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Title: Into the Desert by foxfire
Rated: U
[Reviews - 51]
Rated: U
[Reviews - 51]
Summary: PART 2 OF MY INTO THE WORLD SERIES: It's been over 3 years since Naruto left her to go on his training mission, and Hinata has grown into a strong young woman. Now she's being sent to Suna on her own special mission, and life will never be the same again
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Into the World
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 27207 | Read count: 15382 [Report This]
Published: 27/09/06 | Updated: 17/12/06
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Into the World
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 27207 | Read count: 15382 [Report This]
Published: 27/09/06 | Updated: 17/12/06
Reviewer: Modoken Signed
Date: 15/03/07 Title: Chapter 4: Memories
Date: 15/03/07 Title: Chapter 4: Memories
Need more, when will it be continued
Title: Konoha Civil War by N1nj45tyl3
Rated: U [Reviews - 40]
Rated: U
[Reviews - 40]
Summary: A small stone, in a giant pond can cause major ripple. Hyuuga Hinata is scheduled for execution for running away from Konoha, despite having good reasons. Naruto and friends rush to save her and suddenly find themselves in the middle of a civil war. When friends suddenly become enemies, Naruto and crew must figure out a way to end the war, while keeping themselves alive
Sequel to Skipping the Rift.
WARNING: LOTS OF CHARACTER DEATH!!!!!
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Fox Fire
Chapters: 38 | Completed: No | Word count: 52898 | Read count: 92058 [Report This]
Published: 20/11/06 | Updated: 07/09/09
Sequel to Skipping the Rift.
WARNING: LOTS OF CHARACTER DEATH!!!!!
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Fox Fire
Chapters: 38 | Completed: No | Word count: 52898 | Read count: 92058 [Report This]
Published: 20/11/06 | Updated: 07/09/09
Reviewer: Modoken Signed
Date: 15/03/07 Title: Chapter 33: Prayer of Forgiveness
Date: 15/03/07 Title: Chapter 33: Prayer of Forgiveness
is it done? when is the third part coming out?
Reviewer: Modoken Signed
Date: 15/03/07 Title: Chapter 33: Prayer of Forgiveness
Date: 15/03/07 Title: Chapter 33: Prayer of Forgiveness
is it done? when is the third part coming out?
Title: The Greatest Thing You'll Ever Learn... by Hinata84
Rated: [Reviews - 27]
Rated:
[Reviews - 27]
Summary: Hinata loves Naruto. Naruto is an oblivious baka. That's the way things always have been, and always will be. Hinata has accepted that. But everyone has grown, even her Naruto-kun. What happens when he looks back on his youth, and see the mistakes he's made? Rated R for future chapters, right now it's pretty much PG.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 9987 | Read count: 23450 [Report This]
Published: 22/03/07 | Updated: 01/07/07
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 9987 | Read count: 23450 [Report This]
Published: 22/03/07 | Updated: 01/07/07
Reviewer: Modoken Signed
Date: 23/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The joy before the fall
Date: 23/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The joy before the fall
really good, but are you gonna continue We're In Love?
Author's Response: Thanx for the feedback, but We\'re In Love isn\'t by me. It\'s by an author called hibiki96.
Title: "The Worst Book Ever Written" by Hinata1
Rated: 18 [Reviews - 57]
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 57]
Summary: Jiriaya has made a book with a bunch of little stories in it. While Kakashi is reading the book it doesn't take long to figure out who the characters are really suppose to be. Kakashi decides to terrorize his pupils by reading them this book.
Random weirdness!!!
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Deidara, Gaara, Haku, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hidan, Kisame Hoshigaki, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Maito Gai, Anko Mitarashi, Zabuza, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rin, Rock Lee, Sai, Sarutobi Hiruzen (Sandaime Hokage), Asuma Sarutobi, Temari, Tenten, Tobi, Tsunade, Itachi Uchiha, Obito Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Kabuto Yakushi, Ino Yamanaka, Minato Namikaze (Yondaime Hokage), Kurenai Yuuhi
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 2694 | Read count: 6105 [Report This]
Published: 27/08/07 | Updated: 27/12/07
Random weirdness!!!
