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Story notes: I don't own naruto, his creator does I just wrote what things I thought of and hints others. 1. Chapter 1: The Beginning of Anew by crazykittylover [Reviews - 9] (3022 words)
This is the first chapter; duh-this is also my first story so please say anything that you thinks needs fixing....God knows I'm fixing a lot already.


this chapter has be REVISED! thou i had 2800 words b4 no 2958, i thik it = btr than b4
2. Chapter 2 Confrontation by crazykittylover [Reviews - 5] (1276 words)
i no my character prob;em sounds like mary-sue, but im fixing it! still read on, i hav plenty chapters comming, enjoy, plus rev! i luv hearing what people have to say about my stories also this has been REVISED so its different from what i had b4. i think its mor believable this round and not to disappointing.

word count before 900 now under REVISED is 1226 ^^
3. Chapter 3 Interrogation by crazykittylover [Reviews - 2] (1871 words)
I do not own Naruto or myself, the three guys tht fight over me do: Gevdwyn (yes hes actually dude in real life), Alex Waters, and Yillin Zhoa. I do own Jasmine, so dont use her, she my emo phsyoic side.
Enjoy! Do rev, i like revs the critcs and the funnys. Any will do. TY this chapter has bn REVISED word count b4 823 now 1840 /blah/-thinking (thoughts)
4. Chapter 4 New Ninja Aboard by crazykittylover [Reviews - 4] (2041 words)
I don’t Naruto and I like the people that read the story to rev, t-y. Also who here has hear and listened to NIGHTCORE? It’s a techno band. Enjoy the chapter, plus I know Ibiki was OC a little, deal. Its only way I could get the remarks in w/o really thinking about it

This chapter has been REVISED! I have improved it drastically in my option. the word count before had was- 1971 and now is- 4493 please let me know if you have read this before what you think of the new chapter; was it more plot thicken, informative, or is still the same rating you think it was before hand? Let me know please, I'm truly trying to improve as a writer in my stories and wish to make sure the reader likes what they expect from a fiction they have chosen. Thanks!!

Also I like to introduce my beta reader; Sarah! She is totally wicked and I’m glad to have her work with me; thanks Sarah!

{Blah} means they’re speaking English- can’t figure out how to save HMPTL or whatever it was so I can have italics: if you know how to save on that please let me know, it’s really aggregating.
5. Chapter 5 The Secret Revealed With Ramen by crazykittylover [Reviews - 4] (1719 words)
rev, this chapter mostly about jasmine's food intake problem, soo just enjoy it and plz rev. chow
6. Chapter 6 Horrific Memories and A Chance by crazykittylover [Reviews - 5] (1759 words)
this is gruelsom so if your squimish do not read! other than that Enjoy! also plz rev, i love reviews, they make me happy and make me feel like crap. ty
7. Chapter 7 A Scuffles And a Laugh! by crazykittylover [Reviews - 5] (1855 words)
Ok I no last chapter started and was mostly gruesome, cruel and a horrid thing to do to an 8 old child, but it happens, maybe not so bad as that but that could happen to someone. Yes Jasmine was 8 when that happen, get over it, the ride is going to get crazier with this girl so either buckle up or run!
8. Chapter 8 Insanity Seen by crazykittylover [Reviews - 5] (1679 words)
hey this chapter took me not too long, if u like then rev! i really i like revs. yes Jazz is going to seem very nutty in the nxt ch so brace urselfs, its going to get interesting.

^_^

also who here has ever tried peanut butter and pickles on toast? its the bomb! dnt judge till you try!
9. Chapter 9 A Bite of Indecency by crazykittylover [Reviews - 5] (3804 words)
You guys been wondering why I had named the "mysterious" guy in Jazz's head Jason...I’ve never actually seen one of the Jason movies, but this Jason is a basic crazy guy too. Oh...if you're a dude and you don’t like people...uh...hitting other guys in the crotch a lot then...u might want to skip the part Jason (Jazz) is against Zabuza...just a warning

also i dont not own naruto only Jasmine, ^_^ review
10. Chapter 10 A Interesting Thought by crazykittylover [Reviews - 3] (1134 words)
this just a talking scene and a faint glimpse of Jasmine's mind...and its the beginning of something...i tell u later. any way i dnt own naruto, wished i did but i dnt so thts tht. also reviews plz, i dnk how many times i must say it...ive been depressed so plz say something...i need to no people actually like this story...i no sum do but more is nicer. enjoy ^_^
11. Chapter 11 Anger with a Whole New Meaning! by crazykittylover [Reviews - 4] (3331 words)
Hey! well this is the next chapter...I have edited the chapters before this soooo there might be a few facts you'll need to reread in them before continuing if u want to....anyway i like to thank all the helpful, supportive reviews i have recieve and hope to recieve more....ty Dropdeadthendance, Ayako Haru, Crimson Lily, Vixkill, VampQueen14, and Kikyaru360...u guys are totally awesome *gives them Hug of Doom*

Dropdeadthendance ty and i would like to take u up on that offer! anyway enjoy the chapter...i try to add more but i do have chem during the summer....the farther u go the mor u can acheive i say!
^_^

12. Chapter 12 Stuff Animals with Strange Powers by crazykittylover [Reviews - 3] (2094 words)
ty 4 all the revs!!! ^_^ they make me very happy! this chapter's name...well i couldnt really fig a dif way to explain the sum up of this chapter...so enjoy!

