Reviews For Reality
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 - 08:56 pm · For: Meeting the Truth
I knews it was sasuke...sorta tehee
*huggles Naru* I feel so bad for the kid I just wanna hugglez him
update soon Violet this story is addicting
Author's Response: I know the poor kid. *huggles Damien* I will. Thank you for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: aniki keyonoshee (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 - 07:24 pm · For: Meeting the Truth
still making me sad...i should stop reading sad fics...
Author's Response: Yeah...maybe you should. Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: AkiraHatesYou (Anonymous) · Date: 21/04/07 - 06:55 pm · For: Meeting the Truth
I really like how you substituted Dr. Edwards with Sasuke at the end of the chapter. That was very clever! Spectacular job, my friend!
Author's Response: Well the poor kid needed something to hold onto. *blushes* It really isn't that good. But thank you so much!!! I am so glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: shadow shriken (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 - 04:58 pm · For: Prologue
i like it very very very much....oh and that review you got earlier is not from me, my brother made it, cuz i suck at writing and cuz i'am goth, and since i'am goth he always thinks i want to die.........actually i'am tring to pull off punk rock but don't know what kind of clothes to wear.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it! Check out a store called Hot Topic they are known for their really awesome punk rock clothes. If you don't know were one might be check out the online store-hottopic.com! Umm anyway...thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 - 02:04 pm · For: Meeting the Truth
Brilliant! Better than anything I could have come up with!
Author's Response: *blushes* I'm sure you could come up with way better than this. I know I am going to screw something up with this story. I am just waiting for one of the newbies or someone else to take this idea. Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 20/04/07 - 06:34 am · For: The Specialist
This story is awesome! My favourite bit so far: 'two weird white arm things that cover his probably cut up wrists.' I laughed... Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I know, I loved that line too. So glad this story made you laugh. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: takahiro8 (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 - 09:13 pm · For: The Specialist
YAY. im not emo anymore...
dont ask....
since im not depressed anymore, this is the first thing i've read that is not depressing( maybe all those EXTREAMLY sad fic made me temp emo...) ill give a LONG review
In my opion, you should expand he limits of the views. be fore procceding to allow the specilist, give a back ground to what-ever-his-name-is / Naruto, as well to the doctor. If i were you i would look up the case for such illness( i think it's Demention, not sure, if im not to lazy, ill loook up and tell you, i hvae big illness book. ....what.....im normal...stop staring!!!) inculde background to how old he is and his real features.
Allow the character to interact outside his world to give him a state of utter confusion, and moments of breakdowns in his 'world'. now if this were to resemble a mental ward, you must include meds, bed restraints, anxiolytics ( stop staring, and yes i mad sure i spelled it right).
state wether it is a Geriatric or Juvenile ward.
now if you are wonder how i know so many things, relating to mental wards, my mom worked as a nurse for 3 years, god, i hid from her for weeks. she left after they tried to lower the salary even more than it already was.
any who, im drawing agian, and im might start writting agian, MIGHT( most likly not T~T)
anywho, good story.
-Akio AKa MR. UnMotivated
-- We dedicate 3/4's of our personality to being like others. So much for above the influnce.--
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! I was totally freaking out on what I was going to do about the medical stuff, since I didn't even know what the hell I was making Naruto, but I am so glad you are giving me this information! So I will try to do that, show off Damien/Naruto's past and stuff. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 - 08:17 pm · For: The Specialist
Aww *huggles Naru/Dami* I think the specialist is an uchiha bro mhm mhm
Author's Response: I know poor little Damien/Naruto. He is just so sad. *gives half a cookie* Close you get half a cookie since you didn't say which Uchiha bro. Thanks for reading and reviewing Oni! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: HyuugaGirl (Signed) · Date: 18/04/07 - 04:21 pm · For: Prologue
Are you going to continue? You have me hooked! With one chapter! Trust me, thats hard to do! Unless, this is it....
Author's Response: No, oh no. I am defiantly going to continue. I have you hooked really? YAY me! I hope to have the next chapter out soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 15/04/07 - 03:09 pm · For: Prologue
Omg, Violet this is really good! I havent read anything like this here before. I want to see how this progresses cause this is just really good.
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! YAY me for originality! I thought this had been done before. Now I'm really glad it hasn't. Thank you! Thank you again and again, Oni_Chan!!! I am already working on the next chapter. Though as always I have no idea where this will go. Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: AkiraHatesYou (Anonymous) · Date: 15/04/07 - 01:27 pm · For: Prologue
Very provoking...Unique and most unexpected, Violet-chan! I like it a lot!
Author's Response: *does happy dance dances all around house* Really?!? THANK YOU!!!! Now I am super duper glad you aren't dead!!! YAY! I don't think I could describe how happy I am that you like it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: aniki keyonoshee (Signed) · Date: 15/04/07 - 12:02 pm · For: Prologue
made me sad...
Author's Response: Sorry. I think this one is going to be a sad story. Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: kyuubixshukaku (Signed) · Date: 15/04/07 - 11:13 am · For: Prologue
good.
Author's Response: Uh yeah...Thanks? Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: Kumori (Signed) · Date: 15/04/07 - 10:29 am · For: Prologue
Pretty good, except the third to last paragrapg confuses me.
Author's Response: Really? Oh sorry it makes sense to me because you know I know what I'm talking about. It basically says that Damien created Naruto after Damien saw his parents murdered. Damien says that Naruto's parents were killed by a nine tailed fox demon. Which is sealed in Naruto. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly