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Rise Of a new Hope by Loto_06

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Chapter notes: Lol when u read he will see Naruto as hokage of Leaf village. i didnt wanted to see him..But had to choice,
since i was out of names to use
Legend

"Talking"
/Thinking/
(important)
*past thinking*
^Sounds^


Introductions
Villages:

Leaf
Leaf Village, Joined Earth Thunder, Sand.
Element: Fire, Water

Sound:
the most powerful of the villages.
Element: Sound

Earth Thunder:
Earth thunder, Joined Sand and Leaf.
Element: Earth, Lightning

Wind (sand):
Sand Joined the Earth, And Leaf.
Element: Air

Saku Village:
a new village created, not much in formations about this village.
Element: All different kinds of Elements










Characters: Shin Ryden
Age: Main character (will be seen)
Sex: male
Rank: An academy student (11)
Clan: Ryden Clan (Last two bloodlines, Fein and Shin)
Jitsu: No jitsu
Village: Earth Thunder Country (Thunder Side)
Information: Lives with his brother, whose parent was killed during the Sound Invasion,
They Lived in a ruin House of the Thunder part of earth Thunder Country,
He wears a Head Band (Marks with a symbol Thunder) given by his father who died during the invasion (trying to protect The Thunder Village)
He Wears a Dark Black Pants With Two Swords pictures pointing across from each other,
And . . . Wears a Dark Black Vest, And dark blue T-shirts under,
Shin usually didn’t like his brother because of him over shadowing him,
Shin went to Academy School,. Usually Fein (his brother) payed food for both of them.








Characters: Fein Ryden
Age: older then Shin Ryden (by two years)
Sex: Male
Rank: Genin (13)
Clan: Ryden Clan
Jitsu: Chiden Ball, Ryden bloodline, Basic Jitsu
Village: Earth Thunder Country (both Sides)
Information: Fein has light brown hair, which was like a raven shaped hair.
Ein was always Cheerful and looked on the bright side of things
People always looked up to him. He wears an orange Jogger Pants with blue sidelines. He wore A Orange T-shirts, with white Stripes across his chest
much like Naruto's clothes
He also had two other friend’s Named Sahara, A loud mouth girl, who liked Fein
And Kira an Over headed Knuckle Ninja, who thought Fein as a rival, and they’re senses’ Hero Kubu, which they began to do missions, They were called Team 7, Out of 10 teams . . . Fein was the older brother of Shin. And because of that Shin thought that Fein had hated Shin because what had happened. During the invasion When Sound invaded (age 9)







Character: Euku Kinsume
Age: Same age as Shin Ryden (11)
Sex: Female
Rank: Academy Student
Clan: A family clan (no clan)
Jitsu: basic Jutsu’s
Village: earth Thunder Village (Earth Side)
Information: unlike Fein or Shin, Euku lived in a rich living style, she lived in The Earth Side of the two Earth thunder countries, but She didn’t mind anything about it because she hanged out with her friend Shin Ryden, Euku met Shin near a swing(outside the academy)
when they were younger,
Nothing to say much she was a regular girl, living a regular life. Which sided with Earth.





Bloodlines;
Ryden bloodline =
The Ryden Bloodline power is the eyes transform into a dark-blue eyes much like the shanigan (from the ulchiha Bloodline) And copies any move that comes, The Ryden Has Two levels, Ryden Level which I just explained







Muoskudan Level Two=
And Muoskudan Which allows the user to sent a Power form of thunder waves
Into the enemy, which stops him from moving, then sends a flow of thunder chakra under the ground into the feet of the enemy which absorbs the enemy chakra into the user, But with a limit, Costs the Chakra to overflow until very little is left then stops automatically. Which the user passes out.
There only one way to get this kind of power is from a large source of emotions.
Angry, Sad, And Happy.










