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Title: Heat by vampchic
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Naruto's in heat but doesn't realize it. All he know's is Sasuke's damn sexy! And what will he do when a certain red head appears? Sasu/Naru, Gaa/Naru, eventual Sasu/Naru/Gaa.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Naruto and Gaara, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 | Completed: No | Word count: 38707 | Read count: 45469 [Report This]
Published: 04/03/06 | Updated: 03/11/06


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 10/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I curse going to bed, and even more having to get up in the morning! Right now I just wanna stay up and read all the posted chapters of this fic. You're a very good writer and the storyline is both funny and interesting. Personally I like Gaara to go with Neji ((don't ask me why though)) and Naruto with Sasuke, but that's just me. When I get back to my own apartment in like...36 hours, I will not rest until I have finished this story. It definitely goes into the favorites!



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Woot, I totally just read the rest of the story! Please, please, please update this...finish it so that I know if the two overly stoic boys get over themselves and do what they should do; bang each other with Naruto somewhere in the mix! XD
Sorry I didn't review every chapter, but I am begging you -pleading to you crawling on my knees- to finish this story. It is really awsome!



Title: In My Dreams... by playin_lover
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Sasuke enrolls Nejis help in capturing Narutos heart, but after all the things Sasuke and Neji have been through, would he still want Naruto afterwards?

Cliche, I know.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 | Completed: No | Word count: 11506 | Read count: 14852 [Report This]
Published: 16/06/06 | Updated: 06/09/07


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 7: Make your best offer...

Oh my gosh! I read this fic a while ago, but for some reason I didn't save it as a favorite ((won't repeat that mistake)) and forgot about it. Re-read it now and I absolutely love it! Sasuke is so confused, Naruto is so stupid ((passing up his chance and using Hinata)), Hinata is almost as sneaky as her cousin & too nice since she helps Naruto even though she knows he's using her, and Neji is...IN LOVE!! Wiiee!

Can't see why Sasuke would hesitate. Genious vs. Dobe. Cool vs. Odd. Gorgeous vs. Orange. What is there to think about?! Neji-fangirl, me? Never! ^-^



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 8: Expain to me.

Naaw! Poor Neji!! I wanna bash Sasuke... *glares angrily at the teme who is hurting her adorable Neji* That question, 'why don't you want to love me?', it hurts so insanely much to ask! I love this chapter, it's short but you fit so many emotions into it it's just gorgeous!

Haha, and I just realised you have a Swedish proverb in your profile - I come from Sweden...

Author's Response: Actually from part of your last review, I got that genius- idiot, gorgeous-orange part from. Thanks, and you come from Sweden? Wow *eyes glaze over with awe* you are so lucky! I have never been out of the U.S. (not including Mexico or Canada(Which doesn\'t really count because their like my neighbors))



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 08/05/07 Title: Chapter 8: Expain to me.

You're quite welcome, I'm rather honoured to be of service. :) And trust me, Sweden really isn't that good...it's quite boring most of the time...



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 20/05/07 Title: Chapter 9: Gambling on Love

*frustrated squealing and jumping around* OMG! OMG, you could be writing about me in this fic! The insecurity, the not wanting to put your heat on the line, the everything! I am so Sasuke in this story! Unfortunately I haven't met my Neji yet...the one willing to take the time and prove he/she loves me...

I love this chapter, not quite as much as the previous one but still a great deal. Very nice way of prolonging your fic. You could've so easily ended it right here with them getting together, but instead you just gave yourself six more months to write about. Me likie. Haha, looking forward to more my friend.



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 30/05/07 Title: Chapter 10: Do you really?

Naaw! I don't know whether to feel sorry for Sasuke or just smack him! Well, actually I wanna smack some sense into him and make him not feel sorry for himself because he COULD get dumped. Then again, I recognize it all too well...

This is a truly wonderful chapter, I really really love it. No worries with the updates, I haven't updated my fics in forever! Take your time. ^.^



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 19/06/07 Title: Chapter 13: Listening to the Rain: Day Six

This story is so cuuuuuute! I love it! Especially the vollyboll game in the previous chapter, it was great! Though they were awfully cute in this chapter too... I love NejiSasu, I think they make a gorgeous chapter. I also envy you for the fact that you've got time to write in the summer. I work, then I hang out with my friends, then I spend some time with my family and that is all the time there is in a day... I should be writing my multiple pairing story... Oh well, I love reading this and other stories too. ^.^



Title: New Beginnings by Hardofheart
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: After taking Sakura's untimely death very hard, Sasuke tries to pick up the pieces and move on. Naruto, his teammate, helps Sasuke through this difficult time, giving Sasuke a new outlook on life and love. Rated for language and crude humor, as well as mentions of naughtiness.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Kakashi and Iruka, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 12645 | Read count: 23728 [Report This]
Published: 05/08/06 | Updated: 30/10/06


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 03/04/07 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

very nice indeed. liked it a lot. they're cute together, both pairings. haha. good job!