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Deidara, Gaara, Haku, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Hidan, Kisame Hoshigaki, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Jiraiya, Konohamaru Sarutobi, Maito Gai, Anko Mitarashi, Zabuza, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Rin, Rock Lee, Sai, Sarutobi Hiruzen (Sandaime Hokage), Asuma Sarutobi, Temari, Tenten, Tobi, Tsunade, Itachi Uchiha, Obito Uchiha, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Kabuto Yakushi, Ino Yamanaka, Minato Namikaze (Yondaime Hokage), Kurenai Yuuhi
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 2694 | Read count: 6105 [Report This]
Published: 27/08/07 | Updated: 27/12/07
Reviewer: Modoken Signed
Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Your vote
Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Your vote
b, and i love hosw naruto is embarassed, and is showing it. This is rare.
Reviewer: Modoken Signed
Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7:Delayed Training
Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7:Delayed Training
yay. finally a good story again on this site. thank you. great grammar, spelling and stoy development as well.
Author's Response: Ooohh. Again with the great grammar stuff. Maybe people are wrong, maybe I have better grammar than they think. Thanks!!\r\nAin\'t know one gonna tell me, me have bad grammar. (LoL)
Title: Spirits in the Night by foxfire
Rated: U [Reviews - 8]
Rated: U
[Reviews - 8]
Summary: It's an anniversary of an event she wishes never happened but at the same time, another one she's very grateful of. Tsunade celebrates... and mourns... the lives of some of those precious to her. An angsty drabble of a one shot. Takes place after the time skip
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Tsunade
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 704 | Read count: 2355 [Report This]
Published: 10/10/07 | Updated: 10/10/07
Category: General Fiction
Characters: Tsunade
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 704 | Read count: 2355 [Report This]
Published: 10/10/07 | Updated: 10/10/07
Reviewer: Modoken Signed
Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Spirits In the Night
Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Spirits In the Night
All hail the author who's story first got me started reading fanfics. I can't wait for Desert. And this story appears to be interesting as well, because I can't figue out who the boy is.
Title: Mission of lust by sheechiibii
Rated: 18 [Reviews - 168]
Rated: 18
[Reviews - 168]
Summary: When Naruto, Hinata, and Shino are sent on a simple mission; to deliver a newly improved weapon to Suna. What will happen when Naruto starts to see Hinata in a way he has never looked at anyone but Sakura, and can Hinata keep her cool on the first mission with Naruto since the time skip. And what will happen when they return to Konoha...will everything go smoothly or will their whole world be turned upside down?
Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Gaara, Hinata Hyuuga, Jiraiya, Kiba Inuzuka, Rock Lee, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Pair NaruHina, Sakura Haruno, Shino Aburame
Genres: Angst, Drama, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 | Completed: No | Word count: 54005 | Read count: 41016 [Report This]
Published: 30/12/07 | Updated: 18/04/08
Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Gaara, Hinata Hyuuga, Jiraiya, Kiba Inuzuka, Rock Lee, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Pair NaruHina, Sakura Haruno, Shino Aburame
Genres: Angst, Drama, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 | Completed: No | Word count: 54005 | Read count: 41016 [Report This]
Published: 30/12/07 | Updated: 18/04/08
Reviewer: Modoken Signed
Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: a simple mission
Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: a simple mission
Well, it seems good, but there is not very much to review. The direction is unknown due to this being, only the first chapter, as well as the fact that character development can't have happened yet, so I do not know what you are looking for.
Author's Response: Thanks For The Review, I Was Aware That Not Much Could Be Said But I Was Just Wanting To Find Out If It Was Good For a Start And I Do Plan To Continue And Hopefully Get Better =]