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Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/11/12 - 03:22 pm · For: Relapse
Respect his decision? I don't exactly like the sound of that. It doesn't sound too, well, good. Does that mean he'll refuse? How could you just leave it at that? T_T Not fair, Itoko-san. Not fair whatsoever.

I really did enjoy this chapter. Shikamaru and Sai, huh? I wonder how Sai will act now without ever meeting team 7. Oh, and I loved seeing Hayai's weakened state. It shows he is still affected by what happened, and for that I am happy. It just shows he really is human, and it makes me love him more. Sheesh, I don't know who I like more - Gatsuuga or Hayai.

Great chapter, Itoko-san. I loved it.

Author's Response: You'll have to see :P. Yeah, Hazard and I decided that Shika and Sai were best fit for this type of work. Yes Hayai is still affected by this. Who do you like more? That's up for you to decide. Thanks for the review! Glad you liked.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/11/12 - 12:54 pm · For: Relapse
"Hopefully they respect my decision..." It sounds like he's declining o_O Can he do that?! That would mean that there's no story, right?! I'm so confused~

This was an interesting update, I liked seeing how scarred and broken Hayai still was. Things like that never really heal.

Nice work, Shizake-san! I really liked this chapter!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/10/12 - 02:37 pm · For: Bitter Tensions
For some reason I kept imagining Naruto making a shadow clone to leave with his team and then running back. Bet he wishes he had now. Poor Naruto got his behind kicked. I wonder how he's going to take it. Naruto is the most stubborn anime dude I've ever seen. And that's saying something, because I've seen some stubborn dudes. This was an interesting update, and I cannot wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks for the update, and we'll be sure to keep it interesting in the future! This story will be going into a much deeper arc after this, rest assured.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/10/12 - 02:05 pm · For: Catching Up
Oh sarcasm. You gotta love it =P.

Meditation? Interesting. I wonder how this new and very useful skill will work for Naruto...... Yeah, possibly save him from more Sakura-induced brain damage. I'm surprised he caught on so quickly. Then again, this is Naruto.

They have a lead?!? Yeah! The mission may just succeed. Gatsuuga, shush it! They may save Sasuke if they find him and have your help. After all, he hasn't been completely consumed yet. Save him! Man, now I really wanna see how this goes. Great update, Itoko-san.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/12 - 04:43 pm · For: Bitter Tensions
Wha~ So they're not going to see Orochimaru or Sasuke?! But... but... that's just so un-storyline like T_T When Gatsuuga had offered to fight Naruto for the opportunity to go, I thought perhaps Naruto would miraculously win just so we would continue with the original manga / anime plot (even though I know there's a slim chance of him winning against Gatsuuga), but I guess not t.t

Well, since that mission isn't going to happen, I wonder what's going to happen next. Nice work on this you guys.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/12 - 05:53 pm · For: Catching Up
Haha, I like how the first thing Hayai teaches Naruto is meditation :P Quite ironic for our overly exuberant and loud friend.

Oh my gosh, they finally found a lead! I was so worried they wouldn't and this whole mission arc would be ruined, that's awesome that things are continuing now. So excited for some more battles and whatnot :D

Good job on this update, Shizake-san, keep up the awesome work you guys!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/09/12 - 02:38 pm · For: Witchdoctor
Haha. Sakura was sniffed by the dog. The reason I find this funny is I've been dealing with it a lot whenever I go down to my friend's house. I just found it funny she was smelled =P. though it didn't work, which is disappointing see as Gatsuuga worked so hard on that idea.

I'm not sure Gatsuuga teaching Sakura how to make that chakra of hers stronger is a good thing or not. I can see that ending badly if someone doesn't paralyze her before waking her up =P. And Gatsuuga deserves a treat! He's been such a good boy today. Though I doubt he'll get it.....

I wonder if this mission is really as hopeless as you're making it seem. I guess I'll find out next chapter.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/09/12 - 01:07 pm · For: Premonitions
I really liked the way you had it happen a lot like the original version, and yet changed it, too. I am, though, a bit surprised that you didn't have Sakura already heal his wounds even if he had fainted and how fast they arrived at the bridge. Then again, I can't remember how many times they stopped for training or planning.

Overall I really enjoyed it and still really love Hayai!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/09/12 - 01:18 pm · For: A Glass Dream
Gah - three chapters behind T_T. I blame school and something else I'm not mentioning.