Chapter 1
A new hope

...It all begins in the year 44, in the land of the Shinobi, where all ninjas’ lived, Provoked by widespread civil hate toward each other, and the need for power and territory, they divided into eleven villages . . . they were, leaf, rock, cloud, mist, sand, waterfall, rain, grass, sound, snow and star . . . Of course, since they had to be dependable on others all their lives, this payed a huge toll on each village, as they had many economic troubles. Few states, arose and developed a dominant reputation, while others sank, watching its power, and wealth disappear. Five states rose up and later formed the league of Shinobi, and they were, sand, waterfall, mist, Earth, and sound. Angered by the fact that they were not chosen . . . the other states demanded a position, and soon, chaos was everywhere, and eventually, the fighting only worsened, as the league of Shinobi started to fall apart . . . it is now year 152, the chaos has only worsened and the fighting has not ceased . . . Everything became into ruins Only Four nations survived known as . . . Leaf(fire), Sound, Earth Thunder, and Wind (sand). While in year 149. Sound invaded Thunder country and lost. So Thunder country had no choice to but too, merge with earth . . . (in order to Protect the Thunder element) Thus created the Earth Lighting Country . . .


The earth village was stocked when they asked to be joined by the thunder village, by thinking along time about this, the kage finally agree with them joining the village, which the name change to Earth Thunder Country, And the kage agreed that the village will be cut into two pieces, Which Earth on one side, and thunder the other, this didn’t go well as the kage had hoped, The Earth hated the Thunder so much, So the Thunder villagers were scared, walking into the Earth side, so they didn’t complain so they said nothing, they were treated badly in academies’, and other places, especially the Earth Side Area.



Earth Thunder Village

Two years later. Shin Ryden Ran across to get into the Academy because the villagers of Earth were throwing rocks at him, "get out of this area YOU Scum" said the villagers, "are you okay"
Said Euku Kinsume while looking shocked
Euku Kinsume was a girl at my academy, I was her friend, "yeah im ok" replied Shin, "well were going to be late for class" Shin was always hated by the teachers and classmates, because he was the only one of the thunder village in the class, so he was treated badly, not even the kage helped, Unlike his brother who was treated equally because of his 'talent'. "today was the day of our graduation" said Euku, "Hope you can become a Genin too and get our headbands""I don’t think im graduating" relied Shin "im No good im just a coward" "No you’re not, come on" As Euku Grab a hold of Shin hand, and Ran inside His Brother was passing by, Seeing his little brother, running inside. With his friend Kira saying "come on I wanna finish this mission quickly"
As Sahara pulling him away, "Leave your brother for while, and come."
At the End of the Day, Shin was Sitting near the edge of the Earth thunder village
Thinking /This village hates us thunder villagers so much, no one will notice me gone/ As Shin walked away not knowing where he was going, he was stopped by A man in a dark robe with red clouds on it, "where are you going" looking without any curiosity, "I don’t know, this village hates me" Suddenly the Dark Robe man Noticed something about this boy "come with me little boy And you can be accepted"
As he has something in his eyes that was liked by the dark robe man
"accepted?" Shin relied..
He walked away, "come" as the dark robe man went further... Hatred for the Earth Country, Shin ran followed him, leaving Euku, and his brother behind,
One day I’ll come back and get revenge To the Sound and To the Earth,
For all They Did too Thunder,

Two Years Later
In Saku Village, A hidden village formed by the four akutski,
(but the akutski was different then the series Instead they formed a village to destroy all over villages to control the entire land and get the remaining Bukuu)
Bukuu was another word for The Demon Monsters Like the nine tail fox

Shin had truly advanced from the change of environment, He was accepted there, During those times he learn the Ryden Bloodline limit, The Ryden, And learn a jutsu called Rendian Blast, Which the user Allows to sent chakra in a ball, much like the resengan, He was known as Shin Ryden of the hidden Saku Village, Shin Change over the years while his hate became larger, he wore a dark black Robe much like the Akutski wore, Only a few talented Shinobi's could wore those, he still wore that thunder head band given to him by his father

Shin has been called to see The leader Of Saku which name is Naroni
(Which took Shin in) As Shin walked faster trying to avoid a certain teammate
Yuri of the Saku, Yuri was the same age of Shin (13)
She was a foul mouth girl, always yelling, at Shin, well only him,


"You Fucken Moron" "where have you been you Shithead" Naroni been calling for you,
Shin looked annoyed "move" In a dark layer voice 'Crack' Hits Shin on the head "don’t give me that Move thing you do, come..." dragging Shin by the foot,
/damn... I hate this.../ thinking Shin

