Reviews For My Poem Collection
Name: mooncher123 (Signed) · Date: 31/12/13 - 04:14 pm · For: Enter my mind and Time
Wow I loved the part about time it had that old magic feeling to it:) keep up the good work
Author's Response: thank you sir, your review is most kind
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 18/04/12 - 01:50 pm · For: Sight...
Thanks ^^. I hope things work out for the both of us, ne? Your welcome.
About this poem - until the part where it said "Blinded" i felt comfortable in the words. Then they seemed to rip and roar around me, and silently settle at the end.
Author's Response: Yes, indeed let's give hope for that success. **chuckles** blinded was the next poem in section...its not apart of the first poem. It's a common mistake, so it's no worry. Thank you for your lovely reviews. CKL
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 16/04/12 - 04:55 pm · For: My Love
So, rather than following the previous plotline you hope to make a new one? Or, following the plotline, revise the chapters to match your standards? I'm not sure which of these two I'm doing; probably the latter.
Ah, I should probably tell you- I've put Kokoro Uchiha and Light the Darkness on hold as I completely rewrite them.... I got stuck on both of them, and see this as the only way to fix things. But I'm having problems incorporating some of the stuff from the old chapters into the new chapters, the stuff i want to keep, you know?
and, good gracious this is a powerful poem.
Author's Response: I'm keeping the basics of my original plotline and revising the chapters, that is all. And yeah, I understand very well the issue of keeping treasured ideas and trying to get them to work in the newer version. Its like being between a rock and a hard place. Hope you get over your block, and thank you for the appreciation on the poem, <3 CKL
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 15/04/12 - 06:22 pm · For: Hungery?
You're welcome! ;)
Yeah. It's been a hectic while for me too. All things considered, I really should've worked on my stories, but life just wouldn't let go.
Yup, I had the same problem. The solution I found, after consulting some of the other writers on this site, was to make a new story, leave the old version up, and update the chapters as normal.
Are you planning to go forward with the story, or are you waiting till you've fixed all your chapters till you start going forward? Also, what were you planning to do, in more detail please, because i don't quite understand.
Author's Response: Ah, okay so just make a new story for the new version...perfect. I do plan to go forward with the story but, I plan to do the latter of what you have asked;' I plan to fix my chapters before making offical new material (chapter) for the story here on the site. I was planning simply to start over again and rewrite my story...if that explains my intentions enough to you.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 14/04/12 - 08:11 pm · For: Don't Look At Me....
Waahhh!!! CKL!!! Long time! YAY! Haha, we both took a long break - for me, it was a year and a half. I'm rewriting my stories too, did you know that? I think it's awesome that you're back, and I hope to read more of your stories soon. I understand that it might take a while - but i'm ok with waiting!
*drools* seriously, your writing has gotten better. I love the poem, "Don't Look at Me" the best! Glad you're back! FIGHT!!!! (whatever, lol)
Author's Response: Thank you for your energic review my fellow writer. It is appreciated to the greatest means to me. I hadn't intended such a long break but, things occurred and well my works were put on the back burners for my time and attention. I'm fairly pleased you liked my poems and extend an heart gratifying thanks to your appreciation. I'm curious though, like I had mentioned in my recent chapter note, would you rather me add the newer final chapters I revise and finish in my works to the site or would you rather me wait to finish revising the entire work and the pre-existing chapters and have all the chapters ready for viewing not just the fixed ones as I go? I'm pondering that engima and would like some feedback on the matter. Yours truly, CKL
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 14/04/12 - 09:44 am · For: Hungery?
Author's Response: it's been a while Nkbz...how's the stories going? I know you were working on one a while back and it was pretty interesting from where I was reading. I hope to see good things from it if you're still working on it. Also hope to see the insightful and frank reviews that I've grown to appreciate and like from you. Look forward to reading and reviewing your work, CKL
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/12 - 08:02 am · For: Don't Look At Me....
