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Reviews For Crimson Tears

Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 - 08:07 pm · For: Chapter 26: Kyuubi Reigns Control
this story is great, keep going!


Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 - 01:52 pm · For: Chapter 17: Itachi, Kisame and...Naruto???
Did Naruto really just say Kisame-Sensei!?!?!?!?!?!?!?


Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 07/08/09 - 01:48 pm · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
"I wonder what the hell Konan and Pein wear to sleep?"!!!!!!! Is that seriously all Naruto can think of!?!? That was hilariious!!!


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 15/07/09 - 12:03 pm · For: Chapter 1: Who I Am...
how long are you gonna make your fans wait for a new chapter:'(


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 28/03/09 - 06:50 pm · For: Chapter 1: Who I Am...
I'm gonna cry cousin......


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 07/02/09 - 06:38 am · For: Chapter 1: Who I Am...
o yea and dont forget to do the author response to me, i wanna hear your comments tooo!!!!*poutty face*

Author's Response: Im sorry it took me so long. I wont forget again


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 07/02/09 - 06:32 am · For: Chapter 25: Sakura and Peins secret
ok ok ok. back to this chapter. i told you i would come back to it. ok, well everything is great vocab and everything, the only confusing part that i ran into was when sakura came to hinata for help. i wasnt really to sure what was happening. and hinata is fighting pein right? maybe describe alil more about what happen like......dam whats the word....idk, whatever its called when you make it easier for the reader to0 understand. sary, i guess i was no help aft all.sary.

but i can tell you good stuff! everything is fan flippin fastic!! i like the part with hinata, Suigetsu, and karin. it was so cute, and Sui is so kind and likes him some hinata!!! karin is so dumb. and that sasuke and sakura was freakin halarious!!! and some advice. when eva you went back to the inn sence, i think you should of done the *********************(example to left) star thing k. thats all. i'll stop writting now, k. love ya!! Good Chap, no no no, Great chap!!!!!!!!!! 50000000000000000000 bouns points


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 07/02/09 - 06:08 am · For: Chapter 26: Kyuubi Reigns Control
aww im so swole!!! this was a great start!! plz plz plz finish!!! and i cnt believe naruto is acting to dumb, he knows hinata and sakura cant go back to the village, their band duhh!! candt believe konan, shes sapose to be the ma ma! and i have a question, when you said that his reflection no longer saw himself, what does that mean?


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 - 04:21 pm · For: Chapter 25: Sakura and Peins secret
omg!! i have to keep reading, this is to matha lovin good!! the suspence, the love, the suprise, EVERY THING!!! i promise i will give you pointers, AFTER i read the next chap.k!! promise, sary i juz really wont to read(^_^) (^_^) (^_^)200000000000000000000000000000 bombness


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 03/02/09 - 03:59 pm · For: Chapter 24: Hinata and Sasukes plan
ooooooooooommmmmmmmmmggggggggggg!!!! this chap is to funny!! i love naruto so much, i hate the fact that mi hubby isnt feelin well!!lol^_^ and sakura got super burnet!! naruto so luvz hinata more than that hag!!u see how he jumped up when she came in the door, yeaaaaaaa,!!! and poor hinata. gotta keep reviewing babe! catch mi on mi nxt one!!! and review all of mine.k.U get a 200


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 - 01:40 pm · For: Chapter 23: Subtle Changes
WWOOWW!! awwwww man!! that was a lot to take in! cuz!! my mouth was haggin!! i didnt cry, but my were watery, EXTREAMLY watery!! like im still in shock!! and how did konan not know shes beautiful!! good job cuz!! u had me stunded!!! im not gonna write a lot for this one causee im geeked on reading!! love ya!!^_^ you get a 100++ for the shock and suprize!!!!


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 - 01:20 pm · For: Chapter 22: An Odd Sensation
nicely done cuz!!! loved it!! especially that dream!!! i cant believe they dreamed the same thing!! how come she wasnt happy bout that?? and isnt hinata getting more bold around naruto slowly but surly?? and duh shes always been that cute!! aaaaaaaaaaa!! i apsolutly loooved that hug he gave her!!gggrrrrr!!! he cares for her so much,and she doesnt even see it!!a your description describing her beauty was so GOOD!! and sakura was so jealous!!! i swear shes a hater!! she needs to go back to liking sasuke again, that sutes her better!!!

and you have Deidara and Tobi to a tee!!! i love it!! and how did hinata see his sharnigan?? does he really have that in the manga?? and the part when hinata and sakura screamed was HALARIOUS!! and when Tobi and Deidara was hitting on hinta!! i was lmao, Deidara was like get out her face blaa blaa shes a lovely work of art!! i was like oooooooooooooo!! lol! im so goofy.