"Shin-kun, Yuri-chan You have a meeting with Naroni?." Kamizuri calmly said, as he stepped in Looking at Shin and Yuri,
Kamizuri was a person, guy trusted by Naroni, which he was the assistant of..
"please step inside" Kamizuri said lightly, As he open the door,
In the Shadow siting on his chair that looked like a King throne, Was Naroni
"I have a mission for you too" with his sinister voice, "hai Master" said Shin
as they lay on one knee bowing down,
"I want you three to head into the leaf village And kill a certain man named Hero Kubu,
(thats Ein Senses, Shin looking Stocked) we have reports that he was seen in that village, He had a paper documents that is too allied with them, we can't afford to them be allies" "Three?" in a rude voice said Yuri, "yes welcome come in ,Yakushi"
"Well Yakushi," Shin said in a not care able way
Yakushi always hated Shin because of him was the favorite of Naroni

All three went out outside the leader house, and waited,
"we will go as soon as Yuri ready" said Shin "Shut the fucken up" Yuri yelled. Running towards them, Shin may have been a genius of Saku but still he was a bit brash…but that was mostly around Yuri. It seemed as if the foul mouthed Yuri cussed more than usual when Shin was around, and she seemed to hit him a lot. It was rumored that Yuri really was infatuated with Shin since they say ‘You always hurt the ones you love’ and judging from the amount of bodily harm she had done to Shin they must be engaged.
They went Running out...


One Week later
Shin, Yuri, And Yakushi. Was near the boarders of The fire country,
"Took a fucken long time" Yuri Yelled, Shin was annoyed At her,
"We wait here," Shin relied, Outside the boarder of the fire country,
waiting for Hero, to come with his genin, "Keep a look out Yakushi" said Shin
Were going to attack them, they have to cross here, Outside the boarder


That Night,

"Where The Fuck did that shit head go?" Yuri Yelling in a angry voice
"I don’t know him, maybe he went to look around" Relied Yakushi
Shin thought
/wonder if my brother will be there/
Waiting, Shin wonder far away from their station, Then he notice someone, washing her hair in the lake with her pinkish hair, wondering /who that...?/ Thought Shin
He went close and show symbol (Earth Thunder)
/Thats them/ Shin quickly mumbled, Waiting for an chance to attack them,
Then he notice something, Only she was alone.. /Where his teammate?/
"He he .."Chuckled Shin.. Then suddenly from behind he was attack, With tailjutsu, Kick No hum, substitution jutsu said the guy. with the orange jacket
/this guy is fast, I can't take him on my own/ Shin run heading back From branch to branch.
Shit I got to lose this guy, before I turn back to the station, after awhile finally he went back.
Finally he was at his station "looks like they know were here"
Said Shin.. "Where have you been?" "I was worried"
/what the hell going on? Yuri never shown signs of Anything for that matter/
Then suddenly, Yuri hold close To Shin, Hugging him, Shin looking Shocked
"don’t you tell anybody about this or I have to beat the living hell out of you"
Yuri said calmly. Then She smiled,
/so Yakushi is already asleep like usually he doesn’t really care if even he does die/


The Next day,
"We lost track of them, Come on, We better hurry near the village"
Kunois no jutsu (summoning jutsu) A small dog wearing a cape came from the smoke, "alright we need your nose, follow hero scent" "come we better hurry"
Said Shin, "come on everyone, We may be Genin but we can take on Hero,"
Pick up the pace, as they run from branch to branch.."dammit you shit head, we already lost them,"Yelled Yuri. After a little while, We finally kept up to them,
A kunai flew close by, As Shin Threw another kunai at it, So you guys were following us said, Non other then Hero, With his three genin companies
/Thats the pink haired girl/ And him... Ein, "What’s wrong Shin? Come on"
Said Yakushi "we better move" "leave or be killed" as they were on the breaches. Shin took off his Head Band and put it in his pocket , and Yuri and Yakushi know they were in serious business, Because the only time he takes it off is when he is about to fight, a serious battle.
The dog disappeared into a puff smoke.
I'll take on the Pinky said Yuri,
Give me that ninja with the bad looks which was Kira
"he he.."this will be fun, said Shin, looking at his brother,
"Hey Brother, Remember me?" As Ein looked surprised "Shin?"
"Yes thats me" in an ironic way.. "Why Shin? why did you leave?"
"Euku And me Missed you so much.. We have thought u had died
Just because what had happened? when the sound invaded?" said Ein



*Flash back when Shin was in the thunder village"

"Father Run!" The Sound Shinobi running towards them, "Run!"
As Ein and Shin saw their father fight numerous Shinobi, Suddenly
A Shuriken hit his father at the back of him, making him fall down,
Shin notice something His father threw a Head band towards Shin
Hide here, with the rest of the Thunder villagers" said Shin mother..
The Next day his mother didn’t return to come and pick them up
Walking out of the burned down village, We Must head to our ally nation Earth
Said Other Thunder villagers, Everyone started walking to Earth country
Shin picked something up on his way to Earth country , which was his father headband.