These poems are really good. All of them, including the ones from the previous chapters. Very deep, very well-written, it kind of makes me eager to read your stories. I hadn't read any of it because almost everything said it was being rewritten. So I'm a bit excited to see that there should be new posts soon. Can't wait to see what you have in store ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, you review is very kind and heart warming. I did not expect to get reviews so soon and get three at that in the same day! It makes me very pleased to know my favorite readers are still out there. I'm also very glad you are eager to read my other stories. I have no qualms if you take a gander at Memory Touch or the When Playing Hide and Seek... I don't really see any need to majorly alter them from what they are as of now. The others though, I will be rewritting them extensively, especially Seeing Beauty. If you like to read them to see what my writing was like ...2 years ago then you are welcomed to your fancy. Any way, thank you for your review and till I have written more, have a good day. CKL
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/02/10 - 03:20 pm · For: Lovers
I love this poem! Oh, and I was wondering if you could you read my new chapter 2 of Torikago. I reread it, and I, too, thought I rushed through it and made it way too childish. Could you tell me if this version is better?
Author's Response: thx...i will get on it <3
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 - 08:32 pm · For: Deserted...Why?
woah...this is DEEP...good, but DEEP. I'm not really a fan of these kinds of poems (i like it, dont get me wrong) because they arent really symbolic of death, they just shove it in your face, and it drags on a little too much. Oh, and the grammatical errors sometimes made me unable to understand, but other than that, it's all good! :D
Some of the lines jumped out at me, and literally sent shivers down my spine:
"But no if he where in hell we would surely meet."
"So if you would be so kind as to tell me the time."
"I have nothing left no mind, no him, no anything."
all of those...so beautiful...
keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thx for the heads up on the grammar mistakes. ty for ur reviews i feel better now on my poemsrn
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 - 08:26 pm · For: Angels....
oh. my. god. This was beautiful.
The last poem "Guardian Angel"...it reminds me of On the Bridge of Fate even more than that other one.
if the ending turns out like I'm planning (it might not, haha i'm unpredictable): Could I maybe use this for the ending? If you dont want it, i'm totally cool, but if i could...it'd be awesome!!! :D
Author's Response: go ahead i don't mind at all, i'm glad someone wants to use my poems! <3
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 - 08:22 pm · For: Lovers
this was so sad...but so beautiful...awwwww...
Author's Response: ty i thik so 2rn
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 - 08:21 pm · For: Sight...
awwww this one is sweet. i've been looking for poems that best relate to my stories, and this one totally reminds me of On the Bridge of Fate....
sorry, i'll just be telling you which story each poem reminds me of as well as how good it is...
you're like, an amazing writer of poems, y arent people reviewing? they're AWESOME!
Author's Response: ty, you're very kind. i guess ppl just want stories that have action and romance, etc than poems about just stuff
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 28/11/09 - 07:53 pm · For: Sight...
Well,that was interesting....even though I didn't understand most of it.....anyways,what I did understand,it was good.Plus,Yeah!I got one chapter in!
Your sleepy reader
Author's Response: ty sleepy reader <3
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 22/11/09 - 02:45 pm · For: Angels....
Wow.This is really great!I love your poems.
P.S.On the first review for my NG fic,you did your review twice
Author's Response: oops X3 i guess i lik it twice as much! rn
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 24/10/09 - 05:53 pm · For: Hungery?
Hey,CKL,check out my Author Biography thingy!
Author's Response: lolz X3
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 23/08/09 - 02:03 pm · For: My Love
It's mushy gushy,but really good!
Author's Response: personally i thought it was a lil stakerish and gav me the creeps wen i made it. but ty for ur revs
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 23/08/09 - 02:00 pm · For: Lost But Not Forgotten
I don't quite get it,but it's pretty awesome,CKL!
Author's Response: the poem is basicly about are we born the way we are or is something else that makes us, us.
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 23/08/09 - 01:58 pm · For: Hungery?
Wow!!!That was so amazing!I wanted to cry!You should get this published some how!
Author's Response: ....meh, its just another poem to me tht i hav