Reviews For Angelic Secrets
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 23/09/11 - 10:43 pm · For: Enter Stage Right!
This isn't a story, it's a long chat-log.
Another cliche intro where you list out all your OC's attributes instead of including them in the story, along with mary-sue background and appearance.
There is a reason why this wouldn't even be allowed on fanfiction.net
Author's Response: Actually I have an account on FanFiction.net in which I used this for, I include my character into the story, how about reading to find out.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 24/02/10 - 11:33 pm · For: NEW GIRL GOES FIRST
0.0 Poor Naruto.
*Laugh*
Alai who is from a village that doesn't practice ninjutsu, taijutsu or genjutsu is better than him!
Author's Response: lol it seems unrealistic i know, but i couldn't help, its an insult to all the people who can't beat her, its like "haha a girl beat you" only now its "haha a girl from a village with no ninja skills does it better than you."
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 24/02/10 - 11:30 pm · For: The Kunai of Meeting
You like ending with suspense, huh? I was gonna stop (it's late0 but I can't now!
Author's Response: Suspense is the best way to make people be all like, "omg seriously, i have to read the next one." lol
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 24/02/10 - 11:27 pm · For: A New Nickname
Hmm, interesting! Wonder what picture that is! ^^
Author's Response: guess you'll have to find out ;)
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 24/02/10 - 11:25 pm · For: The Not So Peaceful Town
Hehe! nice!
I just think the long chapter/sentances saying you should have more periods in them.. It seems like you're taking a deep breath and not letting go as you write...
Author's Response: Ah thanks for the comment, I haven't noticed that. I'll definatly working on that :)
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 24/02/10 - 11:20 pm · For: Enter Stage Right!
wah, I'm impressed! You wrote so much in such little time?
Author's Response: No actually, I wrote most of it in a week or two about a year ago, but I've saved it in my notebook and had it on other sites, anything coming out now, is what was recently wrote
Name: belovedly_loveless (Signed) · Date: 22/02/10 - 09:28 pm · For: The Not So Peaceful Town
This is a pretty good story. The only thing I dont like is that it is more of a sceenplay or script then a story. But its good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I know it seems like a script but I've always found it easier to read. I hope you keep reading it though. :)