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Penname: Voyna [Contact]
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Member since: 15/10/13
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I must admit it feels quite strange to be back after around 6 years of absence.

The last fanfic I was writing goes back to 2007 if I remember well. The site certainly wasn't as fancy as it is today, Facebook, Twitter and the likes did not take so much space in our lives. I guess it was a simpler time and my fanfics were bad.

I am not sure whether my style even improved over 6 years. I guess not since to be honest I have mostly been concentrating on studies that had little to do with literature in the first place. Nonetheless, here I am. Back after 6 years, with a new attitude, a new styles and a new nickname. I do admit I want to associate as little as possible with my old stories that were in my opinion quite bad. Unfortunately, the problem with my new story is that I will never realize how bad it really is and ... English still isn't my mothertongue. You'd say that after 14 years of living here I would have gotten a hang of it already. I guess it is all the Frenchy influence that does that to me.

So a little bit about this new Voyna.

I am your average 23-year old geeky girl that loves to read too much for her own good. Actually, truth being said, if ever anyone of my acquaintances (my mother) would find out that I wrote bad fanfictions, I believe it would be the greatest shock to them (to her). This idea that one can enjoy manga and Dostoevsky still is too contemporary to be accepted in my little snubbish circle (that consists of my mother). As said previously, Dostoevsky is the center of my universe, and Russian literature in general. I believe that is where I get all my ideas from. Tragedies and angst. Lighthearted literature I love to read, but cannot unfortunately write.

Besides that, I have peculiar hobbies that include language learning. At the moment, I speak (not write, SPEAK), English, French, Serbo-Croatian and Spanish. I am learning Russian, German and Chinese. People usually take in account that I am less serious about this than I really am. I actually do take private classes and apply myself quite a bit to get a hang of all those languages. If ever you do feel like it, you can always send me a little message in a foreign language and look at me struggle to guess which one it is and what the message means. I do like to program as well, yes yes, program. Python, VBA, C, C (even Racket). Which is a good thing since I study to get two undergrads, one in biochemistry and one in chemical engineering. I have this ridiculous inability to make important choices that could affect my life, so I always choose to do more than is necessary. If whatever I write ever becomes boring, please do blame my charming professors. They kill the little creativity left in my fragile mind.

Things I really would appreciate from the readers that come across my writings is to comment. Sometimes I get it that people think a story doesn't deserve a comment, there after all is a certain hierarchy in stories based on the amount of reviews they receive. However, send me a PM with suggestions, I am not here to gather reviews, but to learn. If you feel that a review would be too much but still have a few suggestions to give, a PM would be our little secret and I would really appreciate it.

As well, if any of you knows about a BetaReader who would be willing to take on the challenge, I would really appreciate you telling me. Since my written English is not as good as it should be, I would need some extra help.

All in all, I am very happy to be back and am quite excited to go on exploring the site and discover all you new minds and what you write.

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Title: To Kiss a Tomato by SilverFoxGirl
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The Uchiha are slightly unstable vampires, the Hyuuga are elves, Sasori is an angel and Lee is a werewolf. And those are just the first people Sakura meets when she accidentally becomes the newest member of this very disfunctional family. Slight spoilers for the Kakashi Gaiden arc.





Category: General Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 7898 | Read count: 3586 [Report This]
Published: 14/10/06 | Updated: 05/04/07


Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 18/10/13 Title: Chapter 1: The Insanity Begins

Marry me. Now.
This without any doubt one of the best fanfictions I ever read. I love Sasuke's hallucination phase, I love Itachi transforming Poki-Ladies into sharingan-devoid vampires. I love the plot holes between Obito and Kakashi. And I am amazed that Deidara can be a crazy, cute, pouty genius.
As for the authors, it actually does have a very Big Brother feel, your crazy, paper-characters can be very content that they have such helpful gods that could erase them in one stroke of an eraser.



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 18/10/13 Title: Chapter 2: And Then She Woke Up

What's gonna happen next? Inner Sakura is going to jump out of Sakura's body so they can engage in a catfight in the mud for the pleasure of all the Akatsuki males (besides Deidara, he obviously needs some more explosive Viagra to get his thing going).
Pink-haired elves!!! Oh, definitely, please some pink-haired elves!
Wait wait, Lee is the werewolf thant what will Kiba be?! A fairy with butterfly wings (that would have to be Shino).?!



