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Reviews For Devastation

Name: kiki (Anonymous) · Date: 08/09/11 - 05:36 am · For: Chapter 5
Word=Strength
I like this story btw.


Name: SrixMessUp (Anonymous) · Date: 31/03/08 - 08:18 pm · For: Chapter 5
8 because of the length and lack of smuttiness XD


Name: HPTR Fangirl (Anonymous) · Date: 24/03/08 - 10:17 pm · For: Chapter 5
Loved the chapter, and entire Sasuke and Naruto interaction, espically where Naruto mercilessly murders the rouge Nnja in cold blood, and the part where Naruto confesses "Besides, there's no way I would be able to sleep peacefully without Itachi." That part is most favourite scene. I can't wait what you come up with next. Though I'm very eager to know what Konoha did to make Naruto to go over the complete edge. Please write more.

What's you penname in FFN. I looked and researched a lot, but I couldn't find you. I wanted place some of your story in my favourite list there.

Though a request: can I add / post some of your Sasunaru, including this one, in my naruto_erotica community @livejournal. (I maintain the adult community under the name sparkling_dew) I need your permission / consent before I can post/recommend it in my community.

Author's Response: Well, I'm VERY happy that you liked it! That was one of my favorites pat of it too...Though I think I should have made it better. And yes, that part was very important! I'm struggling a bit on writing the next part but I'm glad that you're waiting for it! You have no idea how much that makes me want to get to work on it right away! You'll see what they did to Naruto soon! That's the part that I'm having trouble with. My penname of FF.net is 'Doodlelover' but I don't have any of my stories on there because I can't seem to get the site to upload it on the manager thing...I want to though! And I would LOVE for you to do that! I actually can't believe that you WANT to! Don't even ask twice! I say YES! It would be an honor to be put on a community on livejournal! Permission granted. Thank you so much for the review, rating, and everything else! I hope that you enjoy the future chapters! (as soon as I put them up) ~lemon


Name: brokenmasks (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/08 - 05:34 am · For: Chapter 5
Dark Naruto, nice.

Author's Response: Thanks! I like him a little dark too in stories like this. He's not always chipper and happy all the time. Though he is a bit of a goof still! Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing! ~lemon


Name: scarlett_fire (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 - 10:29 pm · For: Chapter 5
well poo! my sister said that squirrels is two syllables so i thouht of another one, strengths! That one only has one vowel so it has to be one syllable right??? i think this is fun! ^^... that could be a bad thing i suppose...hmmm

Author's Response: Strengths! Yes! You win! I would have never thought of that one...Honestly! Hold on... let me clap this out....YEP! One syllable! Ahaha I think I'm enjoying myself too much with this ^^' Glad this entertains you too! Uh...Maybe that is a bad thing...Oh well! XD


Name: scarlett_fire (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 - 10:17 pm · For: Chapter 5
YAH!!! i love your new chapter!! it's great and full of smut plus ive been craving itanaru right now so you are my hero ^^. hmmm lets see... oh! is squirrels one syllable... i think so. Its 9 letters! anyways update cause i love your story lots!!! toodles

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you so much! Haha smut....we all love smut don't we? XD and I was craving Itanaru when I thought of this so it's great that I got to help your craving too! ^^ I'll update soon! I'm in the process of trying to write the next chapter so it should be done soon...Hopefully...Thank you so much for rating and reviewing! ~lemon


Name: HPTR Fangirl (Anonymous) · Date: 12/02/08 - 07:56 am · For: Chapter 4
HPTR fangirl cries throughout the chapter. *sniffles* The chapter is so angsty and sad. Sasuke is so cruel and aloof to dear Naruto. I will wait when the happy parts starts to come up. And poor Itachi will be in shock when he comes to realize what his otouto (liitle brother) did.

Still the chapter is quiet angsty. I didn't know that you had an account at FFN. I'm a member there. I''m a member at TONFA as well, but I'm still figuring things out here.

