Reviews For Happy Halloween
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 20/09/07 - 12:55 pm · For: Aflame
........GAHHHH it ended at a good part again waaaah write moooore :D hehe i think im going to get that shirt for my friend he is straight and he wouldnt notice it... hehe *evil thoughts*
Author's Response: lol dat wud b helova funny! poor guy! *evil grin*
Name: lovefantasystuff (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 - 12:00 pm · For: 'Our' Bench
this is ace well done
oooooh i knew u'd bring sai in to this lol
Author's Response: you know me well, yes the crop-top-hottie will play his part!
Name: sasukes_fangirl (Anonymous) · Date: 19/09/07 - 10:25 pm · For: 'Our' Bench
okey dokey!!! i have a question!!!! what is a heartogram????? i have no idea what it is.....but yea anyway!!! good chapter!!! i like it so far......and the drawing is really good!!!
Author's Response: the heartagram is the symbol on the bench nxt 2 narutos foot. its a cross between a pentagram and a heart and is the symbol for the band H.I.M. glad u liked da pic and thx 4 reviewing!
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 19/09/07 - 12:52 pm · For: Fun at School
hehe i want tachi it end up walking in on sasu and naru ^_^ im so werid but oh well!
Author's Response: weird is fun. dats a gud idea, who knows it might find its way into the story. thx 4 reviewing!
Name: Babygirl (Anonymous) · Date: 19/09/07 - 06:16 am · For: 'Our' Bench
wow this is a great fic! i love AUs!! and the pic gives ppl a better visual!its awesome!!cant wait for the rest!!
Author's Response: Yay! thnkyuu! I love AUs too! XD
Name: _12Lola34_ (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 - 09:02 am · For: 'Our' Bench
suzie hounestly what are you writing here a childrens quiz book like 'find the difference' only its
'can you guess who did what?' hehehehehehe kukukukukukukukukukukukuku pllleeease update soon or u'll have me bugging you like 4 eva tehe!
Author's Response: maybe i wunt update if you dunt like my pic! =P oh crap u no wer i live! mayb i will update! hehe
Name: _12Lola34_ (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 - 06:32 am · For: 'Our' Bench
SUJU
Its filtered i can only reafd half of it! i press dtop like you taught me but it only loads half the bloody chapter!!! arrg *rips out hair* Oh i needed that its cold here!
oh well the half ive read is awesome keep it up love it MWAH!!
Author's Response: aw sucky filters dey r only der 2 ruin our fun! thx hope u can read da 2nd half soon! XD
Name: MindlessWanderer (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 - 05:30 pm · For: 'Our' Bench
Nice drawing!
Author's Response: Thx the rest are at http://mcrluver25.deviantart.com/ XD
Name: Nicola258 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 - 04:51 pm · For: 'Our' Bench
It was funny that Naruto got picked kinda at the end!! I really really like this story Xxx
Author's Response: tehe, kiba wuz peed! ^_^ thx 4 reviewin! XD
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 17/09/07 - 04:03 pm · For: Fun at School
:D lovie lovie love it. pwease write more, this story is so cute. i hope naru doesnt worry to much about the cuts sasu has. hehehe i want naru to meet tachi in the next chappie.
Author's Response: aw thnkyu! he alredy met him, or did u mean talk to him, coz he's alredy seen him b4 dey left 4 ichiraku's thx 4 reviewin! ^/_\^
Name: Nicola258 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 - 11:50 am · For: Happy Birthday
Ryt I'm really really liking this!! The doll thing was hysterical. I really like Naruto's little group, cant wait for more updates XD
Author's Response: Yay! Thnkyuu! XD
Name: NaRu KiTsUnE (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 - 06:16 pm · For: Happy Birthday
OMFG U BETTER UPDATE THIS STORY CUZ IT FREAKIN ROCKS!LOVE YA FOR WRITIN THIS SO NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE ANOTHER REVIEW, AND SO ON!
Name: NaRu KiTsUnE (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 - 06:16 pm · For: Happy Birthday
OMFG U BETTER UPDATE THIS STORY CUZ IT FREAKIN ROCKS!LOVE YA FOR WRITIN THIS SO NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE ANOTHER REVIEW, AND SO ON!
