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Name: nightninja (Signed) · Date: 26/09/15 - 05:03 pm · For: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)
Can I be in the story


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/14 - 02:10 am · For: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)
Okay... So when i first saw this, i squealed happily and it was around two... I clicked on it and started reading it. I was laughing in the beginning then i squealed in delight... i think i scared my dog xD then i was all like "gah! no! no! kiss!" i was so happy that they kissed!

the whole kissing scene made me happy, i honestly prefer Rayne with Izumo instead of Sasuke... They need to end up together. If not, at least Naruto. Sasuke can go be all emo in a corner while Rayne has babies with Izumo or Naruto, maybe both xD


Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 06/10/14 - 06:39 pm · For: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)
Hello I see lol! That was a well written story chapter. Damn Ranya be her a real man. Too be honest I hate sasuke. He is a kid that think he is grown up but hasn't. Well thank you for writing! ^ω^

Author's Response: Hey hey! Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this (: The more I read the manga, the more I dislike Sasuke, but I still love him. Though I have to admit, I almost want to break up the whole idea of pairing Rayne with him >_> But we shall see what happens.


Name: Oni (Signed) · Date: 05/10/14 - 10:11 pm · For: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)
And now I know what happened, her waking up in his bed did confuse me on that chapter of RTC. this was an enjoyable read, first dates are always nerveracking.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for still being around to read and review for me (: And for this especially because I know it was damn long lol


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/10/14 - 08:54 pm · For: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)
Hello! It was really nice to see something written by you. I feel like it's been a lifetime. I'm no good with words when it comes to this romantic stuff... but this was sweet. I think you captured the emotions really well and you created a really vivid picture. Heh I wish I could find a better way to express my thoughts. It was a really great one shot, and I mean really really great. It makes me miss the romantic stuff sometimes because as you have shown in your story, romance like this can be used to get away from everything and truly enjoy happiness for a while... Sorry if none of this made sense. It was awesome Tink. Incredible

Author's Response: Hey there!! It certainly has been a lifetime! I actually really enjoyed writing this, more so than I thought I would when I originally came up with the idea for it. After I read it myself, I realized how sad it actually is because it is just a momentary escape from everything.. I put Rayne through so much shit :'D Thank you for still being around to read and review for me (: Xoxo


Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 04/10/14 - 08:08 am · For: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)
Wowza! I didn't know I needed this until you presented me with the opportunity. Thank you for writing this, no matter how long a time it's been. As long as I was here to read it :D your story and others like it have a soft spot in my heart. They came when I really needed them and brought the escape and comfort I craved. I don't know how I can ever express my gratitude to all the people who helped me through one of the most confusing times in my life. Thank you so much for reminding me of those wonderful times and for offering the same getaway and soothing story for me to get lost in, during this time when I could really use it again.

Your writing is beautiful, had me squealing with delight and excitement for the characters, and opened my creativity and imagination back up for me. Reading things like this is like daydreaming with an amazing plot. So thank you again, and I hope you find happiness, success, and fulfillment, be it in writing or other pursuits you have for yourself. I wish I could give something back, but all I have for now are these thoughts and words. Please know that you have brightened my day, and you are very much appreciated

Author's Response: Can I just tell you that this review made me tear up when I read it? This really touched me deep, and I'm going to save this review forever. Thank you so much.

Anime has always been a friend to me when no one else was, ever since I was young, which is why it's such a big influence in my life. The stories were an escape for me and they expanded my imagination to the point where I started drawing, writing, and creating characters, who also became friends to me. For you to tell me that I provided you with that escape, even if it's just for a few minutes while you're reading my writing, means the world to me. I'm so happy to know that I'm able to reach someone that way (: You have certainly brightened my day, and I'm telling you, I'm going to save and remember this review for my entire lifetime.

I also hope you find happiness and success in all your endeavors. Thank you for being you (: Xoxo~


Name: Murphyus (Ikkaku Shakuyuki on deviantART) (Signed) · Date: 04/10/14 - 07:57 am · For: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)
the beginning reminds me a bit of my first date a little. at least, the nervousness.

this fills in some blanks, I enjoyed this!

Murphyus

Author's Response: Hey Captain Obvious! (referring to the comment on dA lol) Thanks for reading and reviewing :D I'm glad the beginning sounded like your first date, that means it was realistic enough.


Name: Karnia (Signed) · Date: 04/10/14 - 02:03 am · For: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)
I thought for sure when he commented on her clothing she was going to ask him if he wanted to take them off her. I don’t know why, but my head went straight he gutter. I think it was because getting that message on facebook asking “Hey, dick or cock? What word is better.” -_-
Not that Rayne would mind Izumo ripping her clothes off, but that is another story. Something to do with Bad Touches if I do say so myself. < See what I did there. >.>
I would avoid using the descriptor fifty shades of any hue now a days, even if she did blush fifty shades of red. XD
Can you imagine the reputation Izumo is building? He is feeding Sake to a girl half his age…and oh god, it is so funny. Poor Rayne. Sasuke sucks, he sucks all the FUCKING DICKS. GO SNUGGLE WITH IZUMO, I DON’T KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE TO YELL THIS AT YOU WOMAN. SCREW SASUKE. SCCCCCRRRREEEEWWWW HIM INTO NEXT WEEK.
Taken out of context, this means something completely different. “If you’re going to make me forcefully take you to bed, you leave me no choice.” I noticed, I noticed right away. Is sexy time soon? Did you writes teh lemon? >.>
I am guessing this is the sentence in question? “Sliding her flat palm from his hip to his groin, Izumo’s eyes lost focus on Rayne’s as her hand went against his dick.” I think the word fit fine, though I would have legitimately lost it if you wrote manhood, so all is good. XD ALL IS FINE PEOPLE.
DAMN I THOUGHT HIKARI AND RAYNE WOULD HAVE ANOTHER SIMILARITY. To be fair, if teh Sasuke knew she touched another man’s dick, he’d go ballistic, so it’s pretty much the same thing. Once again, Hikari and Rayne is super alike. Both in like with someone else while questioning what the fuck they’re even doing bothering with Sas-Gay. Bleh. Stupid Uchiha duck-ass.
How steamy and romantic at the same time. I really liked this, well written from the perspective of a 16 year old. Also, you must know that age differences realllly weird me out, but this once didn’t. It seemed so…okay. You have changed me Shannon, changed me for the bad. XD

Author's Response: Wasn't that a great conversation started? "Hey, good morning. I have a question for you. Dick, or cock, which sounds better in writing?" xD Ooooh I see what you did there with Bad Touch >u>
You picked up on it? Lol mmkay, I'll change it to 49 shades of red ;P LOLOL you made Izumo sound like such a date rapist, oh my god. Oh, I wrote him forcefully taking her to bed in on purpose >_> You know I want you to take everything out of context. Lmao your questions. "Is it sexy time soon?"
I should have left manhood in there just to listen to you flip out on me for writing it. I'm glad you enjoyed this! After I wrote it and reread it a bunch, it was actually really sad to read in a way. I think you and I were talking about that the other night. Writing this makes me want to have Rayne completely leave Sasuke and go with Izumo because ITS MY STORY AND IDGAF IF THERE'S A TWELVE YEAR AGE DIFFERENCE.

.......You and I have definitely changed each other for the bad. You've made me so, so ranchy.


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