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Reviews For Saya of the Sand

Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 01/06/15 - 08:25 pm · For: Chapter 6
Ok. So I start with giggles at the idea our beloved Saya got a well-deserved headache. The morning after is never a happy experience. And you see, this is what I mean by Saya being childish, yet a woman. Her bickering with Kiba is so endearing. I can just imagine them getting into a schoolyard brawl, the two of them. This being said however, I cannot imagine how Inuzuka Kiba will be able to conquer our most beloved Saya, when Genma, a full-grown man with so much sex appeal his testosterone makes me wanna faint, cannot! You will have a hard time with that. Or not. Seems to me you have something in mind. AND OMG FINALLY!!! I was looking to see what it was that had made Saya feel weird about Yura's letter. I remember that part of one of the previous chapters where I hated you letting me hang that way. So at least we know someone is messing with Saya and it seems Kiba will have a great role in finding who that is. He is a tracker after all!!! Might it be Utatane? I love that name, btw. Gorgeous. And she did seem fishy, to say the least. Maybe a peace deal isn't all that palatable to the Elders. Remember good ol' Danzo, he liked to fuck some shit up. You have just left us on a damn cliffhanger again. I know you love it. And you know I hate it. I cannot wait to read what is coming on. Now let me sigh in defeat and prepare for tomorrow. Your Karin-fic will be getting some attention from me!

Author's Response: Saya very much wants to get into it with Kiba, for purely perverted reasons, as she stated. Especially after the incident with our beloved Genma. I think I forgot to mention that Yura and Koharu Utatane are both cannon characters. Yura was Sasori's sleeper agent in Sand while Utatane sits on the council with Danzo. I am working on the next chapter which is going to take me some time since the shit is going to hit the fan and I want it to hit in the correct way. I do have the Ko/Tokuma in the works, being my first yaoi, I want to do it justice. I am also not sure if I want to imply sex or just go all out. Kind of a quandary I am in for most everything I write, sometimes less if more kind of thing. I don't know, what do you think? I have been kicking around a few ideas for Kurenai which will have Anko in it, who will be her BA self and not what the manga made her out to be. Hell. No. That much I do know.


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 28/05/15 - 03:38 pm · For: Chapter 5
You just want to murder me. I will get the hots for Genma. Handsome man, great personality, but I never went full-atomic drool on him. I was busy with my Hyuga darlings. Until now. I understand Saya one-hundred percent, the way I see him through her eyes I would have less self-restrained. I know that molesting a man is a horrible thing to do. But you know, I consider that intensity of his as a testosterone cry to me. SAYA, WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR. GRAB ONTO THAT HUNK OF MASCULINITY AND INDULGE INTO ALL OUR DESIRES. You can have Kiba later too. And you know what, goatees rock, so just keep Yura in reserve. Why can't women have freakin' harems!!! Go for it, girl!
And this is where I start hating on Genma. He is gay. He must be gay. The only explanation to all this is ... he is gay. Just. Have. Sex. In. The. Middle. Of. The. Street. I will never forgive him. Ever. This is the first time my little Catholic Practicing and Religious (all with big letter) person (that's a small letter there) hates a man that wants more than a sexual encounter with a completely wild and unleashed, scorching bomb. And ... here I am processing this very fast. Our little Saya is wild, but y'know what, Inuzuka are surrounded by wild things all the time. And they tame them pretty damn well. Heh. Could it be that our little darling will get a run for her money?! Will Kiba be the one to give her the "I just want to fuck" talk, kicking her ego in the balls as she realizes she is getting attached to him?! So I guess this is the end of Genma. I just feel so sad for him. PLEASE DO WRITE AN OC WITH HIM!!! PLEASE!!! Ok. Let me breathe. Let. Me. Breathe. You know, I hate you. And I will tell you why. If there is ONE character besides Haruno Sakura that rubs me the wrong way, it would be Uzumaki Karin. I hate her. I hate all of team Taka. I just think she is a bad copy of Sakura. Completely. And this is why I hate you ... I NOTICED IT AND I STARTED WHINING BECAUSE I KNEW I WOULD READ IT EVEN IF I HATE THEM ALL. AND THAT I WOULD LIKE IT. I promised I would not read Naruto Gaiden just before coming to this site yesterday. And then, what happened. I realized I would do something worst as soon as I am done reading next chapter of this fic. I would start reading your Karin-centered fic. Now, since there are no OCs in it ... you are going to do me a favor. You are going to go to fanfiction.net. Make yourself an account and publish your Karin-centered fic on there ... this place is a real graveyard for manga character fics. Go to ff.net, trust me. And of course tell me if you do, so I can put you in my faves, duh! About my own fics, Chapter 8 of TFH, expect at beginning of next week. Worst chapter ever. But whatever, then we will go into SasuHina humor. Anyways. Oh and screw Naruto Gaiden. Never again. Done. Over. Finito!

Author's Response: LOL ah Genma. Every time, I see him with that senbon smirk I am overwhelmed by naughty thoughts. I see he has worked his magic on you.Oh man it was so hard for me not to go full on wild sex scene that the Sand would hear between him and Saya. But this story isn't about those two. It took me f o r e v e r to figure out a way to cock block them, so Genma wanting more than a one nightstand was it. He isn't gay, at least I don't think so , , , oh man what if he is?! Damn there goes the yaoi lover in me. I did unearth a fic that I had started a long time ago with Genma, the OC is a Yamanaka, who actually has a brain in her blond head and knows how to use it. Hmm lets see, I did read those articles you mention, I have an even bigger respect for nature. I also read the one you told me not. In hindsight you were correct. Every time I started to read, I'd end up falling to sleep. Every. Time. Best sleep I got though, so yeah. And I do have a FF account, under the same name, I do a LOT of reading there. Maybe I should put my Jiraiya one over there, never really thought about it.


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 27/05/15 - 03:33 pm · For: Chapter 4
I cannot believe I have been away for so long and you pooped out 3 chapters out of the blue and here I am ... OVERWHELMED. I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED ALL THIS, I WANT TO ROLL ON THE FLOOR AND SCREAM IN ANGUISH. But here come my pathetic excuses, my mom was sick. Still is. Badly. Had to take care of her and prepare my finals. And now I work. So yeah. How are you? Have you gotten better? I remember how sick you were, you poor thing. Snuggling with Fullmetal Alchemist characters. Now let me review this damn thing. I just drooled throughout this chapter. DROOLED. You hear me. I love Saya's liberated spirit that takes no shit when it comes to social conventions and norms. She wants sex with a guy ten years older than her?! She's gonna have sex with a guy ten years older than her. Pillow talk, is the best type of talk. And at the same time, even if she tries to play it hard and all grown-up, there is something childish about her, something that calls out for that father she lost young. Her comebacks are those of a quick-witted child, the things that make her laugh are the same things that would make a child gleeful. I just feel she is at the interface of girlhood and womanhood and navigates that thin line all the time. It kind of makes me sad, actually. And of course, you have Genma appearing after a very informal meeting with Tsunade. A drunk Tsunade. Who hasn't done her paperwork. Again. You had to leave us on a freakin' cliffhanger. This being said ... are you following Naruto Gaiden? I stopped following officially as of today. There is some shit I just can't get over. And I guess this spells the end of my love for Naruto. I will wrap up my fics, all of them, maybe write another oneshot. And then off to original I go. But one thing will never change, I will always follow your fics and get all excited about them. I can't wait until tomorrow so I read chapter 5. Urgh. Cliff-hanger and I need to go home.

Author's Response: Ahhh friend!!! *runs and tackles in a hug* I have missed you and your fics so freaking much. I was worrying as to what happen to you. Very sorry to hear about your mom, I truly hope she gets better. A woman that is like a mother to me is on her second bout with cancer, different from the first. I am doing great! Since it is so nice here finally I have been downing my allergy meds(which are suppose to be non drowsy but make me fall asleep lol)and walking like cars have not been invented. So glad you are still loving Saya, I do hope you continue to. Oh man Genma, don't even get me started on that man, yeah I had to put him in this story. I swear I am going to write an OC story with him in it at some point. WOOF! Ah prepare for more cliff hangers my friend ;) Yeah I have been following and will continue, with my hots for Shikamaru and Kakashi(still hoping to see that face of his) of course there is still Kotetsu, Izumo and Genma I want to catch a glimpse of. After reading today(Thursday)there is also a chance for another character to return(don't want to spoil it for anybody) I so can't wait to read more from you! BTW did you notice that I actually wrote a one shot of Karin that I had been working on since the manga ended.