Title: I am Kimiko Kazuki of the Hidden Leaf by mst88
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 26]
Summary: I am in the process of a total rewrite of this story..
Kimiko Kazuki has lived in the Hidden Leaf Village, in the Land of Fire, one of the Five Great Nations all her life. When she was five, just after entering the Ninja Academy both of her parents died on separate missions, leaving her an orphan. Now at the age of thirteen, she is about to graduate from the Academy with her friends, taking her ever closer to her dream of being the Shinobi her parents had been for the Village she loves. But nothing in her life has ever come easy.
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Angst
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Dark, Death, OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 90911 | Read count: 21122 [Report This]
Published: 11/06/13 | Updated: 10/08/15


Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 17/10/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

You know, I really like your character, Kimiko so far. My mom being an orphan I guess I was always close to the cause of children left to fend for themselves. In a war-torn country as is Konoha, there must indeed be so many children left to themselves.
I am looking forward to read on and see how she interacts with her classmates and how your character will blend in with our other little shinobi.
Great work!

Author's Response: So glad you like her, enjoy the story although I am revising like a mad(wo)man right now lol. Some characters are more OOC then others, just the way I need them to be for the storyline.



Title: Shizu Aburame by mst88
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Nano users are rare, a female Nano user even rarer, so when one is born an arranged marriage is set for the future heir of the Aburame clan, Shino. So when Shizu gets the news her marriage will be soon she wants to see her future husband.
Category: Het Romance > Fluff, OC-centric
Characters: Clan Aburame, Hinata Hyuuga, Kiba Inuzuka, Kurenai Yuuhi, Shino Aburame
Genres: Romance
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 12044 | Read count: 8186 [Report This]
Published: 01/10/13 | Updated: 20/01/14


Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 16/09/14 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue

It is over. I shouldn't have read all the chapters today. I feel so terribly sorry. I wish Kishimoto will have the same respect for his readers and just show the happy-ever-after of each and every one of his characters. *sigh* this was perfect and I am so ridiculously sad at the idea that it is over. Goddamit. Write that Kiba oneshot, please. PLEASE!



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 16/09/14 Title: Chapter 7: Count Down

You know, Kiba is a weird dude friend. I mean were I fueled by testosterone, I would most probably rip out his arm and make him eat it. But it was nice that they all came to an agreement. But I am left ... slightly perplexed. What is a winter melon? I hope that is not a new kama sutra position. Sorry to all the little babies I shocked out there. I am just curious ... Ah, love. This is beautiful and makes us romantics wish that such stories truly existed.

Author's Response: Kiba is Kiba(and we love him for that fact lol)A winter melon is actually a gourd type vegetable and according to the data book Shino's favorite food. So nothing kinky friend, I did have a laugh over it lol.



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 17/10/13 Title: Chapter 1: Future Husband

I simply love your Kiba!!! It is so like him. Completely frank and out there.
And you know what, your cheeky little Aburame is growing on me. She is such a strange mix between the Aburame coolness and something like wanting to be accepted. I guess it goes back to that abandoned-child concept that gets to me. Nonetheless, great job, author!



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 17/10/13 Title: Chapter 2: First Look

*sigh*
Pray tell, why aren't there real men like Shino! I love the idea that he doesn't look at any woman because he knows he has to get married and wishes to honor his wife above anything else.
And you know, it is nice to have some fluff about Shino too, everyone needs love and so does Shino! It is exactly this idea that some characters get more action than others without any reason. Shino is plenty mysterious and bad boy. He deserved this, and he deserved his Shizu forever. I am sad it is done, I would have loved to read it on forever.

Author's Response: Yes Shino is the man! I have been kicking around the idea of continuing Shizu and Shino's story. There is still a story to tell here. So glad you have enjoyed it so far!



