Reviews For Lies .xo.!
Name: DropDeadThenDance (Signed) · Date: 10/10/08 - 12:00 pm · For: Poem
Wow!! That is amazeing! Keep it up, kay?
Name: Chained Chi Yajuu (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 - 01:36 pm · For: Poem
nice
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Name: neverusesoap (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 - 01:44 am · For: Poem
Wow, this is great.
Seriously, it fucking rocks.
Pardon my French.
Name: Kamisori (Signed) · Date: 28/07/08 - 06:07 pm · For: Poem
O___O wow, that a deep poem. I think it is awesome!
Not to sound like a bitch or anything but there where two spelling mistakes. (I tell you this to make you a better writer and hopefully someday make my writting look like 3rd grade work)
"having this whole in my heart," - whole should be: hole
"Yet im the one feeling like shit." - im should be: I'm
Once again awesome job on the poem!