Thank You Dalaw! ur couple revs made my day... and ty for rating my other story and rev it as well! I make sure to always giv my best on my story and my reviews for your stories and all the other peoples that are kind enough to giv me on! TY!!
13. Chapter 13 Time for Inari by crazykittylover [Reviews - 3] (2519 words)
ok i know i was on the dead line on releasing the next chapter but, well....i hav cross country and a few anxidy attacks distracting me but no worrys! i like to say ty so much for those that hav reviewed and rated my story(s) you all mean so much to me! And........i learned a new word from my *cough* reading....i wont tell wat it is but i do have it in this chapter and if someone can guess what it is i hav a surprise for u! its a tricky word and it means to read in a popular lang tht people can learn in highskool.

oops just gave a huge hint so u betr b able to guess it..if u cant oh well... anyway read on!

And may MICHEAL JACKSON REST IN PEACE (R.I.P)!!!
14. Chapter 14 Clouded Eyes by crazykittylover [Reviews - 3] (958 words)
okay i just finish this chapter on paper then on comp so it might not be the final final thing...but anyway ty all for the revs! and 1000 views yeah! I also relize tht i didn't actually put the new word i learned in the last chapter...imputting in the next chapter slaps forehead* so it should be there...remember it means to read in spanish.

also the crapy joke i keep making on my fav storys revs is crap. i no and if u dont get it well this is wat it = right on....since were writers i put write on...in engl. the two words are pronouced the same way.
sry for the confusion! anyway enjoy the chapter and give me feed back on it! chow^_^

ROCKAPELLA RULZ!
15. Chapter 15 Death Still Claims a Victim by crazykittylover [Reviews - 2] (2334 words)
ok i no tht the last one was short sry! sry! but this chapter i swear is going to b good! plus im going to try very hard to get the Zabuza arc done and over with before i leave for my gram's house 4 2 wks...wish me luck! Enjoy the chapter and tell me wat u think!
16. Chapter 16 Fate's New Balance and Will by crazykittylover [Reviews - 4] (2927 words)
Okay, I’m very sorry for making you my readers wait for chapter 16 and you’ve been probably been wondering what has happened to poor Jasmine. I’ve been in TX and been well honestly, very lazy and shamefully shaky on my responsibilities. I know there’s no real good excuse for me, and I apologize. If any have seen my recent updates on my bio then you would notice there are a lot of new stories I’m working on….my brain has been pretty scrambled from this, I’m trying my best to start all these stories to get them off my brain, but that’s easier said than done about spreading my work time over 13 stories. It’s a pain and the only reason I’m doing it is because I’ve been reading and watching so many different things and keep getting new ideas for new stories.

My brain is just made for that kind of thing, brainstorming new stories; my older brother kind of takes advantage of it and has me help him on his stories, not that I’m complaining. I love my older brother very much.

I’ve also wanted to keep on my favorite stories which is now currently at the number of 74 stories and growing. Yes I’m aware that’s a crap load of favorites. I can’t help it…people’s writing here is just super fantastic and I just can’t appreciate just one. Also does anyone know the author of Hot Blooded Woman, apparently for some odd reason that person deleted his story or has re-named it, and I really liked it. It was one of my original first favorites. If you know the author please e-mail me, I would truly appreciate it.

Well, I can tell you are probably wondering when my ramblings will end, so I’ll stop rambling after telling the people who have continued to read my stories and cared to review. Kurokiku, Crimson Lily, Ontuva, Dalaw, DropDeadThenDance, and Nkbz thank you for continue to reading my story...and thank you beta reader Nkbz ^^ I happy that you helped as much as you could (sorry for bagging on you, you know how my mood swings work). Kurokiku your stories are awesome! I can’t believe how hard I laugh at them! And please update soon, the site seems to get dimmer and dimmer as the days go on without some funny stories posted every other week or so….

O.O nuts, I almost forgot to mention; after the very much considerate criticism from my beta reader and older brother, I went back and starting fix all the problems I can find to the perfection that you my readers very much deserve. If I still messed up in anything, please tell me. Don’t be shy like Hinata in the beginning of the series; instead shout it, scream it, or throw crap at me for it. Also I’ve noticed that viewings for the last couple chapters has decreased, I do not feel good about this please point out my mistakes. I won’t fight you on the terms of criticism…I just want to be a better writer for you. Thank you and read on my readers, read on.
17. Chapter 17 Let the Music commence! by crazykittylover [Reviews - 2] (6622 words)
Gomen (sorry??) on being so late on updates....I’ve had a lot to do trying to stay in my advance (2) classes is tough! Ugh...and I HATE Geometry? Sigh...any who I’ve being trying to find a beta reader on this beta site whose name escapes me....w/e no success...I found I really truly liked but they be to overload to spend time on beta-in my story. T^T oh well, I just got to get back up and try again. I have spent however a great deal of time on this chapter! The quality of the chapter is??????(Questionable) On my part...I wanna update soon I can work on my Halloween special. Yes I have a special and it does tie in with the story….I wanna get it as a good as I can get it. Plus I’m fairly well aware that the holiday has past some time ago…but I still need it to get things rolling with Sasuke and Jasmine. X3