Title: Zoo trip by MAR
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Zoo time fun with SasuNaru
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 3296 | Read count: 1483 [Report This]
Published: 25/08/06 | Updated: 25/08/06


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Zoo trip

Haha, true it might not be the best fic, but it's darn funny! I loved the fox episode! I want a black fox too... *pouts* And is someone, by any chance, listening to Teriyaki Boyz...?



Title: Twisted by Mujaki no Tsubasa
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Two geniuses. One project. One library room. What could go wrong?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters: Neji Hyuuga, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst, Drama, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: AU, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 39466 | Read count: 4677 [Report This]
Published: 03/11/06 | Updated: 19/03/08


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: One Library Room

Hell yeah! This is what I'm talking about, haha. Neji/Sasuke, quite the perfect pairing. A truly great fic, I love how you don't rush things but kept like...at least an entire chapter to foreplay. I am going to bed now, but believe me I am finishing this one tomorrow!



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 13/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: Look At Me

Holy crap! *is speechless*
That was definitely among the best sex scenes I've ever read! Emotions and thoughts mixed into it in an absolutely gorgeous way. Damn it, could I write like this!
Beautiful, fucking beautiful! *runs off to read next chapter*



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 13/04/07 Title: Chapter 5: Because I Want To Be

Wow, quite the way to start out. Haha. I absolutely love this story, and the pairing. I didn't really think it possible before I found this fic, hadn't read anything about them before. Now I'm glad this was my first, though it's gonna be a hard one to crack for others. Haha.



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 13/04/07 Title: Chapter 7: Fifty-Damn-Cents

oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh! hotness, hotness and so cuuuuuuute! i love how neji likes to cuddle, that's too sweet to handle, haha. please, please, please do continue this story. i so want to know what happens next, and how they solve their little problem with actually wanting to be together... please don't let it die...



Title: Gift by StarsOfYaoi
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 23]
Summary: [NejiNaruShika] [PWP, Lemon, Threesome] Naruto has always had a lonely birthday, but what if things are going to change?
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 5568 | Read count: 2180 [Report This]
Published: 22/11/06 | Updated: 22/11/06


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 03/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Gift

Holy cow!! Now that's a threesome alright! You are so talented in your writing, and this definitely doesn't need rewriting. Though a sequel would be nice...NejiNaruShika smut can't possibly be anything but hot. From your keyboard it is mindblowing!



Title: The Seduction of Shikamaru Nara by Aysha
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The heir to the Nara legacy is on the outs with his longtime lover. The right words from a certain pair of lips ignite his imagination, leading him to a new experience with an unexpected partner. Shikacentric. Warning! Graphic Yaoi.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 6685 | Read count: 9216 [Report This]
Published: 23/11/06 | Updated: 23/11/06


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Seduction of Shikamaru Nara

OMG, I totally have a new favorite word!! Bi-curious, I am so gonna use it from now on!

The fic is gorgeous, absolutely wonderfully written. I can see you "take pride in good spelling and grammar", it pays off I tell you. ^.^

Author's Response: Heehee! Thanks! And I can\'t help it. I inherited the type A personality from my mom. Combine that with the attention span of a cat with ADD and you get some interesting things form me...O.o



Title: Reunited Hyuuga by Mira
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Hinata has *_____* (read the first story, f*ckers!) and now Neji has to cope, but how?
Category: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Hyuuga
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 1223 | Read count: 1989 [Report This]
Published: 26/11/06 | Updated: 11/08/07


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 15/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: 1. contract

just read both this and your other story in the hyuuga-series. i really like both of them. nejihinata is a very nice pairing in my twisted little mind.
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-- Mira : thanks ^.^ I\'m happy that some people actually read the series, since, although I\'ve been writing fanfiction for awhile, I\'ve actually not been recognized for it.



Title: CRIMSON by AllieChan
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 119]
Summary: Itachi wants an heir to continue the Uchiha clan, but no one is quite strong enough in his eyes to be a worthy mate for him, apart from his little brother Sasuke.

Sasuke will bear his child...

Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Sasuke
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Graphic lemon, Horror, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 28353 | Read count: 13266 [Report This]
Published: 07/12/06 | Updated: 07/05/08


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 18/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Visit from a madman

Wow. Let's face it, after reading your other fic I had to check this one out when you said you were working on it. And I'm not sorry I did... My mind's pretty twisted too I guess, condider I always end up with incest characters at the various RPG-boards I've attended. A vampire with an obsession with her brother, a demon boy in love with his twin brother...I'm a little bit sick like that. Anyway, I definitely like this one and I am so looking forward to more goodiness. ^-^



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 18/06/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Love Hurts

*huggles* I know what you're going through darling. Four years ago I asked my dad if I could stay at mum's place for the remaining Christmas holidays, simply because she lived closer to my friends. He said yes and told me to call when I wanted him to pick me up again. I called three weeks later only to be met with an electronic voice telling me the number had been changed and that no further information was given out. Took me three weeks to get a hold of my dad, he wouldn't pick up his cell phone, and then he told me I was gonna live with my mum from now on. The following day all my stuff was neatly packed in boxes placed outside out door, he left them when I was in school. I didn't talk to him once in three years. Now I talk to him occasionally, but I don't love him anymore and I never will again. I definitely hope things turn out better between you an your mum, but don't appologize for something that wasn't your fault. She's the adult and the one who should act like one, you should not have to be the parent of your parent.