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 16/09/14 Title: Chapter 5: A Deadly Aburame Indeed

Is it me or are Shizu and Kiba are having a pissing contest at the beginning. I feel like they are both territorial. Kiba considers himself the leader, Shizu considers her private little life bubble to be threatened by that nosy dog-breath (remember his old nickname?). But I loved the ShinoShizu interaction just there. It was subtle, affectionate and ever so sweet. Great job, but that is not surprising coming from you!



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 13/09/14 Title: Chapter 3: Welcome To My World

WAIT WAIT WAIT. WOAH. LADY, A SECOND!!!
The last time I read this fic, it was supposed to finish on chapter 2. WTH! I MISSED 6 CHAPTERS OF IT, HELLO!!!
This was my favorite on this site. Wait a second now. I have 6 chapters to make up. Jesus Lord.
Your Shino truly is a gentleman. Such understanding and careful men are rarely found outside of stories. Usually, the average man would try to horde his whole life and keep away his future bride from anything that had to do with him. For the simple reason he wouldn't want all his responsibilities to follow him around. And here you have your Shino doing the complete opposite. However, as all men, he is oblivious to the needs for a woman to get a goddamn goodbye kiss!
I still love your Kiba. He is playful, welcoming, impulsive, sure, but ever so boyishly cute. My favorite of all your characters, you just understand him perfectly. If only you wrote a little fic about him too, I would be the happiest of women!
I unfortunately need to go work now. I wanted to read on >.< First thing you learn in uni: there are things that you want to do and things that you don't. Oh well, the reviews will be appearing in the upcoming days. I am so happy this story is longer than what I thought!

Author's Response: Hmmm a Kiba story *scratches cheek in thought* maybe I should have a spin off of this story for Kiba? Maybe not as long but something anyway. Hmmm I'll have to see what I can come up with and from who's POV it should be from, most likely Kiba's. For you my friend I'll kick this around but I think I have something forming in the dark area's of my mind, but I know she won't be of the Inuzuka clan waahaha



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 15/09/14 Title: Chapter 4: In Shino’s Stead

Honestly, I really felt bad for Shizu. I mean, this is a lovestruck girl from a pretty stern clan. She feels abandoned. She tries to make this marriage thing work just as much as Shino but the thing is, Shino still has the chance to run away from all the stress of it. She however stays behind and has to deal with all that load of pressure being in the clan and missing Shino. I love how you depict Shizu and Hinata looking out for each other, their relationship is nice. Hinata is soft, Shizu is straight-to-the point. Very realistic. However, I wonder, is there some type of romantic tension between Hinata and Kiba? That tell-tale blush of Hinata's when Shizu mentions Kiba? But then your little spinoff promise (you better do it lady or else I scream) makes me think not. You have me wondering so much ... I don't like it. I want to know right away D:

Author's Response: Not to give to much away but Hinata is still pining for Naruto. I do have the Kiba spinoff in the works. I confess to getting the idea from hearing The Best Song Ever by One Direction, for Kiba's love interest's personality. I can't say to much more or I'll spill the beans. Let's just say that Kiba will be completely(blissfully)blindsided.



Title: The Next Room by mst88
Rated: U [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Jiraiya hears noises coming from Tsunade's room, needless to say his curiosity is peaked.
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Pre-Series, General Fiction > Post-Naruto
Characters: Jiraiya, Tsunade
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 888 | Read count: 1881 [Report This]
Published: 11/11/13 | Updated: 11/11/13


Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 08/04/14 Title: Chapter 1: The Next Room

This was ... actually really amazing. It reminded me to the shorts stories of a Croatian author called Kamov. The subjects are not the same, but this straight to the point style, this way of simplifying an act that could give rise to so many hypothèses is very effective in making a student in the middle of a biochem review class 2 days before her finale howl in laughter. Publicly. While the prof speaks.



