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The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

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Het Romance [1092]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
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Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
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An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1739]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [865]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [291]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1575]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [194]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
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An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
 
 

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Reviews For Team Seventeen

Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/12 - 01:38 pm · For: Pride of the Uchiha
Aww~ :( I feel so bad for Sasuke! It was one thing to be depressed about being compared to Itachi, but now he's competing with a little six-year-old girl for the affection of his father. It makes Sasuke's life seem even sadder T_T Interesting addition of Miyu in this, I kinda liked it even though I felt worse for Sasuke. Keep up the good work with your writing, Batty Onee-chan!

Author's Response: Yes, poor little Sasuke. Can't catch a break, can he? I'm definitely looking forward to writing more of Miyu though. It was the mental image of some of her scenes that convinced me I wanted to write this story. I can't wait 'til I get to show you - even if I think that time's far off atm.


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 21/09/12 - 10:57 pm · For: One Born Every Minute
Battybigsister! Hello! How've things been?
O_o Wow... why is the old lady so mean!?
"the child tried to hurry put its parent."
But GOSH I love this scene when Naruto-OHMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH
HOW COULD YOU END WITH THAT CRUEL CRUEL ENDING!?!? Wah!

Author's Response: Yes, dunno what happened with that typo. The word should have been 'passed', but obviously I messed up. As for why Biwako is so mean... She's a cannon character, so Kishimoto's creation not mine. I hope I did okay with her portrayal. She's just a bit of a sour old lady I guess. You get old ladies like that sometimes: all hard on the outside but with a soft heart underneath. Actually she reminds me of my grandmother... ;0)
And yes, it's because I'm a cruel, cruel person. I got told a lot after this chapter was posted. ;0)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/12 - 09:16 pm · For: One Born Every Minute
Omg, it's a sister?! Well I mean... I guess I should have realized that from the summary... But you did so well with making me think you were just reiterating the scene of Naruto's birth. Very clever, Onee-chan.

Now then... Gah, they didn't even get to name the little girl before Tobi came in T_T If this goes just as the manga, I'm gonna be really sad... I don't want the parents to die and the baby and Naruto to get hurt... Gah...

I really liked this so far, mostly because I'm wondering just where you would be taking this story, if you happen to know, since this was just something to distract yourself. This was a very well-written piece, I really liked it. Well done, Batty Onee-chan.

Author's Response: Of course, I know where this is going ;0) - although I would remind you that this isn't really a story as much a series of loosely connected one-shots. Re-written Naruto scenes mostly. I fear you're going to be sad though. That was the whole scene for the this one, meaning the rest happens pretty much as in the manga - but the good news is that the Yondaime Hokage would never let anything happen to his kids, so nobody's going to hurt them. ;0)


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