Becky! You're gonna kill me with this! They're so cuuuute together, and soooo falling in love! Please, please, please post the next chapter like...now! Haha, I think I know who's involved in the upcoming drama...at least if it takes place in Konoha. Hehe, so looking forward to the next chapter. And the one after that. And the one after that. ... Please post the next one very soon, I've got shit load of school tomorrow and will so need a good story to read once I get back home. Love it!

Author's Response: I will post it up tomorrow morning probably... but I am so awfully tempted to post it now, as I love the next chapter.

Kiba!! Shino!! What are you doing?! *huggles Naruto* Poor, poor baby... And you're gonna be in so much trouble now, having abused those two monster-boys. I just knew Shino would be the one behind the drama. Damn him!

Lovely chapter darling, talk about turning everything around... Already longing for more. ^.^

Author's Response: Haha it made me really upset writing it, but they were having it too easy, so i figured it was time for something to go wrong...

You nearly made me cry now, Becky... Poor Shino... Still, I couldn't help but to love the part where Kiba so bluntly told him he didn't want him. Even Shino has to have his limits, now he finally showed some emotions. Too bad it couldn't be a smile or joy or love or something, that it had to be sorrow and loss...

I also love, adore and admire you for the fact that you let them get back together, but without everything being peachy immediately. You don't just stop loving someone immediately after an incident, if you did I wouldn't love either of my parents, so it makes sense they could forgive each other. Or Naruto could forgive Kiba rather, since Kiba deserved what he got. But I hate it when a fic sorta ends with the kiss and everything is perfect again. Once more you portrate emotions beautifully, with the illogical love that our little blonde gives in to despite not completely trusting the reason for it - Kiba. I'm so looking forward to more of this fic, and I am quite pleased that you're addicted to writing it, haha. ^.^

Author's Response: Oh my gods! You made me so happy! I have a big grin on my face now *blush*... I will get the next chapter up as soon as possible.

Ooooomg, I'm so glad you wrote another chapter to this story. I have no idea how long it's been up here, since I haven't been around for ages. This fic is very interesting, I adore how you let me see a different side of Itachi and Deidara. They're both so cold, though one is loud and the other death silent, but here they are warm and loving towards each other. They're human, and I like that.

The only thing that'd make this story even better is if you divided it into paragraphs. It's make it loads easier to read, and that'd probably make it even better. That is my only complain, the content is perfect and I can find nothing that is not to praise.
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-- Usagi : IT USED TO BE DIVIDED INTO PARAGRAPHS!! WTF!! AHHHHH!!!! I guess they want the < br > codes now. darn it!! darn it!!! Ill fix that then. I do write in paragraphs. the other parts of the story are in paragraphs!! Grrr....anyways : ) I\'m glad you like it and I\'m happy that I allow you to see other sides of Itachi and Deidara. : D Thank you for your revieww <3333

And so there was hotness. Poor little Deidara, the victim of an Uchiha tease. Haha, I love that you made them both virgins, the continue is going to be great. I can tell.

Author's Response: hehe thank you! I like the fact that they are virgins so when and IF it actually happens...it will be very special for them : D <333

I love this chapter! Revelations are always fun, especially when it being between two rival mafia gangs, hehe. Poor Naruto...and Sasuke too for that matter. I am so looking forward to more on this fic.

And no worries about the heights, I get over things. ^.~ Ever saw 'Knockaround Guys'? It's a great movie about the sons of mafia bosses who don't get accepted either in the mafia or in society.

My, my, you sure know how to pull the strings Miss Marionette. Haha, I did NOT see that one coming! Hilarious, absolutely fucking hilarious. Well, no fucking just yet, but something tells me there will be. Naru-chan doesn't seem too out of it, and Sasuke's obviously in to the game. Wiiee, can't wait for more. This is the kind of humor I need in my life. Lovely!

What. A. Tease! Hahaha, so evil! Poor Naruto, it's not even his fault he's dressed like a girl. Talk about using people and their difficult situations. Haha. I love this story more and mroe with each chapter. Keep up the good work. ^-^

Wow, this is really good! Never saw anything like this, but it does make so much sense with it all existing inside someone's head... In a way it reminds me of a book called 'I never promised you a rose garden', where a girl/young woman enters her private world every now and then. It has native americans in it, and it all gets complicated because she does to herself what she believes they do to her inside her head... I hope you continue this one. ^-^

Author's Response: I have never read that book, but it sounds good, maybe I could find it in the library. Thank you! I will continue! I hope it stays good! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^

Violet, you are genius! This fic is so good and so depressing at the same time. I really can't wait to read more, what will happen and what will unfold as it goes on? It seems the more I read, the less I know what is real and what is not. Haha, you've got me hooked girl. ^.^

Author's Response: *smiles* Thank you! So much! You are an awesome reviewer! And yeah I know, I know. I\'m even confusing myself when I write it. -_-\' Thank you for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^

It's good, really good just like the first one. I definitely think Sasuke felt exactly like that when he was younger, that he wanted Itachi to see him just as much (if not more) as he wanted their father to see him.

As they grow older I think it's more likely that Itachi would feel like you describe, there's just something about him that makes you wonder what he's about ((yes, I've seen a little bit more of Itachi now that the anime had progressed)). But I don't think it's impossible that Sasuke would habour these feelings somewhere deep inside, cause it's very hard to break sibling love...

Finally, I think it was a very smart move to add this chapter. In my oppinion everything became a great a deal sadder knowing that the brothers love each other but think that the other hates him... Now you just wish they would kiss (no incest meant) and make up, but you know it will never, could never, happen... I think this is very nicely portrayted.

This is so good! I admire the way you balance the obvious and the underlying emotions, it's gorgeous! Itachi turned out to be a gentleman, or at least an actor. Is Kakashi having feelings for his student? And just what kind of relationship does Sasuke want with Naruto...? I'm looking forward to more updates. ^.^

Author's Response: *bows* Thank you very much...and well I am really trying with the emotions part. Itachi, he is a great actor, ne?? About Kakashi\'s feelings, that could be a possibilty. As for what Sasuke wants..I know about as much as Sasuke right now..ain\'t that sad??