Reviews For Piece of Mind
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 - 10:40 pm · For: Prologue: Stranger in a Strange Land
I got it right? Sweetness! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Sorry for the long wait. Hopefully I'll have another chapter up in about a week or two. Kinda fallen off the interwebz lately.
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 15/09/08 - 12:16 am · For: Prologue: Stranger in a Strange Land
Sif... Sif... the only Sif I know is from Asgard, and it doesn't /seem/ like the same Sif... I'm curious to see how this turns out!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Well, you have indeed guessed where I got the name from. What that means to the story, well, you'll just have to find out later. :p
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 12/09/08 - 12:44 pm · For: Prologue: Stranger in a Strange Land
here some feed back for ya.
AMZINF ABSOLUTLY BRIILENT
!!! AND IF YOU DONT KEEP IT UP I SWEAR I AM GOING TO DIE OR AT LEST KILL MY SELF FOR NOT KNOWING THE ENDING.
how's that for ya?
Love AikoMatsuo xoxoxo
100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Author's Response: Lol, I guess that works. I was looking more for feedback about whether it would be a good idea to write the actual main body of the story in first person or third, but this'll do.