TONFA
The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1092]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [651]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [17]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1739]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [865]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [291]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1575]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [194]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [125]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
 
 

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Members: 11985
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Chapters: 25418
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Reviews For He Always Knew

Name: ForyourLove (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 - 10:40 pm · For: Chapter 1
Ahh! So close.

Your writing seems like it will be good but then you keep reading and you realize it is so...safe!

You dont go out there and try to reach out to really pull the audience in!

Its muted details. You're reaching out there to make it interesting and gripping but you're just missing!

Again, I have to say. SLOW DOWN! Take your time and feel the story, dont let it get away with you. CRACK A WHIP AND CONTROL IT! Show the story you're the boss.

Try harder to make it personal!

Better then a lot of other stuff on this site though, I have hopes for you!

If you ever want help, I'm always here for you! I'm nice, I swear! XD I wont bite your head off if you ever contact me.

Good luck on other stories!

Author's Response: Again, thank you for the constructive criticism ^-^ I want to become the best writer I can be, and I love to know what I can do to make my fics more enjoyable.


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 - 01:50 pm · For: Chapter 1
tht was soooo moving...i feel sort of teary eyed, sorta! anyway good job and Write On!

crapy joke i no^_^


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