Reviews For Beginning
Name: Rah Poppin (Signed) · Date: 02/01/07 - 05:06 pm · For: Beginning
0o0 wow! It's gorgeous! Beautiful! Makes me want to cry!!
Name: reckless_fire (Signed) · Date: 07/07/06 - 04:53 pm · For: Beginning
Oh, my, go, I am crying. I didnot realize that I was crying untill I brush my hand to my cheek and felt the tear. That was so good. It really should have been inculded in the Anime/Manga. Yep, nothing can top that. Damn I still crying.
Name: Marie (Anonymous) · Date: 27/05/06 - 02:39 pm · For: Beginning
Beautiful
Name: Dea Draconis (Anonymous) · Date: 31/08/05 - 02:56 pm · For: Beginning
That was intense. And beautiful, yes beautiful. My heart wrenched and tore apart when they were fighting in the manga, and you were able to grasp that feeling and turn it into something deeper between them, something desperate and beautiful and heart-broken..*whimpers* I loved your description, the way you used just few words and said so much at the same time. The feeling was right, the mood felt almost like the original and I wish, I really wish, they would feel like this in the manga and Naruto swore to himself that he'd never let Sasuke go anymore,