Real name: Bad Panda
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If you're going to read my fanfictions, there are a couple things you should know:
I love my OCs, and take the time to build them and craft them with such delicacy that they do not break the barriers of becoming Mary-Sues or Gary-Stus--at least, this is what I strive for
I like to form actual plots, stories that have meaning to them. One-shots are not exactly my forte.
Itachi Uchiha is my favorite Naruto character. Most of my fanfictions revolve around him.
I do not write yaoi, yuri, or cannon x cannon stories. My stories are 90% OC x Cannon or OC x OC
I'm 22, I know how to write, I know correct grammar and punctuation, and I'm not afraid of criticism.
If you like my stuff, tell me you like my stuff. It encourages me to write more.
Rated: 12/12A [Reviews - 1]
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction, Non-Naruto Fiction > Original stories
Characters: OC
Genres: Dark, General, Horror
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2163 | Read count: 1970 [Report This]
Published: 15/03/13 | Updated: 15/03/13
Date: 20/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: The Attic
Wow, I really liked this! I'm a fan of short little horror stories that are more creepy and suspenseful than they are actually scary. You did a good job at capturing all of that.
Still...there's the mystery of the sounds of stuff moving across the floor behind Pat. It makes you wonder what was really in there. Ghosts, perhaps, trapped there from the previous families who lingered on in the attic where they probably left this world.
Whatever is up there, it doesn't just take kids, obviously. It's like a sort of black hole...taking every living thing that enters. I like it. I like it a lot.
If you get the itch, write some more of these! -OBP
Author's Response: Thanks. Half the fun was keeping it mysterious. I originally tried to write a couple sequels, but, like most horror stories, it just kept getting cheesier with each one, so I decided to quit while I was ahead. I have a couple other short stories that I plan to trot out between installments of Tradewinds, so keep an eye out. :P