Back To The Present
"Ein.. He he," Chuckled Shin, we shall fight, and see who was stronger,
Bloodline Ryden With his eyes, Shin saw everything, "You have learn the Ryden."
Ein said, He unleashed Ryden too,
As Shin charged, -Fire no jutsu- A blaze Of fire came from the mouth of Ein
Shin did some hand signs, - Thunder blast jutsu- from his fist sparked lightning, and punched slightly a little off hit Ein, /that was close/ especially Ein
"Im sorry brother," it is time to lose, -Chiden Ball no jutsu- as Ein did some hand signs, Chiden ball was like the chidori, "Hehe.. u did gotten powerful"
As he sent Chakra to his palm, to make Rendian Blast, -Rendian Blast no jutsu-
As they both swing into each other, until a bright blast, came... They still had Enough chakra to bought fight.. they continued to fight, until only one lived as winner, Hero could do anything but watch, since he was stopped by the two Suku village Shinobi's Yuri and Yakushi. they continued to fight using Ryden, Chiden ball, Rendian Blast, and some more Jutsu's.. -Earth style Nura no Jutsu-
Ein grabs the bottom of the ground, and made an armor like suit,
"You will lose now" He Charge Shin, with all his might, in a last effort,
"Shin got Hit" yelled Yuri, as she watched Shin fall to the ground,
Yuri ran towards Shin and got out his kunai "get back!" She took Shin and said
"we have lost today, come on Yakushi" as they ran into the forest..

"We did it" said the pinky haired girl "yeah Euku I know"
"hey Man its all thanks to you we didn’t get hurt much" Said Kira
come we must head to the leaf village, as they forward fourth from branch to branch. After a day, they finally got to the leaf village, two Shinobi questioned them, "state your business." "we here to ally a treaty with the Hidden Leaf Village Konoha," said Hero. "we completed our first b rank mission" said Kira.
"For what of a price?" said nervously Ein,
"Come Ein" Which grab a hold of Ein arm, "lets go eat"
Euku dragged Ein around, "damn him" Boil of jealous came from Kira "ahh!" I don’t get him, as Kira Rubbed his back of his head.
/why does he always get the girls/
Hero Laughed and Laughed "come lets go eat"...


meanwhile

Can't Believe we lost to Earth Thunder peasant's
"They are regular peasants" Shin growled "Fucken damn ass next time you try something like that, im going to kill you myself, ^Crack^ "Ouch!" Shin fell,
"Same old Yuri.." and smiled "its been along time since I seen you smile" Said Yuri, And laughed
*sign* /I don’t get these two/ thought Yakushi
/Yuri started hitting Shin and he laughed/ *sign*
"just get some rest and sleep" Said Yuri and knocks him out cold by hitting him on the head as usually.





Two Weeks later back at Suku,

they finally reach Suku, And headed into the Leader room
With disappointment in each eye, both the three looked, "come in" said Kamizuri, Naroni said in disappointment, "I trusted in it, now you have failed me for you three will be split and made into different teams. I knew you were going to fail me.." "then why sent us to fight someone stronger? this makes nonsense" said Shin..
Hehe, as the evil smirk on Naroni face /for they don’t know what will happened/

A year Later
Yuri was paired into a group cause the Suku 4, Which had only four members,
These member were the best in the entire village, except for Shin
which Naroni favorites the best, those four was Yuri of course, Kon, Sasuko,
and Aborn,

Shin who cannot join Suku 4 because of Yuri, So they out him in a group called team 1,
which was like any other ninja group, which had a jouunin , Karian a female lady,
And two other girls shin didn’t care about, Rau, And Fau, they were both twins
as the same age of Shin,