Title: Tobe Batorā by AkatsukiLemonLover23
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: It's a dark world, quiet seemingly and cold, yet bright and uninhibited. The uppercrust controls the world, while the peasants are meant to serve behind the scenes. Ninja serve close to the lords and ladies, the dark creatures of the night that form contracts and see them out to the bitter end. They're from hell, it's said that they feed on souls.. and some of their masters do go missing... Enter Sasuke, an earl that was hurt too much in his life and will do anything to correct it. He makes a pact with one such creature of the darkness and will do anything for his revenge. In a delightful world that blends the life, stories, and settings of "Kuroshitsuji" and "Naruto" (as well as "Naruto Shippuden"), darkness fills the heart and light fills the body. Which one is more powerful, lust of life or love of death?
Category: General Fiction > Timeless, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Angst (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: Akatsuki, All, Clan Uchiha, Clan Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Drama, Fantasy, Graphic lemon, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Spiritual, Supernatural, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death, Incest, OOC, Rape, Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 1331 | Read count: 1501 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/14 | Updated: 19/07/14


Reviewer: Voyna Signed Liked
Date: 21/07/14 Title: Chapter 1: Sono batorā... Memorable

Well, I'll be frank, I hate yaoi. It gives me the creeps ... BUT! Having Orochimaru serving the Avenger does have a nice ring to it, taking in account that Orochimaru is past ambiguous. I actually have this wonder whether this would turn into something à la Countess Bathory. Young children from the poor districts are disappearing, Orochimaru does seem to have tendency to appreciate young flesh and the Avenger might be obliged to, I don't know, use the blood or the eyes of the young and pure to maintain his Sharingan! Hence, Orochimaru has his playthings, Sasuke his whatever-he-needs and this would explain why Orochimaru is Sasuke's assistant. I am intrigued now and since I want updates, this little story is going directly into my favorites!

Author's Response: LOL I will put yaoi warnings up if there's ever any yaoi bitbits :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! I really have a few directions to take with this one, but I'm thinking that there will be a darker twist to it.



Title: Consequences by Kakashifan727
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 10]
Summary: You are a student at CrossUni with a mission. To get as much sex as possible from students to teachers, as well as inhabitants of the town.
Category: OC-centric, Non-Naruto Fiction, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers, Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance > Warned (Shojo-ai/Yuri), Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Warned (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Fusion, Het Romance > Angst, Het Romance > Warned, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Other
Characters: All
Genres: Angst, Drama, Graphic lemon, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, OOC, Rape, Sexual Themes, Yaoi, Yuri
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 17322 | Read count: 1606 [Report This]
Published: 16/09/14 | Updated: 01/05/17


Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 16/09/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*cough*
I have read all type of smut.
But this is not only smut, there is a definite amount of power struggle, domination and a worrying tendency to make unbridled sex commonplace. In other words, it is absolutely great. Makes me take out my psychologist glasses and go Freud on Kakashi's ass.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it; I will have more eventually. I don't update frequently...Honestly surprised someone got those hints that I laid out there.



Title: Saya of the Sand by mst88
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Saya considers her mission with Temari to start the planning of the next Chunin exams, to be held in the Hidden Leaf, boring. Once there she finds that it is anything but boring.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Genma Shiranui, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Temari, Tsunade
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 15886 | Read count: 8025 [Report This]
Published: 14/11/14 | Updated: 10/07/15


Reviewer: Voyna Signed Liked
Date: 14/11/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is this what I think it is?! WELL EVEN IF IT ISN'T, I WANT!!! Gosh, you are good with writing for original characters. I can only bear your OC-centered fics. I really like the comparison Saya drew between Suna and Konoha. You can feel a whole world of differences that are not only based on dunes and trees, that are based on ideals. For one, I would say that Saya is ambitious, the metaphor of keeping one's eyes turned towards the sky. The trees that hide the stars, the sun, could be a good parallel drawn with how Suna people perceive Konoha people. Maybe more practical and less romantic, maybe more short-sighted. I simply love how Genma reacts to Saya and that mention about an invasion got me hooked. For a few reasons. You know I have a thing for invasions and heartbreaking war stories. Will we hear more about it?! Say yes! And God, the tension between Genma and Saya!!! Come on. I saw Kiba was a character as well, so who knows, maybe some love-triangle?! Please, yes! I am jumping up and down here. By the way, if ever you need a beta-reader, I am here for you ... and it has nothing to do with me being a greedy bastard that wants to read the update before everyone else.

