GOMNEASAI!!! WRONG WEBPAGE EHEHE...o_o...
NANI YATTE IRUNDA KONO BAKA DATTEBAYO!!!!!!!!!
MOORE OF THE CHAPTER OR IL EAT YOUR SOUL
Alright! It looks interesting aside from a few spelling errors.
"Raman" = Ramen, You don't really need to capitalize a word after someone is through talking. You know all the saids and such should be undercase. "Jeez, how can you stand this? I'd have grabbed a knife...." "something was off. Why would the hokage assign a jonin to be his guardian? That didn't make sense. Jonin have better things to do..." I'm not sure if you need to capitalize miso ramen. Sorry, for pointing out all of these mistakes, but I just wanted to get the bad out of the way first. I think it would be interesting if you kept going. (:
Author's Response: Thank you!!!