Team 1 please report to the Leader Room,
Shin and team went to walk to leader's room, Shin hate became larger when his brother defeated him in battle,
"I ask you here to find a Person by the name of Abrino Sinuka" for he has something I want, "bring him here, he lives in the sound village." Yelled Naroni, "Hai Leader Naroni"
They walked out the door and started to walk, "so Shin, you miss Yuri yet?"
said Rau, Shin looked angerly at Rau and said "I only do my mission, Leave me alone," shin thought /if Yuri was here, she hit me down into a grape for saying something like that.../
As they continued to walk, into the sound country. Which was The old Thunder country.
“Come on” we have a little while until we can get into the sound,
“I think it will take us 4 days or less.” said Karian,

After that certain time

“We finally at the boarder of the sound village!” Yelled Fau “We wait until we can think of a plan” said Shin in an angry voice. “We wait, until wait! Hide a Shinobi’s are coming”
Shin went to hide on top a tree while the others went behind it. “Haha.. Thats so true” said by one of the shinobi’s . ‘We better be careful about this village they have strong shinobi’s here”
^Haha..^ “Not as strong as us.”said Fau and Rau. “Come follow me, we split into two teams” Said in a softly voice, Karian “okay Shin and Rau Go in the left side, and I and Fau will go right,
Remember our mission to locate A boy named Abrino Sinuka, alright split.”
/lucky bitch Rau, I wanted to be with Shin/ thought Fau. As they Run into opposite side
“come on Rau we better find that boy before anyone else does, because I heard reports someone is after him too,”Said Shin “sure ok shin” They Hurried to find Abrino
“We head into the village”, Said Karian “you sure about this? We don’t want to be Cot with the enemy,” said in a scared voice, Fau. They Enter the village, “shh, we better be careful with these Sound Scum,”


MEANWHILE

“Ok Saku 4, I want you to watch Team 1, they are heading to sound village, If they find a boy
By the name of Abrino Sinuka, kill team 1 and bring back the boy” Naroni said.
“Why kill team 1?” shocked Yuri, “if you don’t do this, you be called a traitor of this village
“yes...sir,” Looking depressed Yuri, “wuhaha now you prove which side you on Yuri,”
“This will be fun killing Shin”Said Kon “Leave you Fucken ass out of this” Yuri yelled


Back to Shin at sound village

We in a house waiting for someone, “Can’t believe they sent us into sound village, this is like a death sentence” Rau Softly said, “its not so bad, but we have to be careful” reply Shin,
After while of Looking they finally found That boy, Near a big pond outside the sound village
“hey Rau don’t talk to him yet, we’ll watch him from the shadows of the trees, I want you to find Senses and Fau, I’ll wait here until you return”. ”ok” said Rau as she jumped from into another tree. “Ok I’ll wait here” “There he is! Throw Rocks everyone!” as the villagers threw rocks.
“Ahh!” yelled the boy as he was running being scared “Leave me alone!” “Monster Kill him” the villagers yelled. One of the villagers threw a knife at him, surprised Shin jumped to block the knife. Using his kunai. “How dare you, get out of our way, he’s a monster, he has cursed out village when he was born”. Looking down, “How dare me? You tried to kill an innocent boy who did nothing”
Looking up, He gazed on the villagers that was there, Suddenly the villagers got chills when the evil look came, “we going to tell the shinobi’s”. “Go! Friends find Ryo” “come on Abrino”
“you know my name and how?”said Abrino “we here to take you to a place, where you can be treated better, a place where your accepted” said Shin. “I don’t trust you” Abrino said,
“I don’t lie” said Shin, “follow me or be killed by the villager there attacking you”
its this guy, So you’re an other ninja’ your not allowed in our village” said by some man in dark
“haha. You leave now or be killed by me” said Shin. “Well I have to kill you, I guess” said by the man. “Go Ryo!” said the villagers. Ryo came charging in, I manage to jump and miss his attack
“Fire no Jutsu!” Fire came from Shin mouth, Ryo used his Sound jutsu “Sound blast jutsu!” Sound came from his arms that with like a machine and hit Shin. Shin fell then a substitutions water clone disappeared, “this guy good” From behind, Ryo “Is that all you got?” suddenly Ryo went flying Through the air, “Ahh” And Ryo yelled out, “your weak” as Shin walked up close to Ryo, “This is all you got?” “No” “Sound Blast!” noises came from his arm, “he was in the air, so that was a water jutsu”. “you don’t learn!”
Then another water clone, “Water Clone jutsu!”, Then two other clones appeared next to him
As shin fell from the sky, Radian Blast no jutsu” Shin lifted His arm in air, Then the two clones made hand signs, “this is for increase the Radian Blast Strength” And he went down fast “ahh!”
A big Blast of Dirt came into the air, and went everyone, Dust was around.”what happened?”
“Wait until the dust settles” said the villager. The dust settled and there was Shin and Ryo,
“Wuhaha is this the strongest you got?” “Ryo Failed” the villagers was stocked “run or be killed!” Shin yelled. They all ran. “Okay I protected you” “thanks mister after what you did to save me, I’ll go with you” “so you have saved him from the villager attacking him, good going”
said Karian “haha.. That was easy” as Shin put his hand back and blushed “come on this is not over yet, the sound scum will be after us now” said Karian They hurried
“Get on my back Abrino” shin said. “Come Hurry” said Karian
Outside the sound village, “there they are” Said the Shinobi of sound “we have to fight, right everyone?”Said Karian “yes” Fau, Rau, And Shin said. After while they finally killed each one
“shit im losing Chakra” said Shin “we have to run now” Said Karian. “Come on Abrino”
“Hai” as he got on my back. They got out safely got out,

