Reviews For A Bleeding Heart
Name: sara w. (Anonymous) · Date: 02/04/08 - 02:58 pm · For: Chapter 8 Broken
very good. hey ash are you going to write more?
Author's Response: yeah I'm sorry about that I've hit a huge writer's block plus I have a term paper to write and stuff so I don't konw when I'll post but I'll make sure to try to break the block and write more
Name: Monjaru (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 - 08:00 pm · For: Chapter 8 Broken
Brilliantly depressing as usual, eh Smash? I actually almost cried again. You saw me almost cry when I read it in school, right? Well, it's almost as touching the second time through as well. ^^ Keep up the good work! =D
Author's Response: Thanks. you know that some of my best stuff is depressing stuff^^ It's just so much fun to write=D
Name: Hatake (Anonymous) · Date: 03/02/08 - 04:29 pm · For: chapter 1 life
to 'manjaru' and 'kazekage4life' im sorry and to the author i really do like your story i just was upset at the moment
Author's Response: wow I don't think anyone as ever apologized for a comment before. Its ok I'm glad you like my story
Name: Sara Wolff (Anonymous) · Date: 20/01/08 - 03:48 pm · For: Chapter 7: End of the Road
That is a great story it may me cry on certian chapters. Is this the last chapter?
Author's Response: no it isn't i'm working on the next chapter right now
Name: Monjaru (Anonymous) · Date: 10/01/08 - 04:06 pm · For: chapter 1 life
Dear Hatake,
Please understand that I mean this with the highest disregard to your existance: Urusettaibayo, Hatake-teme! [totally didn't take Gaara's post and twist it to my own likings] *shifty eyes*
Name: kazekage4life (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 - 07:01 pm · For: chapter 1 life
Dear 'Hatake',
please understand that I mean this with the highest respect: TOJIKOMERU!!) (SHUT UP!!)
Name: Hatake (Anonymous) · Date: 08/01/08 - 04:34 pm · For: Chapter 7: End of the Road
THAT SUCKS!!!
Name: Directus (Anonymous) · Date: 21/12/07 - 04:37 pm · For: Chapter 5 Farewell
Since i can't give it 100 out of 10. I'll use the word: "AWESOME!!!" :D
Author's Response: thanx I'm glad you're enjoying my story=D
Name: Monjaru (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 - 09:09 pm · For: Chapter 5 Farewell
Yayz. =D
Love your story Ash. Keep up the good work. There are a couple spelling errors though, so try rereading and doing a bit more editing, mmkay? As your friend and personal editor, just something I had to point out. Anyway, keep writing! >:D Or else!
Author's Response: don't worry I'll make sure that I write more because I fear for my life and you know where i live 0_o
Name: Monjaru (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 - 09:51 pm · For: Chapter 4 picture
*looks for 'edit post' option* ..crud. Oh well.
2 MJA: First off, I hate to disagree, but I'm gonna have to disagree. The thing about the Ramen shop is a little foreshadowing and irony (as we all know Kakashi does end up going to the ramen shop a decent number of times), so it's not pointless. Besides, it's like half a paragraph long, so it's not exactly 'holding up' the story. =/
And, trust me, I've read a lot farther than this already (we go to the same school, best friends, ect ect.) and the first big climax is coming up in the next few chapters, so calm down. The story is moving along fine.
PS: I'm not angry or agitated in any way. Sorry if it came across that way, but I'm just pointing out some things. =]
Name: Monjaru (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 - 09:44 pm · For: Chapter 4 picture
Well, it took you long enough to post this. xD
I read it when you first wrote it, but still. You've made some nice adjustments I see. Now hurry up and post the next chapter! x]
sike. Finish ur Biology thing first. THEEEN hurry up and post the next chapter. ^^
Author's Response: ha ha yeah Mr. Tower is really making us work Booo! he is hindering my story posting time xD
Name: Michael Johnson (Anonymous) · Date: 09/11/07 - 08:43 pm · For: Chapter 4 picture
It is nice to know a little about Kakashi's childhood, but the story progresess a little slow. I mean in the four pages you wrote so far you barely told any of the story. Try to make it flow, and leave out pointless stuff like the bit about the Ramen shop. We all know who owns the shop, and why it will stay in buisness (Narutos bottomless pit that he calls a stomach)but its just pointless.
Name: Link, master of blades (Anonymous) · Date: 06/11/07 - 05:12 pm · For: Chapter 4 picture
nice! ya finally uploaded! so cute. if i could i'ld give ya a 15 outa 10!!!!!!!!! hope ya upload the next one soon!!
Name: kazekage4life (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 - 02:45 pm · For: chapter 1 life
Grr i know u wrote more past this i already read this (good by the way) But u didn't say where my sentance was located! Way 2 confuse ppl. JK hahahaha KAKA!! I will never get over that, but u need to add Fredrick! 10000000 stars
-Gaara-
Author's Response: i know, but i'm changing it up so its gonna take a little bit but not too long. haha Fredrick^^
Name: xhatake (Anonymous) · Date: 01/11/07 - 02:57 pm · For: Chapter 3 first day troubles
no rush
i was just wondering if you knew when the next chapter would be updated
Name: ramenx5 (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 - 07:01 pm · For: chapter 1 life
This is THE worst story I've EVER read, I almost threw up. GO GET WRITING LESSONS!!
Author's Response: SHUN THE FLAMER!!! SHUN!
Name: kazekage4life (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 - 05:56 pm · For: chapter 1 life
"wonderful... I couldn't help but read it a second time..." hahaha me loves! This chapter was so cute can't wait until you finish chapter 5!
-Gaara-
Name: kazekage4life (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 - 04:42 pm · For: Chapter 2 the exam
yay! i loves it Smash! I'm glad u didnt change the chapter after all cuz it was really good. i only have 1 complaint....
not enough...BLOOD! haha jk can't wait for chapter 3!
Name: xhatake (Anonymous) · Date: 29/09/07 - 12:12 pm · For: Chapter 2 the exam
Awesome!
Name: Kyle (Anonymous) · Date: 29/09/07 - 11:16 am · For: Chapter 2 the exam
Hola Ash! ^^ Story's comin along nicely, I see. Lots of grammar and spelling errors though. That's nothing new. =P Anyway, keep up the good work, and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: AnneLea (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 - 09:58 pm · For: Chapter 2 the exam
Hmm... Try not using the tab button. Instead, just double return. You can see it working for you where there are breaks. I know it makes everything a lot longer, but it looks better and is easier to understand once you get it up on here.
Otherwise, I'm eagerly awaiting more of this story!
Name: AnneLea (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 - 07:49 pm · For: chapter 1 life
Heartbreaking. I'm sure there's more to come, but, please, try to correct where your new paragraphs begin. If you want, I can read over each chapter and correct them for you.
Author's Response: thanx, but I got it I'm sorry about the format. When I originally put it up here, it had indents and all that stuff I don't know what happened to it, but thanx for offering to help me though
Name: Nicola258 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 - 11:21 am · For: chapter 1 life
Holy crap!! T_T That was so heart wrenching!! I think it was definitely one of the best first chapters I've read. I absolutely loved it Xxx
Name: kazekage4life (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 - 06:31 pm · For: chapter 1 life
I'm so glad u finaly got ur dtory up!!!! I like danced around in circles when u told me. It's so good i almost cried! can't wait 4 the rest!!!!