The chapter is lovely, yet sad. I love it, naturally. Take care sweetie and write when you feel up to it. As I said, I know what you're going through and you have my full sympathy. *huggles again*
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-- AllieChan : Im really sorry to hear that, but im happy that you understand what im going on abour and not being a drama queen about it. It realln is tough, you feel like you cant count on them anymore. BUt things are differant with my mum she always lets me down and i dont know why i keep putting my heart on the line for her. Yeah Im not going to appologize for what wasnr m faulkt. Im happy you liked the chapter, yes it was sad but sometimes sad chapters can be very beautiful, at least I think so.



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 07/05/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving

I am so sorry Alex! I totally forgot to save this as a favorite ((cause I'm stupid like that)), thus I didn't read the updates. I love this, it's amazing! The balance of confusion and denial, love and hatred, lust and longing, friendship and...something more...it's gorgeous! This time, I'm definitely adding it to favorites! ^.^

Author's Response: Awwww dont be sorry! Im just happy you read it lol! I\'m going to try and update as much as possible now :) I\'m so flattered that you would think of this fiction like that! I mean when I started I thought people would think I was sick, but heh thats what makes a story good the drama therefor I had to add it all!



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 18/05/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Caught Out

OMG, picturing that cat fight-scene must've be among the funniest things I've ever done! Shikamaru in a cat fight, now that is priceless. I still love this story, and I adore you for the fact that you make Sasuke want to go slow on the public bit. I just don't think he'd be running head over heals into a public relationship of any kind, and definitely not a gay one. As for what happens next I have no idea, you are just too unpredictable for me to guess. Write more and let me read instead, I'm developing an addiction for this fic. ^.~

Author's Response: OMG! writing the cat fight scene made my day, its wasnt very long but I didnt imagine that it would be! sometimes if you make scenes short they end out better, or thats what I think lol. and yes I didnt think sasuke would be all out about it either, infact he doesnt want people to know about their realtionship, his sorta a reserved guy or thats how I imagine him from the anime. lol and I will deffiantly write more! XD so please keep reading



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 27/08/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Secret Weapon

Hell yeah! I can't tell how glad I am you're taking up this story again. It's abnormally good, haha (which is an entirely positive thing in my book) and I've been loning like hell for this chapter. Now I really want to know what's happened to Anko, seeing how Itachi seemingly got what was INSIDE of her! The twists you put into this story are marvelous! Can't wait for more.



Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 21/06/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Falling from grace

Aouch! He told him! He actually told him! *is so excited* Gaah, I wonder what Naruto is gonna say. And do... I love this chapter, really love it. The end is marvelous, fantastic!

I'm also glad you're feeling a little bit better. Hope you can go on in a way that feels alright for you.
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-- AllieChan : XD its great isnt it! Im so happy with how it came out, it could have been better though, owell. one of these days I will write something so perfect I wont beleive it. thanks for the concern sweetie! yes i think writing is just such a perfect way for me to feel better!



Title: The Seduction of Shikamaru Nara, part 2 by Aysha
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Shikamaru and Temari are fighting...again. Shika's other lover is otherwise occupied. The shadow-nin finds comfot in an unexpected pair of arms, and discvoers an interesting new way to use his favorite jutsu! Shikacentric. Warning! Graphic sexual content. Yaoi.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 5014 | Read count: 1414 [Report This]
Published: 10/12/06 | Updated: 10/12/06


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Seduction of Shikamaru Nara, Part 2

The first one was brilliant. This was better. XD I absolutely loved the shadow seduction, it was steaming hot! I agree with many of the others, you should type out the threesome - your skills would fill a hospital with patience suffering from bloodloss. Gorgeous writing!

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks! And I hope not, the hospitals around here are already over worked without me adding to the burden! =^o^=



Title: Epidemic by NayanRoo
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: A mysterious disease is quietly spreading, claiming lives across the country. When Neji falls ill with it, it's up to a disillusioned doctor and a disgraced genetecist to find a cure. [ItaNeji] [OroSasu] [Many other pairings!]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 36181 | Read count: 9140 [Report This]
Published: 31/12/06 | Updated: 20/03/08


Reviewer: invisible_habits Signed Liked
Date: 19/04/07 Title: Chapter 6: C5: To The Wire

Wow, I really like this story. Never heard of an ItaNeji pairing before, but this was just plain gorgeous. Anything that has Neji in it is gorgeous in my world, but this had something extra to it... Very, very nice. And I'm also very impressed by your writing skills.