Outside Sound boarder

“finally were safe, we better hurry” Shin said as he laughed, that was easy”

after a certain time.

Near the Konoha Boarder
“its night time, I think we should stay here the night.” Said Karian “Yeah I know” said Rau and Fau. “Leave me alone, Make the fire” Said Shin as he went to sit alone further away from where there camp site was. “Is he always like that? Said Abrino “yeah thats always how it is, he wasn’t always like that before they split Yuri and him” said Rau “Yuri?” replied Abrino
“Yuri was a girl at our village who usually hit Shin A lot,”“oh cool, so she a girl who in love with shin?” “Yeah you can say that” said Fau


The Next day

“That was a good sleep. Shin your already awake” said Rau “I thought you never wake up”
Said Shin, “come We better move fast” They headed to Saku village
“Stop!” Someone following us, Said Shin, “who?” relied Fau. They have been following us since we got up” Karian said, “we better hurry” As they ran Faster. Out of a sudden A Shuriken came from the shadows of the trees. “Fire Jutsu!” Fire hit the Shuriken as it stop making it fall down. “thanks Shin” said Fau “who there?” Shin yelled out loud. “Its me Kon” as Kon walked from the shadow of the trees. “Kon of the Saku 4? ”Yelled Shin. “so that means Yuri here” As Yuri walked from the shadow *sign* while looking down “what’s wrong Yuri?” Shin yelled out loud, A Kunai came from Yuri, Shin blocked the attack using his Kunai as he swings. “What the hell you doing?”. “Yuri, I’ll let you take care of shin, while we take care of the rest.” /Sorry Shin/
As she drops from the trees to the ground. “Come on Bring it on!” Yelled Yuri. “What’s going on? Damn it!” yelled Shin. Yuri came charging into Shin, using Her Kunai, Shin blocked the attack, “Stop this nonsense Yuri” Yuri came charging at Shin, Shin jumped into the air, “Fire Jutsu”. From Yuri Mouth came Fire. Shin manage to dodge the attack. “Damn I got hit on my feet” Yuri jumped into the air too, And She used her Taijutsu she attacked using her feet.
As Yuri attacked Shin felt Wet Drops landing on his face. Looking surprised, /she was crying/
thought Shin. /Damn Sorry Yuri/ As Shin disappeared into without a trace, Behind Yuri, “im sorry Yuri” Shin said in a soft voice. Yuri was looking very blindly at him, Shin hit her on the back, /So she will fall asleep/ Shin took a grab on her, As they fall in the sky, Shin landed on the trees, “Yuri you will go to sleep here, im sure your Teammate will find you here” And Shin went to check on the others. “Ahh, don’t move, we not here to kill you, were only here to kill Shin, and bring back you Abrino Sinuka and team one without Shin. “Shin was Looking surprised
/who thought of that plan?/ “who order was it?” said Karian “it was the orders of Naroni”
said Sasuko, Aborn said “we need to check on Yuri” /I got to Run, I can’t take on these guys by myself/ thought Shin
“Yuri has failed, We can leave her” said Aborn. /They are leaving her?/ thought Shin. Come on were going to Find Shin. /I better run and take Shin with me/ Shin ran and took Yuri

