Reviews For The Division Between Velvet and Steel
Name: BloodOfANinja (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 09:52 am · For: Chapter 1
oh my god. that was simply amazing. honestly it has to be the best f.fic i've ever read.
wow! keep it up. xx
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-- BrucesGirl : Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 09:21 am · For: Chapter 1
Wow, that was fantastic. Sexy, and beautiful. I can't believe how wonderfully you captured all of that. I must put you on my favourite authors- what I have read of your work has been great. Really well written and I like your style. Great job.
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-- BrucesGirl : Thank you so much for your kind review. I really appreciate your comment on my style, and I hope that I continue to write stories that you enjoy.
Name: hanyouelf (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 09:06 am · For: Chapter 1
you know how i feel about this pairing. it's like... delicious and oh so angsty and oh so good.
and the way you portrayed them, the way you characterized and just... exacerbated they're characters, you did a magnificent job. haku is so submissive, and yet he's haku. and i love that he completely defers to his master, to his savior, to the man that he owes everything to. i love the dynamics of his character, the way he recognizes that zabuza will always stand before him, and yet, he can't bring himself to stop loving him so much. he wants nothing more than to make zabuza happy, and he wants zabuza to be nothing more than the powerful shinobi that he always has been, and always will be in his own, young eyes. and you brought out haku's insight. he was always a bright boy and you made it obvious with that single statement about them not surviving against the copy ninja. *sniffled*
and zabuza himself. he was always gentle toward haku. he was always kind and gave haku what he needed, did as haku requested and took haku's advice seriously and to heart. he protected his young protege, he nurtured him and he taught haku the important things in life. and his incredible tenderness toward the younger man is amazingly portrayed in this story.
and much more than the sex, because even though the sex was good, the emotion that ran through this story. both of them were so determined to be strong enough for the other, they were willing to throw away their entire life, if only to stand side by side until they died.
and i can think of no better portrayal of their relationship than the one you presented here.
amazing.
~the almighty hanyou-elf
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-- BrucesGirl : Thank you, baby. You know, this was my first Yaoi story, and I think that eventually, I'll be able to rewrite Haku and Zabuza with the level of angst that I can write Kakashi and Sasuke. I think that would be my masterpiece.