Reviews For Honey Wax
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 - 02:21 am · For: Chapter 1: Nervous
Well; I like it.
Except for the formatting and the occasional typo, this story, so far, is pretty well-done.
You'll need a beta-reader, though.
I'd be happy to help.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. rnThat would be nice. English is not my first language and your help would be appreciated.rnContact me if you wish. rnKai_Ryozaki@yahoo.comrnMSN- Kai_Ryozaki@yahoo.com rnYou can usually reach me by IM.rn