hard but whatever i may not remember this completley but didnt you say something about akamaru still being alive and although techinacly there not brought back to life you said people who die in your story stay dead period and no offense and i like this about people you are dimented
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-- N1nj45tyl3 : Yeah Akamaru was alive...in a sense... LOL. Maybe I shoulda been clearer on my interpretations on ALIVE. And thanks, I am pretty demented



Title: Falling into the Darkness by Nikki_Yaoi
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: You win some, you loose some, you live and go on, never turning back. That was Nikki`s philosophy about life, she was willing to kill anyone who got in her way and reach the top. Once you fall into the darkness, can you ever be saved?
Category: Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance > Top Pairs > Sakura & Other Females, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Through Her Life
Chapters: 10 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 8723 | Read count: 11584 [Report This]
Published: 25/11/06 | Updated: 21/12/06


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Birth, The Hate

still got ay



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Misunderstood

numb is a good song but you made orochimaru to caring



Title: Turning the Sheets by foxfire
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A lonely boy with too much time on his hands, and a fantasy of the girls he left behind. Just a smexy lil one-shot filler for the time skip between Woods and Desert. Short and Sweet Yuri plus Self-Gratification
Category: Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 698 | Read count: 2389 [Report This]
Published: 03/01/07 | Updated: 03/01/07


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

not as good as the others but still need to to be typed
ps can you give me some advise on mine besides making it longer as soon as i get some reviews i n its going to grow to a whole new world but with everything you knw and love



Reviewer: ohyeah Signed
Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

its called does he love me



Title: Lost in this Wonderment by uzamaki_fluff
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Just a few poems that I felt were good enough to share with you guys. Hopefully, if you don't mind tell me what you think of them because these come from my heart and I want to know what my fellow author peers think.[Former Title All You Can Do Is Wonder]



Update: Chapter 26: Heal Me You are my perfect and you show your soul to me, Just show it to the world too, for me? Lemme know what you think Thanks and Much Love, Uzumaki_Fluff!!
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction > Poems
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 | Completed: No | Word count: 3903 | Read count: 26871 [Report This]
Published: 18/01/07 | Updated: 25/06/07


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 20/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: All You Can Do Is Wonder

not bad
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-- uzamaki_fluff : why thank you...I mean..yea



Title: Hinata and her Exposure by Pedromac
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Hinata finally confeses to Naruto. This is going to be somewhere between 2k and 13k words long and will have many sequals ((i hope))
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 14725 | Read count: 26488 [Report This]
Published: 01/02/07 | Updated: 22/08/08


Reviewer: ohyeah Signed Liked
Date: 18/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: YAY FOR UPDATES

update hurry