Author's Response: Don't worry! I'll make it less angsty! Maybe...I make no promises! but I'll do my best! BAD SASUKE! I hope something good happens to Naruto! >.< Yeah I'm the writer but I don't know everything! They could start happy dancing for all you know! *ahem* Sorry...But fear not! It won't get too bad! Stay with me and it'll get better! Oh! You're a member there too? ^^ Well I hope things get less confusing to you along the way! It's really simple actually! Still very confusing though! Thanks so much for rating and reviewing! ~lemon


Name: Suzie (Anonymous) · Date: 06/02/08 - 08:19 pm · For: Chapter 4
YAH! i love your story. Plus i think Itanaru is one of the best yaoi pairings, as long as theres smut becuase i do love smut. OH yeah, and i hate Sakura and if she thinks she can have naruto she's crazy! Neways keep going because i love it! TOODLES

Author's Response: yay! glad you agree with me! and i am slowly falling for itanaru myself!... mostly for the smut -ahem-...and sakura needs to go into a hole and stay there! >.< she doesn't deserve naruto! .....thanks for rating and reviewing!!! it makes me smile! ^__^ ~lemon


Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 19/01/08 - 12:51 am · For: Reminising
Oooooh !!!! I want to know !!! please please please !!! xD

Congratulations to both of you !!!! You're great !!!!! ^^

See you soon ! Jya ne !!!!!

Author's Response: dont worry! i wont keep it for long! ^-^ and thanks! im glad you like our partnership! XP see you soon too! thax again for rating and reviewing! JA! ♥ ~lemon


Name: naru_chan_fan (Anonymous) · Date: 18/01/08 - 06:56 pm · For: Reminising
please write more!!! XD

Author's Response: will do! as long as ur there to review! thanks much!! ~lemon


Name: HPTR Fangirl (Anonymous) · Date: 18/01/08 - 04:51 pm · For: Reminising
Exciting and angst-ing chapter both at the same time. Wow! Sasuke is really serious about killing anyone who becomes an obstacle in his path to kill Itachi, ne?. I'm actually confused whether to pity Naruto or go angry at him. And what did the council members did now? Did they banish Naruto from Konoha or something. Why do those idiots (gomen, for my choice of words) do something that usually comes to bite back in Konoha's ass.

And I can't wait to see how you bring Sasuke and Naruto together. Write more.

HPTR Fangirl

Author's Response: really? it is?! thank you so much! yes sasuke is an emo, angsting, revenging, murderous, freak XD and yes, i am torn too! D: poor naru-chan! bad naruto! and the council members are at it again! they are there to make naruto's life worse! but i wont tell you what they did just yet! why does konoha have them anyways? they dont do much. and im sure the hokage can handle things by herself! and im excited about writing about it! so continue reading! thanks so much fro the rating and review! it appreciated! ~lemon


Name: firekitten (Anonymous) · Date: 05/01/08 - 07:44 pm · For: Paper Cuts and Bruises
well i like the whole naru being evel thing. its not knew but not seen very often. well i would like to be your beta if your interested. i don't have alot of experience but i know a little. here's my email just in case: deathshadow777@hotmail.com

Author's Response: WAIT!!!! YOU'LL BE MY BETA?!!!!!!!! OMG! I'M SO HAPPY!!!! >.< i will definitely e-mail you! thank you thank you thank you! and im glad that you like the evil naru thing! thanks so much!!!! *loves* ♥ ~lemon


Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 03/01/08 - 10:37 pm · For: Paper Cuts and Bruises
Here I am again !!! xD
I loved your chapter !!! Realy really good ! >_<
I must say , usually I run away when I see ItachixNaruto but when I saw YOU wrote it , I couldn't go away ! And I like it !!! I mean , EvilNaruto is very unusual , so very interesting !!!
Can't wait to find out what happened to him !!! And to see SasuNaru !!! xD
I was a bit confused about the prologue too , but with what you explained in the others reviews , it's all cleared up !! xD
Thanks !!!

