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An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
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Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
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Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
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Reviews For Machination

Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 - 04:45 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
Great story, i loved it so much. It was awsome. Its now favourated and so are you! your an exelent writer! totaly rock dude =] this story was soooo gripping and detailed it actualt so rules!!! one of the best iv ever read.Loved every part of it. To tell you the truth at the start i wasnt sure if i would like it at all, but omg i was so rong, it was on a whole other lever and now im off to find invincible hehe xx 1000000 stars


Name: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: 26/01/08 - 08:16 am · For: Chapter Nine Part One
I liked this but i wanted to clarify schizophrenics do not have multiple personalities. It means to be separated from reality and these people often suffer delusions will sometimes speak in rhyme or go through a series of random thoughts while talking. For an example watch sybil with sally fields. In this movie sybil has disassociative identity disorder or multiple personality syndrome and her mother has episodic schizophrenia. Watch for the lettuce scene.


Name: Kuryu (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 - 05:32 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
Great! Great! I love this story! I can't stop reading it! ^^


Name: Kuryu (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 - 05:00 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
You're such a great writer! Nyu!


Name: Kuryu (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 - 04:41 pm · For: Chapter Six Part Two
Love it, Love it!


Name: Blood and Ink (Signed) · Date: 31/07/07 - 07:16 am · For: Chapter Nine Part One
I've fallowed this story since the begining, And the difference did not disappoint.

Its wounderful! You've done a fantastic joke with this story. I'm so happy I get to read all of it.


Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 - 01:14 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
You..you didn't have to make Gaara die! Oh well, My love for Gaara won't make your story any less good as it is now- Now I'm off to read Invincible..


Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 - 11:10 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
My friend, I am proud to say that you are welcome, and I'm gonna be one of those who's reading Invincible.


Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 - 10:51 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
Aww! Sasuke and Naruto get a happy ending! I love it! Wonderfull job, really! Hehehe! I'm off to read the first chapter of Invincible now! ^_^


Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 - 06:54 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
*wipes away tears, grinning like a fool* I-I'm so happy it had a happy ending...yet it isn't over. Oh gods, that means it isn't a happy ending! That means something horrible happens and they need to have it all sorted out before they can ever have a happy ending! *cries again* Still it will be interesting to read! I am just about to go off to read Invincible, right after I finish this review! You are so welcome for the reviews, it was no problem reviewing for such a wonderful story! Well I'm off, once again this is was really, truly a masterpiece and almost a short novel! Well it deserves to be a novel anyway, it has all the material for murder mystery novel. Okay I'm going to stop rambling and go and read the first chapter of yet another sure to be masterpiece, works of art! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^


Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 - 06:31 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Four
*le gasp* NO! Bad Naru-chan! Don't listen to the monster! *cries* I am so happy to did get fifty reviews! You so deserve it and I hope the squeal receives even more than this one! This one deserves so many more than it has so far, it makes me sad, but well what can you do? I'm off to read the final chapter and I swear if Naru-chan actually finished Sasuke off I am going to seriously cry! *runs off to read the rest with a box of tissues* With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 - 06:25 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
Your welcome for reviewing, It was an awesome story!!! I love the ending! I can't wait for Invincible! xD


Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 29/06/07 - 11:22 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Four
Ok..... This is kind of confusing. Did you make two versions of the same chapter? Because the one right before this one is named the same exact thing. Don't get me wrong, it's great.
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-- SquareBallProduction : Sorry.... I must have posted it twice for some strange reason.... Anyways, I've deleted the offending and repeating chapter. ^^' But thank you for reviewing and I hope you enjoyed! SbP


Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 29/06/07 - 04:49 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Four
Naruto, no! Do't shoot Sasuke! I swear, when I start reading this, I forget I'm reading fanfiction it's so simply amazing!


Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 - 02:45 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Three
Noooo! I need the next two chapters! Please? I gave you what you want, now can you give me what I want?
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-- SquareBallProduction : Yaaay! I've finally reached my goal for 50 reviews! ^^ Thank you for reviewing! I'm so glad you enjoyed, and yes, you'll get your chapters! But the very last chapter comes with a bonus -- I'll be posting the very first chapter of Invincible along with the last chapter of Machination! Yaaay! Thank you for reading, SBP


Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 - 02:31 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Two
I'm honored to give you you're 50th review! Yay! *throws confetti* Yay for SasuNaru smuttiness!


Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 - 02:17 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part One
Aww, Sasuke and Naruto are so cute together! And this chapter wasn't to short.


Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 - 02:07 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
Hi! I just started reading this story, but I haven't been reviewing. Sorry. I wanted to review, but I wanted to know what happened next, you know? I saw you wanted 50 reviews or more and right now you have 47, so I'm going to review for the next chapters to make it 51! Agh, damn cliffies!


Name: YaoiLuver (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 - 03:14 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Three
Wow this is a really nice story.


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 - 09:54 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Three
This stroy is awesome! I wonder what will happen next...theres just one question...is Gaara in a human form or is he in his Shukaku form? I feel so sorry for Naruto, but I loved the lemon scene! xD You got only four more reviews to go! Good luck!
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-- SquareBallProduction : Um... no, since this is modern day and there's really not any ninjas and Naruto's Kyuubi isn't present, Gaara's Shukaku isn't either. He's just a... really scary guy. ^^ Thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed! SBP


Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 - 08:49 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Three
NUMBER 45!

XD

Ooh..Man..YOU HAVE to post the chapter up.
The damn suspense is a killer...
How could Naruto leave his cellphone?!!...How come he couldn't take the phone call at the school?!... ahh. I think he's been captured by the big bad Gaara...XD.


Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 - 08:28 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Three
To try to keep your rep clean, I'll post the next six reviews if I have to.
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-- SquareBallProduction : Awww, thank you for being so concerned for my rep. Unfortuantely, since you filling in the next six reviews won't exactly count, you will simply have to cheer from the sidelines! Whooo! Yes, I'm evil, but I want -- no.... Need, 50 revies. It's my goal! *Stars in eyes* ...anyway, that's how it is. Thank you for reviewing and I hoped you enjoyed! SBP


Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 - 07:58 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Three
*points finger at evil author* You, my dear authoress, are pure and unadulterated E-V-I-L!!! *cries* I want morez! This story is so good! I want-no, NEED more! I hope people give you fifty reviews!!! *sobs* See ya next update! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- SquareBallProduction : *Smirks* Yes, I'm evil. But 50 will be my record-breaking limit.... so I really want it for Machination. ^^ I will love you all, forever, should I get them!!! And for Invincible, I'm going to push it till I get more than 50!!! Yes, I am crazy. Oh well. I like reviews. ^.^ Thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed! SBP


Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 - 10:13 am · For: Chapter Eight Part Two
aw, i'm so glad...this was such a good story! and he was proven innocent... but is this the end? what about gaara? what if they don't catch him? what if he comes after them? agh, the suspense!


Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 - 10:03 am · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
this is such a good story! i can't stop reading it! i need to know what happens! agh!


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