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Name: lolaskitskit (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/14 - 05:39 pm · For: Chapter 1
I like it!
Name: lolaskitskit (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/14 - 05:39 pm · For: Chapter 1
I like it!
Name: lolaskitskit (Anonymous) · Date: 05/02/12 - 01:39 am · For: Chapter 1
I love your stories! I love you for sharing and I'm pissed that you take FOREVER to update!
Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 04:52 pm · For: Chapter 12
This is the end? Aaaw! But it was a good ending, so I'm happy. I'm glad they finally got together!
Um, so, I didn't review any of the previous chapters, except for one, so this review might be long. I hope you like long reviews.
First and foremost, I want to tell you how impressed I am with how much your writing matured throughout this story. If you haven't done it recently, I'd suggest going back and re-reading the beginning to see how far you've come.
Not to say the writing at the beginning wasn't good. It had to have been good, or else I wouldn't have continued reading and still be here to review (as a rule, I don't read something if I end up rolling my eyes more than five times within the first chapter because of glaringly obvious mistakes).
Um yeah, so...
Very well thought out. I especially liked the idea of how the Aburame choose their mates. And poor Hideaki, getting killed like that! At least he had been planning to keep his promise... stupid Sasuke.
Hmm, oh, right. The interview thing that Tsunade did... that was a nice break from the kind of dark story, you know, with the questioning and stuff. I was very shocked to find out that Shikamaru had been with Kakashi (my bet had been on Kiba) and... yeah. Very interesting idea of how to get Neji back to himself.
Erm... I know I'm forgetting something here... great. This is what happens when I put off reviewing... grr, I'm an idiot.
Ah, well, it was all very very good. I can count the number of Neji x Shino stories on my two hands, and I can count the number of good Neji x Shino stories with one (and trust me, yours is definitely up there).
Lots of props to you for making this pairing work! And for having such a good plot and good writing, etc., etc.
Thankyou for writing this!
-Archaic
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-- recita1717 : Oh wow... I didn't expect to get any more reviews with this story! Thanks, this makes me feel good! I don't like this story to well, I started to compact it when I stopped getting reviews the first time. I'm thinking of reworking it during the school year to make it more livable to me. LOVES!
Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 03:10 pm · For: Chapter 4
I was gunna wait until the last posted chapter to comment... but I just wanted to say nice job with Shino! He's pretty much In Character to a 'T'! Very good.
And I like how you made Naruto a little less obvlivious and dope-ish.
Props! You'll see me again at the last chapter.
-Archaic
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-- recita1717 : Yay! I was hopeing that I got Shino right! This makes me feel all warm and fuzzy! Loves to you! Thank you so much!