Author's Response: Yes this is IT lol. I'm glad you like it so far YEAH!!! I wasn't sure how you were going to react to the Genma angle, although I'm not sure as to how far I will take it because this is about OC x Kiba. This is taking me longer to write because I keep finding myself writing it in first person and then I have to go all the way back to fix it UGH! I write Attack on Titan fics on a different site that is first person so I blame that. I am working on 'cleaning' chap 2 up. As for a beta-reader I don't know what that is or how it works??



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 01/06/15 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ok. So I start with giggles at the idea our beloved Saya got a well-deserved headache. The morning after is never a happy experience. And you see, this is what I mean by Saya being childish, yet a woman. Her bickering with Kiba is so endearing. I can just imagine them getting into a schoolyard brawl, the two of them. This being said however, I cannot imagine how Inuzuka Kiba will be able to conquer our most beloved Saya, when Genma, a full-grown man with so much sex appeal his testosterone makes me wanna faint, cannot! You will have a hard time with that. Or not. Seems to me you have something in mind. AND OMG FINALLY!!! I was looking to see what it was that had made Saya feel weird about Yura's letter. I remember that part of one of the previous chapters where I hated you letting me hang that way. So at least we know someone is messing with Saya and it seems Kiba will have a great role in finding who that is. He is a tracker after all!!! Might it be Utatane? I love that name, btw. Gorgeous. And she did seem fishy, to say the least. Maybe a peace deal isn't all that palatable to the Elders. Remember good ol' Danzo, he liked to fuck some shit up. You have just left us on a damn cliffhanger again. I know you love it. And you know I hate it. I cannot wait to read what is coming on. Now let me sigh in defeat and prepare for tomorrow. Your Karin-fic will be getting some attention from me!

Author's Response: Saya very much wants to get into it with Kiba, for purely perverted reasons, as she stated. Especially after the incident with our beloved Genma. I think I forgot to mention that Yura and Koharu Utatane are both cannon characters. Yura was Sasori's sleeper agent in Sand while Utatane sits on the council with Danzo. I am working on the next chapter which is going to take me some time since the shit is going to hit the fan and I want it to hit in the correct way. I do have the Ko/Tokuma in the works, being my first yaoi, I want to do it justice. I am also not sure if I want to imply sex or just go all out. Kind of a quandary I am in for most everything I write, sometimes less if more kind of thing. I don't know, what do you think? I have been kicking around a few ideas for Kurenai which will have Anko in it, who will be her BA self and not what the manga made her out to be. Hell. No. That much I do know.



Reviewer: Voyna Signed Liked
Date: 15/12/14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh. My. God. This is I believe the most satisfying chapter I have ever read. First of all, you really are a tease. I am sorry, I am just always drooling like a retard when I read something about the war between Suna and Konoha. Now you had to add in a possibility of Orochimaru plotting something (I snickered at Tsunade mentioning Orochimaru could need bodies for only two reasons, the one I thought about was not PG, let me tell you). I am trying to pass my finals here and the only thing I can think about is how the hell Suna and Konoha's war could have been provoked by a third party. What I also appreciated a lot is a more "Eastern" mentality to Saya. You know how the "Western" war mentality is to discredit the opponent but how the "Eastern" mentality is based on the idea of fighting for honor, and does not usually imply humiliating the opponent but on the contrary respecting him. The way Saya analyzed the Hokage, the way she paid her respect through fear and the recognition that even if Konoha might have been conquered by Suna it was still a force just made me nod my head and sigh in pleasure. I have always maintained that Sasuke is the Austro-Hungarian Empire while Naruto is the USA. I like to get out of this Western-war marasma and into something a little bit more idealistic. Now, this being said ... Kiba. Oh, my dear Lord, Kiba. This is the Kiba we know. Childish, accusing, obnoxious. He has the knowledge of the world infused into him. And it seems he will maybe be taught a few lessons by a bundle of charming sarcasm. I love Saya. I simply ... urgh!!! I don't know how you do this, making me love OCs, I generally hate them but here she is. And I can really feel there must be a very sad story behind Saya. There is something of a lost child in the background. Maybe she is an orphan, maybe she was raised by uninterested parents. In some instances she reminds me of Sasori, in some other of Neji and obviously it makes me want to weep. I am still not really over the Naruto ending so virtually anything makes me depressed. But who knows, maybe that girl with Kiba in the last chapter is our very own Saya. Grown up and listening to Kiba spill his shit before bitch-slapping him presto :P