and was it me, or was konan a lil upset??? this was a FAN FLIPPIN TASTIC chapter!! two thumbs up!!! each chapter gets better!! u get a 100++++ heehee


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 - 12:35 pm · For: Chapter 21: The Real Thing
omg!! they need to make your stories into naruto episodes!! and that dream had me hooked, my heart was pounding and everything!! u did i good job with that part!!!
and the way naruto jumped up to see hinata, you know he has to love that that girl, and not once did he ask bout that braud Sakura!! YES! that made me so happy!! and he is always late on something!! how could he not see what she was wearing!!lol!! and that nose bleed was halarious!! and i love the fact that konan can make origami's!! i have this one friend at school who can do them, and they look sooo cool!! im so glad she didnt make one of sakura

and was hinata bandaged up or something, like when she came into the room?? and she was out like a light!! naruto was all swole. and that cuddling up part was sooooooo CUTE!! their so perferct for each other!!! and i was suprized he wasnt nervous to rap his arm around her and stuff. and what did he mean by this felt fimilar?? and just a lil note for you, triple check your spelling/meaning- for example, when you said "hyper" i think you ment to say "happier". ok!! thats all cuz!!love ya! you get a 100+ this time $_$

Author's Response: oops..I'll have to look back and find that spelling error. Thanks cuzzo, for the compliments ^_^ keep reading and I'll keep writing.


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 - 11:56 am · For: Chapter 20: Chase
hee hee!! this chapter always makes me crack up!! suigetsu is so funny, karin never can get under his skin!!ha ha!! and she is always so jealous!!wat a hater!! and pein and konan are so cool!! they took down neji and the ambu!! you know i almost cryed cuz!! i thought hinata had died!!! im so glad konan healed her, shes a beast!! and pein is always so impasient(cnt spell,lol) and will do almost anything for his girl!!hee hee

and whoa!! i was not expecting sakura to go hard on sasuke like that!! i thought she still liked him, and sasuke was alil hurt by that, should of known, he is the sensitive type,jk!!! and i was lmao wen karin chopped sakura in the kneck!! i was like HA HA SAKURA!! did i mention i love pein and konan!!! ^_^ good job on this chap cuz, u neva sease to amaze me!!! u get a rating of 100

Author's Response: LOL thanks babe! Yur the reviewer I've been waiting for ^_^r You have got to keep reading and enjoy the new chaps too


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 07:08 pm · For: Chapter 10: Uncivilized Bonding
sheesh sakura is a petty bitch! she really needs to grow up. i liked this chapter a lot; it seemed like something we would see on the actual naruto show. good job sis! ;D

Author's Response: Thanx i think this was the only good review you gave me...Your not the grammar queen you know...whore


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 06:59 pm · For: Chapter 9: Lying Tears
remember to watch the context in which you use your words. sometimes incorrect wording can throw everything off. The flashbacks were a nice addition to this chapter. this one was by far the best. =]


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 06:55 pm · For: Chapter 8: A One Sided Deal
this chapter was nice...but a little to romantic. i dont think the real Naruto would be kissing girls if his friends were in danger.


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 06:47 pm · For: Chapter 7: Beautiful Raven and Violet Goddess
nice. but i don't think Hinata would leave her house in her pajamas=]


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 06:42 pm · For: Chapter 6: Regrets and reminiscing
this was good kind of out of character, but good nonetheless.


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 06:37 pm · For: Chapter 5: Clearence of Mind
aww cute but i feel like ive read this before =[


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 06:20 pm · For: Chapter 4: Naruto's embarrassment
Nice. kind of cliche, but nice.


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 06:02 pm · For: Chapter 3: Questions and Answers
This chapter was decent enough. Be sure to not use the same word so many times; doing so can make your story loose some of its fluidity. =]


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 05:57 pm · For: Chapter 2: Obvious signals
watch your capitalization and where you put your punctuation mark. Also, you need more commas so your story can flow more smoothly. Missing punctuation leads to choppy work; all in all, this was a good chapter.


Name: After_The_Rain (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 05:51 pm · For: Chapter 1: Who I Am...
good description; excellent wording. this chapter is put together beautifully


Name: ren uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/07/08 - 10:50 am · For: Chapter 1: Who I Am...
YIKes you havn't gotten a reveiw for ages anyways i like the plots its really good i love it your sinserly ren uchiha -signs with offical uchiha seal-

Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ Your the first reviewer! thats one down four to go! Thank you very much for your opinions and feedback, I've needed it forever. It was starting to irritate me that the reading toll was skyrocketing yet the reviews plummeted and just got...stagnant! So thanks again! ^___________^ I'll keep you in high regard, please keep reviewing as you read.


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