Name: coolninja90skid (Signed) · Date: 27/04/15 - 01:11 pm · For: Chapter 1
i liked it
can i be in it?


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 16/03/15 - 06:26 pm · For: Chapter 3
Woman. This chapter was so funny. I can just imagine Kiba and Saya playing at who pisses the farthest. They are both so freakin' territorial, it amazes me. And they both have an enormous pair of obese, radioactive balls that need a lot of space to breath. But I am sorry for our main man, Saya is leading the game 10-0. Oh I love that bundle of Suna goodness. Her semi-perverted thoughts about Genma, her comebacks that always bitch-slap Kiba back to place ... I just realized why Kiba and Saya make a great couple. Saya has this little something emancipated, free and irreverent that reminds one of ... Inuzuka Tsume. Admit it! However I must admit you left me on a cliff-hanger. I hate it when a great writer, like say yourself, introduces an obscure and mysterious new character to the story. Who are you Yura, and I bet you are evil too. Saya might be a spy, which would make our favorite tracker's job just so much more difficult. Imagine Saya was manipulated into doing something against Konoha and Kiba, with his new-found feelings for Saya will be sent to chase her down. Oh God, that would be a tragedy. Now my lovely, darling, adorable mst ... would you maybe be willing to take yet another suggestion for a fic? IT IS JUST A SUGGESTION. How about, now that Kurenai is a single mother, her finding someone? Urgh. That would be very difficult to pull off, I realize that. I am not saying otherwise. But I wondered whether that would interest you ... and then there is this other fic that I was wondering you could maybe tackle, I mentioned it in my replies to your wonderful reviews. How about a TokumaKo. I usually do not read Yaoi. Yaoi is not my cup of tea, but well ... maybe, between two Roy-medical sessions you could find it in your heart to write a strange oneshot about the two of them ... Check the replies I wrote to your reviews, I want you to go read some things of the net that will make you laugh, I swear. Anyways, you kill me with your cliff-hangers. You kill me with your subtle love triangles. You kill me and Roy enjoys the show (damn Mustang, I never even watched Fullmetal Alchemist and yet his womanizing ways already get on my nerves).

Author's Response: Saya and Kiba do make quite the pair when they are together, naïve(to an extent)Kiba up against the very experienced Saya. I didn't realize it (until you pointed it out) that Saya is very much like Tsume. Well shit, that wasn't intentional, she pretty much writes herself, I am just a vessel (as you can attest to my friend). You can bet your ass that there will be more Genma(I confess that I envy the inanimate object that he holds between his lips) I may have to write another OC story just to get THAT fix out of the way. Which brings up your requests, for you(because you are you)I will mull them over. Although I do like the challenge to see who would compliment our dear Kurenai(it saddened me that she lost her true love and soul mate. completely shattered my heart as to what the creator did to her)maybe I will give her the ending she should of had, returning to being a genjutsu trainer if anything you know there was not total peace achieved after the war. It's not human nature, there are still a few badasses that weren't accounted for yet. As for the Tokuma/Ko yoai, I have not ever written one(watched and read - hell yeah) My eyes water at the thought(my equivalent to a manga/anime nosebleed)yes it really does happen I shit you not. I already have something started on paper(yes that lined stuff that you have to use a writing instrument with) I always carry a notebook around incase I am somewhere waiting and inspiration strikes(in this case it was watching color guard practice, not for myself btw) And as for Roy, he is sitting on a shelf with my Daryl Dixon plushie keeping my Black Butler and Ouran Host Club manga's company, yes I am in good health just in time for allergy season T^T. Now to go off and read your responses, I can't wait to read more from you!!


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 15/12/14 - 08:37 am · For: Chapter 2
Oh. My. God. This is I believe the most satisfying chapter I have ever read. First of all, you really are a tease. I am sorry, I am just always drooling like a retard when I read something about the war between Suna and Konoha. Now you had to add in a possibility of Orochimaru plotting something (I snickered at Tsunade mentioning Orochimaru could need bodies for only two reasons, the one I thought about was not PG, let me tell you). I am trying to pass my finals here and the only thing I can think about is how the hell Suna and Konoha's war could have been provoked by a third party. What I also appreciated a lot is a more "Eastern" mentality to Saya. You know how the "Western" war mentality is to discredit the opponent but how the "Eastern" mentality is based on the idea of fighting for honor, and does not usually imply humiliating the opponent but on the contrary respecting him. The way Saya analyzed the Hokage, the way she paid her respect through fear and the recognition that even if Konoha might have been conquered by Suna it was still a force just made me nod my head and sigh in pleasure. I have always maintained that Sasuke is the Austro-Hungarian Empire while Naruto is the USA. I like to get out of this Western-war marasma and into something a little bit more idealistic. Now, this being said ... Kiba. Oh, my dear Lord, Kiba. This is the Kiba we know. Childish, accusing, obnoxious. He has the knowledge of the world infused into him. And it seems he will maybe be taught a few lessons by a bundle of charming sarcasm. I love Saya. I simply ... urgh!!! I don't know how you do this, making me love OCs, I generally hate them but here she is. And I can really feel there must be a very sad story behind Saya. There is something of a lost child in the background. Maybe she is an orphan, maybe she was raised by uninterested parents. In some instances she reminds me of Sasori, in some other of Neji and obviously it makes me want to weep. I am still not really over the Naruto ending so virtually anything makes me depressed. But who knows, maybe that girl with Kiba in the last chapter is our very own Saya. Grown up and listening to Kiba spill his shit before bitch-slapping him presto :P


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/12/14 - 11:41 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hello there! I liked this quite a lot. Your descriptiveness flows nicely and you set up the setting pretty well. Don't apologize for a slow start, stories do need to develop first. I like Saya she seems pretty laid back and adventurous and pretty friendly too. I noticed you mispelld Temari as Tamari sometimes but I assume thats a common typo. I'm gonna stick with this story and see where it goes so expect more reviews from me :D


Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 17/11/14 - 05:33 am · For: Chapter 1
This looks really cool so far! I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for updates :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! Please keep an eye out for an update, because it's coming!


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 14/11/14 - 02:12 pm · For: Chapter 1
Is this what I think it is?! WELL EVEN IF IT ISN'T, I WANT!!! Gosh, you are good with writing for original characters. I can only bear your OC-centered fics. I really like the comparison Saya drew between Suna and Konoha. You can feel a whole world of differences that are not only based on dunes and trees, that are based on ideals. For one, I would say that Saya is ambitious, the metaphor of keeping one's eyes turned towards the sky. The trees that hide the stars, the sun, could be a good parallel drawn with how Suna people perceive Konoha people. Maybe more practical and less romantic, maybe more short-sighted. I simply love how Genma reacts to Saya and that mention about an invasion got me hooked. For a few reasons. You know I have a thing for invasions and heartbreaking war stories. Will we hear more about it?! Say yes! And God, the tension between Genma and Saya!!! Come on. I saw Kiba was a character as well, so who knows, maybe some love-triangle?! Please, yes! I am jumping up and down here. By the way, if ever you need a beta-reader, I am here for you ... and it has nothing to do with me being a greedy bastard that wants to read the update before everyone else.

Author's Response: Yes this is IT lol. I'm glad you like it so far YEAH!!! I wasn't sure how you were going to react to the Genma angle, although I'm not sure as to how far I will take it because this is about OC x Kiba. This is taking me longer to write because I keep finding myself writing it in first person and then I have to go all the way back to fix it UGH! I write Attack on Titan fics on a different site that is first person so I blame that. I am working on 'cleaning' chap 2 up. As for a beta-reader I don't know what that is or how it works??


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