Keep it on !!!!! >__<
( Don't forget " White roses " , ne ?! I'm crazy about that one too !!! XD )
*loves*

Author's Response: hello!!! ^-^ im so glad you loved it! i value your opinion so much!! and im always happy after reading ur reviews too! thank you thank you thank you! really?! you like it because i wrote it!?! my ego is getting so big! ^///^ and you like it that much?? yays! and i like evil naru but only if he gets nicer later ^-^ and sasuke is there to save him! >.< and dont worry! sasu-chan will get his foxy naru back! jut you wait! but....i need a climax first ^^' and a plot...well this is getting off to a rough start..but as long as i have my faithfull reviewers i will prevail!! and yeah sorry it was so confusing ^-^' but i hope that its cleared up now! and if i could i would right thank you forever! but sadly I'm human and i cant...and i love White Roses the most write now! how could i ever forget!? i just have to piece together the parts of it now! kind of like a puzzle. i have little bits and pieces i want to use but i need more pieces of it to go on! >.< review and rating are much appreciated and i hope to hear from you again soon!!! ^-^ *love* ♥ ~lemon


Name: HPTR Fangirl (Anonymous) · Date: 03/01/08 - 03:15 pm · For: Paper Cuts and Bruises
What happened to Naruto that he has become a completely 180 of his former self. Why in the world did he protect his rapist, and attacked his friend, Sasuke. I mean that Naruto and Sasuke are still friends or is it hateful-rivalry relationship they share in the Shippudden series. And (sorry at the risk for sounding silly), do they look like what appear in the Shippudden series.

Author's Response: well something happened to him in the village and he went to itachi and thats why he has become someone different! he wont stay that way for long though! not if i can help it! and sasuke isn't his friend. he went to orochimaru and abandoned him. almost killed him too. so sasuke isn't exactly his friend! you'll see later in the story why naruto is like this. NO he did not get raped by a villager! >.< is this story really that hard to understand?! well...i guess it is...but it will get les confusing as soon as you know what happened! and i guess naruto looks like himself just a little more evil looking. and better looking...more fox like i guess! well thanks for rating and reviewing! and questioning! ^-^ ~lemon


Name: Noleta (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 - 07:49 pm · For: Paper Cuts and Bruises
Okay I am officially confused.....What happened with the prologue?

Author's Response: ok the prologue was just something that happened to naruto to get the idea of WHY he is with itachi. something happened to naruto in the village and he went to itachi i guess, and dont worry naruto didn't get raped in the village! something did happen though. and its been about five years since that incident with itachi. hope that clears it up a lil!


Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 30/12/07 - 03:30 am · For: Prologue
ANOTHER STORY SO QUICKLY ?! O___O
How do you do that ?!
Are you sure you're human ?! xD

Anyway , this story sounds very interesting . Though I must admit I'm not a great fan of ItaNaru , you wrote the first chapter very well !
I'm always surprised to see how good you are at writing !
You can write so many different stories ( kawaii , funny , dark , romantic , sad , etc ...) , it's purely amazing !!! xD

So keep it on !!! *cheers cheers*

Can't wait to see your future masterpieces !!

*notices I'm the first reviewer O_O THE FIRST ?!! ooooh !!! xD Such an honour for a poor creature like me !!!*
Kisu !!! Mata ne !!!

Author's Response: yep! another story! and no, haha i am human ^-^ i guess i just love to write! and get reviews! XP yeah im hoping it gets interesting too! and im not very big on itanaru either, i just thought that this idea was WAY too awesome to pass up! and it kinda gets along with the sasunaru later on! along with some 'stuff' that happens to naruto from sasuke. and its kinda angsty too...wait. VERY angsty. and i thought the first chapter was bad! >.< but seeing as how you liked it I'm willing to try even harder next time! *blushes* im not that good am i? ^-^ it just makes me all the more happy to hear your thoughts! I'm amazing?! I think my ego is a large as my house now. XD thank you and i will! I cant wait to write 'em either! and it's such a honor for a poor soul like ME to get an awesome review such as this! KISUUUUU! jaa ne! ^-^ thank you so much for the review! ~lemon


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