The Next Day.
“Yuri your finally awake” Yuri got up and said “where are we?” “We at A sound village
Not the capital but near it, I had Rent out an inn “you Fuck head you know what you just did?”
“Yeah I know, Naroni had sent you to kill me” ^Crack^ *sign* “now im an enemy of Saku village, what have you done? To let you be killed?” said Yuri in an angry voice “im sorry for what im done, I found out what Naroni been up to now,” “what u mean up too” said Yuri
“he wanted to Extract the Bukuu inside him”. “What’s a Bukuu?” “A Bukuu is a tail monster,
There’s 9 Bukuu’s in the entire world, Each with its own power” said Shin. “How the hell did you know about this?” “I heard it around town, this place has rumor all around it, well we must head to the leaf village and tell him about this” “why leaf village?” “Leaf village is a different village then any other village, for which we must talk to the kage over there.” “Im not taking any parts in this”. “You must now, im sorry about this” “alright you win” said Yuri /I gave up to early/.

A day later

After awhile Shin and Yuri manage to get into leaf village without being spotted by Sound villagers and Saku shinobi’s. “State your business” said the officer/ninja of Leaf village
“im here to Talk to the leader official of leaf village”. “we can’t just let anyone in, Your be escorted in” As someone came in “hey Lee, Escort them into the kage office,” “Hai said lee”
/what’s up with this guy eyebrows?/ thought Yuri. “Come on follow me” As Shin and Yuri followed him inside to the leaf village. “We here at the kage office, you may go inside” said lee
“also I want you to stay and wait” Pointing to Yuri. “ME! You Shit I can go anywhere I want to.”
“Yuri! Please stay and listen. Don’t do anything rash”
Shin headed in. “Come in and wait” said the kage. “What do you want?”. “we here concerting the Saku village” said Shin. “Saku village?” said the kage. “Yes we have known that he attacking villages, he coming slowly to your village.” “But thats a small village, how can he have enough power?”. “Have you heard the downfall of the Sand village?” “Yes we have reports about it”
“it’s the Saku village, They are using the powers of Bukuu’s, Which are unstoppable” said Shin
“hmm and what do you want?” said the kage. “We want to join your village.” said Shin, As The Kage gotten Surprised. “We just can’t get let anyone in”. “we even prove it” Said Shin.
“What will you prove?” Said Shin. “I will do anything”. “seems I will trust in your words, but you will be kept an eye on” said the kage. “Alright I’ll look for a place to live for now” said shin
“we arrange a place for you two to live, Also the name’s Hokage Naruto. “Thank you Naruto Kage.” Said Shin. As Shin Headed out. “We are allowed to live in the leaf village” said Shin
“what!? You didn’t tell me that!.”. “yea I know. We live in leaf village now”. “well we have no where to sleep, so where are we sleeping?”said Yuri “Hokagesama Naruto will be arrange us a room, until we can get our own place”. “lets go” Said Yuri. /For some weird reason Yuri not so yelling or even cursing/. “Well lets go” Said Shin. They walked outside the Hokage office. ‘We’ll im going to go eat.”said Shin. “Alright im going to check out the Place were’ we are sleeping”.”alright” said Shin. Shin went on to look for a place to eat. /feels like someone watching me/. /this place looks good to eat/ thought Shin. “Ichiraku Ramen” sounds good. Shin went inside. “Hi, I would like to order Ramen”. /still feels like someone following me/ “hey you I know your there get out from behind that tree” yelled Shin. A Blond headed girl came out. “Hey I know there still more out there, come out” Another one this time a Pink Headed Girl. “They ran towards Shin and said. “Hi, What’s your name?” “Hmp”. “Leave me alone” /wow he cute/ thought The Blond Girl, “My name is Sakuren”, don’t mind her, said the Pink headed girl. “My name is Uika” Shin said. “I said leave me alone” I’ll pay for your food said the Pink headed girl, Uika, “No I will” yelled The Blond hair, Sakuren. “No I will”, “no I will” This went on for like five minutes, After Sakuren, and Uika stopped arguing, Both Girls notice Shin has already left,

MeanWhile.
“Wow look at his place Hokage set us up” said Yuri looking Shocked at the place where hokage gave them. “There’s a bathroom, Two rooms, one living room, And its kinda out of the leaf village. Near out of the leaf village. /damn that shit head where is he now?/ “Fuck you better come here Shin!” Yelled Yuri. After a little while, Shin finally walked to the place where they lived. /this place is big/ thought Shin, As he walked to The place where he lived.
“There you are” Yelled Yuri
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