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 16/03/15 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Woman. This chapter was so funny. I can just imagine Kiba and Saya playing at who pisses the farthest. They are both so freakin' territorial, it amazes me. And they both have an enormous pair of obese, radioactive balls that need a lot of space to breath. But I am sorry for our main man, Saya is leading the game 10-0. Oh I love that bundle of Suna goodness. Her semi-perverted thoughts about Genma, her comebacks that always bitch-slap Kiba back to place ... I just realized why Kiba and Saya make a great couple. Saya has this little something emancipated, free and irreverent that reminds one of ... Inuzuka Tsume. Admit it! However I must admit you left me on a cliff-hanger. I hate it when a great writer, like say yourself, introduces an obscure and mysterious new character to the story. Who are you Yura, and I bet you are evil too. Saya might be a spy, which would make our favorite tracker's job just so much more difficult. Imagine Saya was manipulated into doing something against Konoha and Kiba, with his new-found feelings for Saya will be sent to chase her down. Oh God, that would be a tragedy. Now my lovely, darling, adorable mst ... would you maybe be willing to take yet another suggestion for a fic? IT IS JUST A SUGGESTION. How about, now that Kurenai is a single mother, her finding someone? Urgh. That would be very difficult to pull off, I realize that. I am not saying otherwise. But I wondered whether that would interest you ... and then there is this other fic that I was wondering you could maybe tackle, I mentioned it in my replies to your wonderful reviews. How about a TokumaKo. I usually do not read Yaoi. Yaoi is not my cup of tea, but well ... maybe, between two Roy-medical sessions you could find it in your heart to write a strange oneshot about the two of them ... Check the replies I wrote to your reviews, I want you to go read some things of the net that will make you laugh, I swear. Anyways, you kill me with your cliff-hangers. You kill me with your subtle love triangles. You kill me and Roy enjoys the show (damn Mustang, I never even watched Fullmetal Alchemist and yet his womanizing ways already get on my nerves).

Author's Response: Saya and Kiba do make quite the pair when they are together, naïve(to an extent)Kiba up against the very experienced Saya. I didn't realize it (until you pointed it out) that Saya is very much like Tsume. Well shit, that wasn't intentional, she pretty much writes herself, I am just a vessel (as you can attest to my friend). You can bet your ass that there will be more Genma(I confess that I envy the inanimate object that he holds between his lips) I may have to write another OC story just to get THAT fix out of the way. Which brings up your requests, for you(because you are you)I will mull them over. Although I do like the challenge to see who would compliment our dear Kurenai(it saddened me that she lost her true love and soul mate. completely shattered my heart as to what the creator did to her)maybe I will give her the ending she should of had, returning to being a genjutsu trainer if anything you know there was not total peace achieved after the war. It's not human nature, there are still a few badasses that weren't accounted for yet. As for the Tokuma/Ko yoai, I have not ever written one(watched and read - hell yeah) My eyes water at the thought(my equivalent to a manga/anime nosebleed)yes it really does happen I shit you not. I already have something started on paper(yes that lined stuff that you have to use a writing instrument with) I always carry a notebook around incase I am somewhere waiting and inspiration strikes(in this case it was watching color guard practice, not for myself btw) And as for Roy, he is sitting on a shelf with my Daryl Dixon plushie keeping my Black Butler and Ouran Host Club manga's company, yes I am in good health just in time for allergy season T^T. Now to go off and read your responses, I can't wait to read more from you!!



