Real name: Keith
Membership status: Member
Member since: 15/01/07
Website:
Beta-reader: 1
There are two sides to each story.
Muse-(When he gets off his ass.) Lucifel
First Name: Keith
Last Name: Not telling
Sexuality: Gay
Age: 15
Location: Somewhere in the Western United States.
Occupation: beta reader/artist/student
Hobbies: Fighting, drawing, writing poetry, reading, watcing tv, surfing the net.
Likes: Anime, swords, drawing, literate stories, beta reading, practicing my fighting style, fighting, playstation.
Dislikes: Homophobes, stuck up fools, drawing life, fighting, bad games, wannabe gangsters, waiting for inspiration to strike.
Ok, ladies and gents, first thing's first: I know that my likes and dislikes have a large contradiction in them. I did this on purpose. I hate to fight someone unless I need to, but I love to have practice matches with my friends and family.
Next, you'll notice I only have about one story up. Don't expect this to change any time soon, unless inspiration suddenly takes me to write a one shot or a two shot.
Finally, I will be more then happy to beta something if you ask me to. I am already a beta reader for SamaSurreal, author of 'When Life Gives You Emails,' and the 'Sand Incest' duo.
Anyway, that's all you need to know about me at this point in time. If I think of anything else, I'll make one of those about me stories.
Your friend,
Satoyuki
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 4]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Angst (Shonen-ai/Yaoi)
Characters: Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4799 | Read count: 2102 [Report This]
Published: 19/09/05 | Updated: 19/09/05
Date: 24/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: This is....
Nice. Very nice. It shows us that even the people who seem lazy, and those who seem cheerful can be fooling us.
Rated: PG [Reviews - 31]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 | Completed: No | Word count: 61591 | Read count: 32792 [Report This]
Published: 26/11/05 | Updated: 09/06/07
Date: 21/06/07 Title: Chapter 16: Nicknames and Psychic Women
Personally, I think this is an excellent chapter. It really ties in, and it shows how stressful falling for your employer or employee can be.
Rated: R18 [Reviews - 21]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 17095 | Read count: 5432 [Report This]
Published: 27/12/05 | Updated: 02/12/07
Date: 14/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Pleasantries
Oh, Tsunade-baachan is gonna murder Naruto.... I love the chapter, and can't wait for the next one to come out.
Date: 06/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Preface
The fact that you plan on redoing the entire story is something I never expected. It was good before, but there were, as you said, plot holes. Since you sat down and mapped it out, I'm sure it's gonna be a hell of a lot better.
Date: 03/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: Pleasantries: Part II
Now, my first review was a note saying I am willing to be your beta reader. Now, this one is on the chapter, and I say it is absolutely amazing.
Date: 03/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: Pleasantries: Part II
I'll beta for you. It would honestly be an honor to work for someone of your abilities.
Rated: [Reviews - 2]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 7378 | Read count: 5819 [Report This]
Published: 01/03/06 | Updated: 19/05/07
Date: 19/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Haven
Damn. I wonder how Naruto's future ends up..... Amazing plot.
Date: 13/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Surprised?
The stories dark, mysterious and full of suspense. Well done. I can't wait to find out what Naruto did.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 16]
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 | Completed: No | Word count: 53712 | Read count: 30228 [Report This]
Published: 21/04/06 | Updated: 01/11/07
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Awsome story. I can't wait until you bring out the next chapter.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 7]
Category: MadFic > Other
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 4611 | Read count: 5021 [Report This]
Published: 24/05/06 | Updated: 24/05/06
Date: 11/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: 02 Run
Oh, gods, this is the most insane yet funny story I've read yet. I hope you update very soon.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 3]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1678 | Read count: 1561 [Report This]
Published: 05/07/06 | Updated: 05/07/06
Date: 06/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Turn of Event
Honestly, I'd have to say this is too funny. Maybe you should write another story to this one, what happened on the date or a month after said date.