Anyway, I love Gatsuuga. He is so sarcastic and scary - I love it! I can't wait to see how he and Hayai interact with team 7. I'm also eager to see how they deal with this mission.

Sheesh. That's one heck of a jutsu Gatsuuga has developed. It actually reminds me a bit of something I thought of before, though I can't remember what.

Great chapter, Hazard-san! Off to read more.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/12 - 07:09 am · For: Witchdoctor
Wow, Gatsuuga actually makes a decent teacher. That surprises me somehow, I didn't think he was patient enough to tolerate anyone. Good for him :D

That's actually quite evil, to have Hayai's dog sniff Sakura and then not have it work T_T I really thought that was gonna go somewhere. Darn...

Well, awesome job on this chapter, Hazard-san. With this seemingly failure of a mission, it makes me wonder if Naruto and Sakura are even gonna see Sasuke. Looking forward to more, keep up the amazing work!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/12 - 11:18 pm · For: Premonitions
I hated this arc in the actual Naruto series because of Sai betraying them and everything. It seriously ticked me off. I like it so much better with Gatsuuga and Hayai there instead. At least they're loyal -_-

Good job on this chapter, Shizake-san! I'm looking forward to seeing how our two main characters react in the rest of this arc. Keep up the good work!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/12 - 05:28 pm · For: A Glass Dream
“ Well that’s what happens when I have spare time and nothing to do, and living around people that constantly piss me off.”

“ Good, now lead the way team, because I don’t remember where Tenshi Bridge is…”

Best lines in the whole chapter :D Both made me chuckle, makes me appreciate Gatsuuga just a little bit more.

I'm really looking forward to this mission, it oughta be interesting with Gatsuuga and Hayai on board instead.

Good job on this chapter, Hazard-san! Keep up the awesome work you guys!

Author's Response: Glad you like the subtle comedy, it's just what pops into my head and seems natural for him to say :p The mission will be very interesting for sure and Shizake will have the next chapter up soon enough!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/08/12 - 07:45 pm · For: Into the Norm
Joining team seven, huh? This sure is an interesting twist. I'm eager to see where this goes. I'm loving Gatsuuga's sarcasm, and it's so nice to see Hayai's PoV again. He's a nice contrast to his partner.

I'm curious - what time line is this in? I mean, of course this is Shippuden. It seems like right after the Gaara Rescue arc. Am I right? Are they taking the places of Sai and Yaamamoto? Because if so, I'm very eager to see their part in the mission. So far the fight was really fun. What more can they do, I wonder.

Great chapter, Itoko-san! I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Yes, that's where we are picking up I do believe, unless Shizake says otherwise. Thanks for the review, Hazard out.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/12 - 08:42 pm · For: Into the Norm
Ooh, Gatsuuga and Hayai join Team 7, huh? That's an interesting twist. I wonder how that will turn out, what with those two coming back into society and all. I'm also curious as to what this mission will be. I'm sure it'll be really epic. The fight was also really well written. Nice job on this chapter, Shizake-san!

Author's Response: Yup! Who knows lol. Thanks for the review :)


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 11:10 am · For: From The Ashes
I forgot how much I loved these two. It's a great start, adding in humor and setting things up. I liked how you gave us a quick explanation of Hayai and Gatsuuga's time and release. And he only killed nine? Come on, if you're going to joke, at least make it realistic. Gatsuuga would have killed at least 15. * rolls eyes at self*. Don't ask - weird review moods come very randomly.

Anyway, again, great start, and I can't wait for Hayai's PoV.

Author's Response: Thanks for the input, and I agree he would have killed more if he wasn't put in solitary :D Glad you like the mild humor, and I'm looking forward to Hayai's P.O.V as well!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/12 - 05:24 pm · For: From The Ashes
Ooh the sequel! If this is anything like the first one, this should be really good. I'm so excited to see how this goes. Off to a really interesting start with Gatsuuga being released from prison and bunking with Hayai. I'm looking forward to more. Nice beginning guys!

Author's Response: Thanks for being our first reviewer! I don't want to spoil anything yet, but if you liked the first one you'll like this!

Author's Response: Thanks for being our first reviewer! I don't want to spoil anything yet, but if you liked the first one you'll like this!


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