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 27/05/15 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I cannot believe I have been away for so long and you pooped out 3 chapters out of the blue and here I am ... OVERWHELMED. I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED ALL THIS, I WANT TO ROLL ON THE FLOOR AND SCREAM IN ANGUISH. But here come my pathetic excuses, my mom was sick. Still is. Badly. Had to take care of her and prepare my finals. And now I work. So yeah. How are you? Have you gotten better? I remember how sick you were, you poor thing. Snuggling with Fullmetal Alchemist characters. Now let me review this damn thing. I just drooled throughout this chapter. DROOLED. You hear me. I love Saya's liberated spirit that takes no shit when it comes to social conventions and norms. She wants sex with a guy ten years older than her?! She's gonna have sex with a guy ten years older than her. Pillow talk, is the best type of talk. And at the same time, even if she tries to play it hard and all grown-up, there is something childish about her, something that calls out for that father she lost young. Her comebacks are those of a quick-witted child, the things that make her laugh are the same things that would make a child gleeful. I just feel she is at the interface of girlhood and womanhood and navigates that thin line all the time. It kind of makes me sad, actually. And of course, you have Genma appearing after a very informal meeting with Tsunade. A drunk Tsunade. Who hasn't done her paperwork. Again. You had to leave us on a freakin' cliffhanger. This being said ... are you following Naruto Gaiden? I stopped following officially as of today. There is some shit I just can't get over. And I guess this spells the end of my love for Naruto. I will wrap up my fics, all of them, maybe write another oneshot. And then off to original I go. But one thing will never change, I will always follow your fics and get all excited about them. I can't wait until tomorrow so I read chapter 5. Urgh. Cliff-hanger and I need to go home.

Author's Response: Ahhh friend!!! *runs and tackles in a hug* I have missed you and your fics so freaking much. I was worrying as to what happen to you. Very sorry to hear about your mom, I truly hope she gets better. A woman that is like a mother to me is on her second bout with cancer, different from the first. I am doing great! Since it is so nice here finally I have been downing my allergy meds(which are suppose to be non drowsy but make me fall asleep lol)and walking like cars have not been invented. So glad you are still loving Saya, I do hope you continue to. Oh man Genma, don't even get me started on that man, yeah I had to put him in this story. I swear I am going to write an OC story with him in it at some point. WOOF! Ah prepare for more cliff hangers my friend ;) Yeah I have been following and will continue, with my hots for Shikamaru and Kakashi(still hoping to see that face of his) of course there is still Kotetsu, Izumo and Genma I want to catch a glimpse of. After reading today(Thursday)there is also a chance for another character to return(don't want to spoil it for anybody) I so can't wait to read more from you! BTW did you notice that I actually wrote a one shot of Karin that I had been working on since the manga ended.



Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 28/05/15 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You just want to murder me. I will get the hots for Genma. Handsome man, great personality, but I never went full-atomic drool on him. I was busy with my Hyuga darlings. Until now. I understand Saya one-hundred percent, the way I see him through her eyes I would have less self-restrained. I know that molesting a man is a horrible thing to do. But you know, I consider that intensity of his as a testosterone cry to me. SAYA, WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR. GRAB ONTO THAT HUNK OF MASCULINITY AND INDULGE INTO ALL OUR DESIRES. You can have Kiba later too. And you know what, goatees rock, so just keep Yura in reserve. Why can't women have freakin' harems!!! Go for it, girl!
And this is where I start hating on Genma. He is gay. He must be gay. The only explanation to all this is ... he is gay. Just. Have. Sex. In. The. Middle. Of. The. Street. I will never forgive him. Ever. This is the first time my little Catholic Practicing and Religious (all with big letter) person (that's a small letter there) hates a man that wants more than a sexual encounter with a completely wild and unleashed, scorching bomb. And ... here I am processing this very fast. Our little Saya is wild, but y'know what, Inuzuka are surrounded by wild things all the time. And they tame them pretty damn well. Heh. Could it be that our little darling will get a run for her money?! Will Kiba be the one to give her the "I just want to fuck" talk, kicking her ego in the balls as she realizes she is getting attached to him?! So I guess this is the end of Genma. I just feel so sad for him. PLEASE DO WRITE AN OC WITH HIM!!! PLEASE!!! Ok. Let me breathe. Let. Me. Breathe. You know, I hate you. And I will tell you why. If there is ONE character besides Haruno Sakura that rubs me the wrong way, it would be Uzumaki Karin. I hate her. I hate all of team Taka. I just think she is a bad copy of Sakura. Completely. And this is why I hate you ... I NOTICED IT AND I STARTED WHINING BECAUSE I KNEW I WOULD READ IT EVEN IF I HATE THEM ALL. AND THAT I WOULD LIKE IT. I promised I would not read Naruto Gaiden just before coming to this site yesterday. And then, what happened. I realized I would do something worst as soon as I am done reading next chapter of this fic. I would start reading your Karin-centered fic. Now, since there are no OCs in it ... you are going to do me a favor. You are going to go to fanfiction.net. Make yourself an account and publish your Karin-centered fic on there ... this place is a real graveyard for manga character fics. Go to ff.net, trust me. And of course tell me if you do, so I can put you in my faves, duh! About my own fics, Chapter 8 of TFH, expect at beginning of next week. Worst chapter ever. But whatever, then we will go into SasuHina humor. Anyways. Oh and screw Naruto Gaiden. Never again. Done. Over. Finito!