Rated: R18 [Reviews - 6]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Angst (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Naruto
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Graphic lemon, Romance
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 52713 | Read count: 3722 [Report This]
Published: 15/07/06 | Updated: 11/01/07
Date: 19/02/07 Title: Chapter 8: Inner Loathing, Acceptance
I liked this chapter. When does the next one come out?
Rated: U [Reviews - 6]
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 21268 | Read count: 11253 [Report This]
Published: 29/07/06 | Updated: 01/06/07
Date: 02/06/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Missing Notice
Oh, I can't wait until you rewrite the whole thing. By the way, maybe you should have it were Haku and Zabuza join the Leaf nins, because Gato tries to kill them.
Rated: [Reviews - 2]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Naruto
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 775 | Read count: 2351 [Report This]
Published: 02/08/06 | Updated: 02/08/06
Date: 08/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Moth to a Flame
Nice cliffhanger. I can't wait until the next chapter.
Rated: R18 [Reviews - 13]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Naruto
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Graphic lemon, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 4287 | Read count: 1524 [Report This]
Published: 21/08/06 | Updated: 25/04/08
Date: 11/04/07 Title: Dreams or Delusions of the Cursed
Can't wait for the next chapter. This is an excellent story.
Date: 18/03/07 Title: Dreams or Delusions of the Cursed
Oh, I bet it's Shino. Those roaches have his signature all over them.
Rated: [Reviews - 2]
Category:
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 10895 | Read count: 33573 [Report This]
Published: 21/08/06 | Updated: 26/08/06
Date: 29/03/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter II (Part 2)- Caught in the Middle (and Punished Accordingly)
When is chapter four coming out?
Rated: [Reviews - 7]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 9788 | Read count: 19846 [Report This]
Published: 21/08/06 | Updated: 14/03/07
Date: 27/04/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
That's what I call a cliff hanger from hell.
Rated: [Reviews - 6]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Naruto
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 6646 | Read count: 3646 [Report This]
Published: 22/08/06 | Updated: 22/11/06
Date: 22/03/07 Title: Chapter 2: Realizing
When are you going to update this one? I like it a lot.
Rated: [Reviews - 1]
Spoilers may be in here, only because well.. Most of this story deals with them further in their studies of being Ninja.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 | Completed: No | Word count: 34320 | Read count: 47323 [Report This]
Published: 23/08/06 | Updated: 27/11/06
Date: 21/02/07 Title: Chapter 20: Wings of Despair (Sasuke's Pain)
Gods...... Beauty and horror, hope and despair, love and hate..... All in one.... You have my respect, because not many can make this kind of balance so cleanly.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 24]
Category:
Characters: Shino Aburame, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Sakura Haruno, Kakashi Hatake, Kisame Hoshigaki, Hinata Hyuuga, Neji Hyuuga, Jiraiya, Shikamaru Nara, Orochimaru, Sai, Asuma Sarutobi, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade, Sasuke Uchiha, Iruka Umino, Naruto Uzumaki, Kabuto Yakushi, Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 | Completed: No | Word count: 63252 | Read count: 32142 [Report This]
Published: 13/09/06 | Updated: 27/11/07
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 13: Stop, Turn, and Fire
Very nice cliff hanger. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Date: 19/03/07 Title: Chapter 11: Battle Plans
Ooooo, this is getting good. I love your style of writing; it makes the reader want a lot more.
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 18: Naruto no Jutsu
You enjoy cliffhangers, don't you? 'Cause this one makes me want more of the story. Post the next chapter soon.
Rated: [Reviews - 1]
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 4515 | Read count: 3743 [Report This]
Published: 24/09/06 | Updated: 25/09/06
Date: 21/03/07 Title: Chapter 3: The Torn King Pt. II
Nice. I love how you keep the readers attention until the very end.
Rated: [Reviews - 21]
Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: How to Annoy Our Favorite Ninjas
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 916 | Read count: 9479 [Report This]
Published: 08/10/06 | Updated: 08/10/06
Date: 22/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: 45 Ways to Annoy our favorite Emo
That is all flat out evil. Wonderfully done. If you ever need help thinking up ways to torment Naruto cast memebers, just give me a calll. I'll be glad to help.