I’ve turned 16 yaeee times for me to get a job and start paying insurance bills on auto! ***note the sarcasm***

So...yeah...I’ve REVISED chapter 1, 2 and 3. Chapter 4 is in the beginning of REVISMENT; I wanna add more drama! Anyone have any ideas or want to help me revised it? I have the entire thing plotted just one small part that is crucial that I can’t put in the terms that I want it to be in….

Also I’ve looked back on many of my notes over the months on the direction of my story....it has evolved quite a bit! **chuckles** I see now I had originally wanted to kill Zabuza for Shippuden purposes but...now I got to figure out what to do with him, plus a few things in the future which I’ll point out when the time comes or they’ll be spoilers for my story which is a no noo. Lolz XD. This will be likely a REVISED chapter later in the month or New Year as well so yeah....check back here and there...

I noticed that my story rd count is over 2000 ^^ makes me very happy to see this (I think I’m responsible for 150 of them through editing) and I’m at 64 revs which is also very uplifting! Seriously it is pure awesomeness!

Finishing the rambling u twit is what sum of you are thinking XD u no u love it. (Not really just being weird XD) so read on and reviews your options; I really TRULY love to hear what u have to say and does anyone hear know Japanese fairly well… There are some words I wanna translate into Japanese....=P and so ending with enjoy and shout out (don’t really shout =P) your options/problems with the chapter! also...this has to be like the longest chapter I have ever done and not had revised it....it's 6440 words long...Yes I know that are story that have longer chapters but, to me this is a nice step foward in improvement...I guess meh enjoy!
18. Chapter 18 Halloween Fun by crazykittylover [Reviews - 1] (3848 words)
Okay...I’m only updating so many times so I can get the chapter up to date to the Christmas special I hope to write on time…Anyhow this chapter has lemon…or smut…I’m not sure what to call it…but, it contains lemon stuff in it and all and the lemon stuff will come again quite a few times so …I’m just warning you what’s in this chapter. It goes with the story’s plot so no hate reviews on it…just tell me what you thought of it for it’s my first lemon or smut stuff…whatever you call it. So …um…enjoy!
>>blah word count is 4858
19. Chapter 19 The Aftermath by crazykittylover [Reviews - 2] (2169 words)
ok....I’m aware that this chapter is like....a filler chapter I guess...but, that's what I had plan so yeah. The quality is questionable but I did my best staying up as later hours as usual. The word count smaller than I wanted it but I shall fix it after I realize the Christmas special on time! The word count is...2064... review please and by the way check out this author Brumal's stories....dude they are really deep and insightful...*wishes that she could write as well* any who review what you have thought and enjoy!
20. Chapter 20 The Cursed Mistletoe by crazykittylover [Reviews - 1] (4422 words)
Ok this chapter does have a little PG-13 in it just so you know and this is the Christmas special two days after the holiday....I messed around yesterday and on the holiday I was working a different story. I'll be updating one more time this week by Friday for the New Years special for this story then I’m focusing on school so the story won't be updated for a while...just so you know and don't like start hating or such.

Any who this took me like the entire day = 5 hours? to create of the top of my head which is sad since this is the story that I usually spend all my free time on thinking on....pathetic yes I have no really life...meh, the word count is like ..4305 words so...this will be revised for it is my new year’s goal by the end of 2010 to have all my chapters 10,000 words each. On every story I publish hopefully...well let’s just start with this one eh? well I need to stop babbling and get on with the story so please review and I don't mind burns cause in my heart I know you either mean well or just don't like me which either I’m fine with so enjoy the chapter!

BTY: > blah < either mean dream or past related to future stuff…can’t figure out how to fix the stupid thing to do italics ….I’m really a baka at this so help…? OK I was looking back at my old chapters on chapter 17... I'M SO SORRY ABOUT IT! I FORGOT TO ADD NEARLY ALL THE CHAPTER! That's like got to be the worst thing I've done besides eating olives stuffed with blue cheese, don't try it; it tastes like vomit. Any way I'm very very very sorry that I made that stupid error and have made sure the entire chapter is now posted! Thank you for all your helpful and positive reviews Rowanrose, Dalaw, Ontuva, Bre2k8 now Sasaui Uchiha I think, Vixkill, Ayako Haru, Kikyaru360, Crimson Lily, Nbzk, and Dropdeadthendance. Rowanrose your recent reviews not only on this story but other that I wrote made my day and I thank you. Crimson Lily your reviews on my other stories also made my day thank you too. Dalaw I like how you tell me what you find disagreeable along with Nbzk, thank you both and the rest thanks for reading!