Author's Response: LOL ah Genma. Every time, I see him with that senbon smirk I am overwhelmed by naughty thoughts. I see he has worked his magic on you.Oh man it was so hard for me not to go full on wild sex scene that the Sand would hear between him and Saya. But this story isn't about those two. It took me f o r e v e r to figure out a way to cock block them, so Genma wanting more than a one nightstand was it. He isn't gay, at least I don't think so , , , oh man what if he is?! Damn there goes the yaoi lover in me. I did unearth a fic that I had started a long time ago with Genma, the OC is a Yamanaka, who actually has a brain in her blond head and knows how to use it. Hmm lets see, I did read those articles you mention, I have an even bigger respect for nature. I also read the one you told me not. In hindsight you were correct. Every time I started to read, I'd end up falling to sleep. Every. Time. Best sleep I got though, so yeah. And I do have a FF account, under the same name, I do a LOT of reading there. Maybe I should put my Jiraiya one over there, never really thought about it.



Title: Solace by mst88
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: After the end of the Fourth Shinobi War Jugo, Suigetsu and Karin go into hiding. This is a story of what happened to Karin.
Category: Het Romance > Angst
Characters: Juugo, Karin, Sasuke Uchiha, Suigetsu Hoozuki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1037 | Read count: 1138 [Report This]
Published: 23/04/15 | Updated: 23/04/15


Reviewer: Voyna Signed
Date: 01/06/15 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So I'll admit. I started crying. For so many ridiculous reasons, you know. Ten years of my life spent reading Naruto. Ten years of those spent hoping. I don't even know what I had been hoping for. Just not for what we got, I guess. And you know what is fucked up? I wonder where Karin is. I really wonder where she is, as if she were alive. As if she was more than just a piece of paper with some ink on it. As if she was somewhere alone, abandoned, waiting for Sasuke to come back. I am fucked up, eh? I told you I hated her. And yet, reading this, I just wanted to reach out to her, to grab onto her arm and make sure she was there. That this was the true ending to the story. I am really crying like a fucking baby here. I wanted the real ending to be one where women would toss aside social norms. Why could Karin not bear Sasuke children?! While remaining a kunoichi. And there is something else that I find so strong about these few words. It is the way you so blandly, realistically portray Uchiha Sasuke. Violent emotions have no place in his heart. However he has proven himself attached to both his teams. And I feel you potrayed that so perfectly. I don't know what to tell you. I liked your writing style, I am amazed at how simply you convey thoughts. I wish I could do the same, very honestly. I liked how you introduced all the characters. They had all a place in these few words. And yet, I feel sadness. Urgh, I am a crybaby. I was so proud. Look at me, I am not reading Naruto Gaiden, I am over this shit. Well, I am obviously not. Great job, as always. You made me snivel like a little bitch, goes a long way to tell you just how good an author you are.

Author's Response: I did not mean for that to happen, I feel bad. Well this story was written because I did not like how so many things were left unsaid and how the manga that shell not be named started. That is how I am dealing with it by writing how I want it to go lol. I admit that I got teary eyed by what you said since I sometimes feel my writing is crap, jumbled crap. So what you have said really and seriously means more than you think.