TONFA
The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

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Het Romance [1092]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [651]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [17]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1739]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [865]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [291]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1575]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [194]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [125]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
 
 

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Members: 11985
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Reviews For Outcasts

Name: Yoruno Tsukiko (Anonymous) · Date: 23/02/12 - 07:31 pm · For: Outcasts
This was a REALLY good lemon 0_0 The grammar could have been better in a few places, but for the most part it was well written. Along with being well written, it was fucking hot. Especially the bit with Sasuke fucking Naruto while Itachi and Naruto sucked each other off. I do have a criticism that doesn't have to do with grammar, though. Naruto was WAAAAAAAAYYYY OOC. He was, like, a super uke. Itachi and Sasuke were mostly in character (I think Sasuke's a teensy bit more uke-ish than yours was), but Naruto was just... Naruto was kinda a case of "What the fuck?" Also, I doubt that Itachi or Naruto would tell their life story like that to a complete stranger. Especially not Itachi. I mean, Naruto I can see - he always tells people about himself, if not his whole history - but Itachi never told anyone anything. He made Sasuke think he hated him and was evil, even to his dying second, he refused to tell "Madara" anything... In short, Itachi would never tell his life story to a complete stranger. Still, this was an awesome lemon. Good job ^-^


Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 30/01/09 - 10:18 am · For: Outcasts
Hmmmm, not bad work on this one-shot! I like it!

Even for naruto being taken by itachi and sasuke........very nice
Anyway, nice work!


Name: EnvyEyedButterfly (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 - 11:41 am · For: Outcasts
Awesome! Not a thing wrong with it which is rare. Had me on the edge of my chair all the way through, haha.


Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 09/12/08 - 11:05 am · For: Outcasts
-glomps- Thank you soooooo much! 8D I'm so happy I could rape you! X3 I think the whole thing was positively adorable (and hot). And I'm glad all three of them could find their own little happy ending. :] I'm a sap for fairytale endings, as you can see.

I can't tell you how much I appreciate you doing this for me. I'm sure it must have been hard trying to meet all of my needs -sweatdrop- But I love ya for it ^_____^ Seriously though, as soon as I get the chance, I WILL molest you in the street. -glomps again-

THANK YOU!


Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/08 - 01:26 pm · For: Outcasts
I liked it! Very good job, was this your first story on TONFA? Whatever, it was great.

I thought the beginging was a tad predictable, but it still worked and was well written. The lemon scene was also absolutely brilliant, I loved it. You did an amazing job writing it! I especially love the part where each brother is thinking the other "doesn't know what he's missing". Clever.

The only thing I would fix would be in the paragraph where Naruto begins undressing for his bath- you wrote he has creamy white skin and then you change to tan skin a few paragraph later in the lemon.

Other than that, I really liked it!

Again, great job!


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