Author's Response: Yays!! thnkuu! I'll take the capital letters as a gud sign! =D
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 16/09/07 - 04:32 pm · For: Fun at School
can i have more tonight ?? ill smile :D
Author's Response: aww im glad u like it, i'll try an update soon. =D
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 16/09/07 - 01:41 pm · For: Fun at School
*looks at screen* AHHH the chap is over! nooo i want more more more more mooore...geez i sound like im five.... i love this story i think its so cute. write faster ^_^
Author's Response: aww thankyuu!! I'll try.
Name: madison (Anonymous) · Date: 16/09/07 - 11:30 am · For: Fun at School
kul
Author's Response: thx for that very detailed review! ^/_\^
Name: SasuNaru (Anonymous) · Date: 16/09/07 - 12:18 am · For: Enter: Uchiha
Sex on legs!! That is the most awesome phrase ever! *drool* This is starting very well... I'm going to have to read all of this.
Author's Response: Arigatou!
Name: kc (Anonymous) · Date: 13/09/07 - 07:14 pm · For: I'm Naruto!
cool, write more soon
Author's Response: Thx, will try.
Name: _12Lola34_ (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 - 01:50 pm · For: I'm Naruto!
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Well... *smiles* hehehehehe ummm ah suzie how do you do it?
i need you to carry this one like RITE NOW!!!! i shall be completely fucking crazy tomorow at college about this, its better than you let on, i really love it
really really
really
very very much....0_0 Naruto and Gaara sooo hot love it, oh yeah!
he he he he heh heh heh heh heh heh heh m m m momomomomomomom HOHOHOHOHooooooo GYAAAAAD
Author's Response: Haha thx. yeah i do kind of like where this one is going and i plan to see it out to the end!
Name: Cypress (Anonymous) · Date: 11/09/07 - 02:54 pm · For: Fun at School
I think you are doing great so far, still too early for me to tell how good the story is, but at least your writing style is very nice. If you are worried about the chapter lengths you could try to be more descriptive in surroundings, but don't go crazy with it, I mean sometimes it takes forever to finish a book by Anne Rice because she goes crazy on descriptions. For example, you kinda rushed through the descriptions of characters from Sasukes point of view, he could have noticed the odd dress apparel of these misfits, and the table being covered in art. I hope thats helpful is not I'm sorry to waste so much time.
Author's Response: Hey thanks! Yeah see this is what I meant about constructive critisism! It's great to get helpful pointers like this! That's actually a really good point about the decriptions! Thanks again. =]
Name: yaoifan16 (Anonymous) · Date: 11/09/07 - 01:35 pm · For: Enter: Uchiha
hey i like the story so far i think that it is headed in a good direction
i like the way you show us multiple pov's
keep going cause i would like to read it
Author's Response: thanks i'm glad you like it! yeah i have a plan (i'm a yaoi fangirl with a plan mwahaha!) so i want to see it out! =]
Name: lovefantasystuff (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 - 12:50 pm · For: I'm Naruto!
hehe i like were this is going
lmao
tis gd shit
well done
i deffinatly like this story
Author's Response: yays! thankyou! ^/_\^
Name: _dreemar (Anonymous) · Date: 10/09/07 - 10:06 pm · For: Enter: Uchiha
nice story! update soon?! [:
Author's Response: Thx! =] Yeah should be updating pretty soon!
Name: sasunaru_fangirl (Anonymous) · Date: 10/09/07 - 07:33 pm · For: Enter: Uchiha
oooohh!!!!! i like even more!!!! i love how they all think that he's gonna be cool....and be in the site council group with neji and how sasuke thinks he never wants to do that again!!! it's so funny i'm almost falling off my desk as i'm typing!!!......it's funny how he gets put next to neji....i wonder what he's gonna say if neji tries to get him to join the cite council?!?!?!?! it would be funny!! oh and i have a question.......when do you think that you will update?.....and how long is the story going to be??.....just random qustions that popped into my head
Author's Response: I have a plan but I'm not sure how long it will take. I should update pretty soon I already have a good idea of what I'm going to write in the next chapter.
Name: sasunaru_fangirl (Anonymous) · Date: 10/09/07 - 07:25 pm · For: Fun at School
oooohh!!! it sounds like there's going to be something interesting going on with everyone on naruto's birthday!!!! i wonder what will happen!!!! oooohhh anyway good story so far.....nobody's really made naruto to be a loser-ish person so it's a nice change of pace!!!
Author's Response: yay thx! i'm glad u like it! =]